Date: 06/10/08 01:47 am Title: Animal Attraction
Haha, that's good. =]
Author's Response: hihi yeah <3
Date: 06/09/08 04:58 pm Title: Animal Attraction
You're definitely welcome. =] That's great, beta's are wonderful aren't they?
Author's Response: they are, me loves them (or, I've only had one, but she definitively rocks my world ;p)
Date: 06/08/08 11:48 pm Title: Animal Attraction
Haha, the last line was awesome.
Ahhh my nose itches.
Okay, better.
Anyway, that was very entertaining, and I didn't see many errors. There were a few apostrophe's missing, like, "he would notice Bills ruffled" and, "wanna play some" and you're missing a comma on the last line, with "have to say you two", but seriously, I'm the only one that cares. I'm picky about that kind of thing, but I'm pretty sure I'm the only one that cares.
I really loved it though.
Author's Response: oh thank you so much. believe me you're not the only one that cares! I've got a lot of comments on my grammar and this was one of my earliest fics so I didn't have a beta, but I do now and she saves me from the errors ,)
Date: 04/14/08 12:57 am Title: Animal Attraction
Hehehe loving geo's nose lmao. Awesome little story
Author's Response: thanks oh-beautiful-username :) made me smile
Date: 03/24/08 09:24 am Title: Animal Attraction
Ooooh, you love me then right?!
I like it!
Could feel Bill's worriedness.
x
Author's Response: haha thanksies :) yes I love you girl
Date: 03/05/08 08:42 am Title: Animal Attraction
ambulance ! ambulanceeeeeeeeee
that was amazing =DDDD
*rolls on the floor*
jesusssssss *________________*
Author's Response: haha thanksies
Date: 02/20/08 01:36 pm Title: Animal Attraction
Hehe
I loled
A lot!
Excellent
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/13/08 11:20 am Title: Animal Attraction
*falls off chair laughing*
*crawls back on and wipes tears away* oh dear...
*looks at the fic again...and starts to laugh again* hahahaha luce you're crazy...
one word ANIMALICIOUS (crossing between animal and delicious lol ^^)
::gives cookies in form of animals::
Author's Response: I'm crazy I know *grins at you* but don't think I'm the only one ;)
Date: 02/06/08 06:02 pm Title: Animal Attraction
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
OH MY GOD!!! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!! I LOVE GEORG...AND WELL I COULD BELIEVE YOU OWN TH BUT DEFINITELY DON'T OWN GEORG...CAUSE HE'S MY PET!!!
BACK TO THE STORY...IT'S THE WEIRDEST IDEA EVER...AND THAT'S WHAT MAKES IT SO GOOD!!!!
Author's Response: haha danke sweety
Date: 02/06/08 04:06 pm Title: Animal Attraction
FUCK! They've been caught!
Author's Response: haha yes they have ;)
Date: 01/17/08 11:10 am Title: Animal Attraction
hehe, GEORG knew!! HE DID NO RITE? NICE WORK!! ^-^
Author's Response: haha THANKS :)
Date: 01/13/08 01:44 am Title: Animal Attraction
HAHAHA
*crying of laughter*
I can so imagine this scene...!
Georg is the funniest LOL
Author's Response: hihi thanks sweety :)
Date: 01/05/08 06:09 am Title: Animal Attraction
hahahaha!
I love that last line!
It was so well ended!
Author's Response: thank you much love for rewieving ***
Date: 01/04/08 02:09 pm Title: Animal Attraction
LOL
that was so funny
Author's Response: thanks, happy you liked it !
Date: 01/04/08 01:50 pm Title: Animal Attraction
LOL
that was so funny
Author's Response: thanks, happy you liked it !
Date: 01/04/08 08:06 am Title: Animal Attraction
Oh! I would have loved to see the faces of the twins after that comment!
Author's Response: me too doll :p
Date: 01/04/08 05:28 am Title: Animal Attraction
What?? That's ALL?! Noooooo D: This would have made a hilarious fic if you added to it!! (not that it wasn't, but you get the picture)Seriously, you should. I would gladly read it.
Author's Response: maybe I will one day, but not at the moment glad you liked it :)
Date: 01/04/08 05:26 am Title: Animal Attraction
ooooooh i like it!^^
Author's Response: happy you did, hope you'll continue your stories soon, they're killing me
Date: 01/04/08 05:09 am Title: Animal Attraction
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment
Date: 01/04/08 04:36 am Title: Animal Attraction
that was hilarious
Author's Response: thanks darling (: