Date: 04/07/12 06:15 am Title: Nine - Revenge
This seems so out of context from the last story I'm really not getting it.
Date: 02/04/11 05:19 pm Title: One - The Pain of Love
aw :( I feel bad for Tom, and the worst part is that Allie is completely clueless about it.
HE KILLED HIS FATHER?!?!
I love this FF
Date: 10/26/09 01:42 pm Title: Ten - Finale
wow, this was even more intense than Masquerade...I loved reading this so much, you have no idea. It was obviously not a happy story, but I loved it all the same for the raw emotion and the way you chose to end it, by killing Derrick and Allie...
*runs off to read Dead Man's Ballet*
Date: 10/26/09 12:17 am Title: Two - Bullshitter
this is quite interesting so far, and i'm really happy i went and read masquerade because at first i started this before reading that and it was a lot more confusing. now i understand so much more :) and i just wanted to tell you that it's downright freaky how similar our tastes in music are...i mean, some of the songs you've mentioned in this and masquerade are new to me, and i listened to and downloaded them because i loved them all, but anyway back to the point: i've realized that we like a lot of the same music. when i read that part about "pieces" by red i just smiled cause i love that song :)
Date: 09/09/09 05:11 pm Title: Ten - Finale
ahhhh. allie's death made me cry (i'm that lame xD) loved it. write more stories, yeah?
Date: 09/08/09 11:29 pm Title: Ten - Finale
OMG! What an intense ending.
Date: 09/08/09 10:32 pm Title: Ten - Finale
All I can say right is DAMN! This shit was fucked up!
Date: 09/06/09 11:30 pm Title: Nine - Revenge
OH MY GOD!!! Tom actually went through with his plan and killed Derrick. I can't believe he did. And for some reason I know Allie is going to tell and he is going toprison for what he did. How could he do that to is best friend.
Date: 09/06/09 10:26 pm Title: Eight - Rooftops
okay right now I dislike Allie and Derrick for the prank they pulled in Tom and how they want him out of their lives but he is not seriously going to kill them is he? I just think it is illogical and just plain stupid. I think if Tom truelly loved Allie he wouldn't do what he is thinking of doing.
Date: 09/05/09 07:56 pm Title: Eight - Rooftops
he can't murder allie! NO. NO. NO.
update soon!
Date: 09/05/09 05:19 pm Title: Eight - Rooftops
Really great story.
Please update soon :)
Date: 09/05/09 11:04 am Title: Eight - Rooftops
No way! What on earth is going with these people, playing pranks of this nature to each other?! Why didn't Allie just tell tom to get out of her life? Why is Tom thinking about murder?!
Date: 08/25/09 03:34 pm Title: Six - Little Pink Lines
D: oh nooooooo.
update soon!
Date: 08/25/09 08:50 am Title: Six - Little Pink Lines
:O!!! WHAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTT TOMI NOOOOOOOOOO!! more please!!!!!!
Date: 08/24/09 11:00 pm Title: Six - Little Pink Lines
what an emotional and intense chapter!
Date: 08/12/09 11:57 pm Title: Four - Sexual Desire
That was intense, you took me on a rollercoaster.
Date: 08/08/09 01:25 pm Title: Three - Babies
D: i love this story. but i hate it how tom's head over heals in love with allie, but he can't have her. 'tis sad :(
keep it up xD
Date: 08/08/09 12:29 pm Title: One - The Pain of Love
Awe, poor Tom. Very sad chapter.
Date: 08/08/09 11:40 am Title: Three - Babies
This was such a sad chapter.
Date: 08/06/09 12:18 pm Title: Two - Bullshitter
update update update!