Date: 08/02/10 06:06 pm Title: VIII
yay tom!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review ^.^
Date: 08/02/10 05:44 pm Title: VIII
ehhh yeh a tad jumpy lol but all the same it was good ^_^
Author's Response: I really need to work on that lol but thank you :)
Date: 08/02/10 05:31 pm Title: VIII
wuvvers it :3
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 08/02/10 03:45 pm Title: VIII
I couldn't help but smile at the last sentence xD Kinda fast moving, but I don't mind :D! I love this story!! :P
Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!!! :D Really happy you love it :)
Date: 08/02/10 03:03 pm Title: VIII
OMG! Please update this now! I freaking love this story its so amazing(:
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much!!! I'll update as soon as possible :)
Date: 08/02/10 02:55 pm Title: VIII
Thank you, whoever you are, who called me a "motherfucking bitch" for giving my opinion. It's not like I killed her story, sorry for offending you anyway.
Since I didn't get a response to my comment but happened to notice you had some sort of a story on your bio I'm going to apologize for offending you as well, which i wasn't aware 'til now. I wasn't planning on any of it.
I was just noting out things I disliked about this story because not many people do that, eh? I didn't certainly mean that I don't like this story, I do, and pretty much loved the last chapter, if I may. And I can sense that you are a passionate writer and all that. So KEEP ON going, I'd love to see where this all is going and really I'm sorry that my comment made you feel bad. Gah, I feel like a bad person. Drama, drama. I should learn to give constructive criticism and you should learn to take criticism as something that'd develope you in any possible way. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for apologizing, it's much appreciated. And I apologize for someone calling you a rude name. I understand it was constructive criticism, its just that someone else had already called my story horrible and I was feeling pretty upset. I'm not the type of person who likes drama so let's put all this behind us :) the last thing I want is to cause a big fight among people on this site that I absolutely love.
Date: 08/02/10 01:10 pm Title: VIII
sweeet! haha more more more
Author's Response: lol thank you!!
Date: 08/02/10 12:20 pm Title: VIII
Great ;D It's not jumpy at all. There are always something happening in this story and I really like that! So keep up the good work :) looking forward to the next chappie xo
Author's Response: Aww thank you I'm so happy you like it :D
Date: 08/02/10 12:18 pm Title: VIII
Vegas?! Awesome! Chris us a mega jerk!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!! :)
Date: 08/02/10 11:48 am Title: VII
holy crap! why must you stop ur chapters at amazing parts? lol
Author's Response: Sorry lol xD thank you for reading!! :D
Date: 08/02/10 03:23 am Title: VII
yay for tom! rescue bill!!! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading :)
Date: 08/02/10 03:19 am Title: VII
ohhmyykaulitz!!! pliss write more i really like this story!! i wanna know what happens next!
Author's Response: I will write more, and the next chapter is already written out, but it needs a little tweaking lol. Thanks for your review :)
Date: 08/01/10 10:09 pm Title: VII
wow ok 1 scene jumpped to the next and ok i think illunderstand some more once the next chapter is up lol
Author's Response: I'm sorry it is a little fast pace and it does jump around a bit, but I guess that's just my style of writing lol. I'll try to work on that, but thanks for sticking with it :)
Date: 08/01/10 10:03 pm Title: VII
Okay I think I know what's going on now!!! I just read that motherfucking bitch annie's comment. WTF! She has no right! No right to say that to you! I'm a writer as well and yes there are some stories on here that are absolute shit but this is not one of them! You have great characterization, excellant rising action, and an original plot that no one has tackled yet! How dare she! Don't listen to her this is great! I not once have been bored by this story! Screw her! Don't let her get you down!
Author's Response: Well, it wasn't her at first that made me upset but the comment she made did add salt to injury and it got me down even more. But I have been thinking about it a lot and I realize that not everybody will like what I write. But I am glad you do! I want to thank you so much for your words and support, that makes me feel one hundred times better :D I will continue to write!! :)
Date: 08/01/10 09:57 pm Title: VII
I saw your message on your bio and just wanted to say... I don't think that you should take that one person's critism so hard. This is an excellant story and I love it. As for moral issues, if you're feeling gulity or bad feel free to message me to talk. I think every writer on the site at one point has experienced it. But keep your chin up and I really hope you continue writing :)
Author's Response: You're completely right, I suppose I was just feeling sorry for myself lol, but what the person said was really mean and it got me thinking that maybe I wasn't so good and I should give up. I don't like disappointing people who do like the things I write and after thinking about it for a while I will be writing again. Thank you so much for your support, it really means a lot to me :)
Date: 08/01/10 07:17 pm Title: VII
YES!! GO TOMI!!
Author's Response: Yeah!! lol thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 08/01/10 06:50 pm Title: VII
Great story, I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 08/01/10 05:02 pm Title: VII
Amazing!!!! I wonder when Tom noticed the bruise.
Author's Response: You'll find out soooon :) thanks for reading.
Date: 08/01/10 04:13 pm Title: VII
this is seriously the most naive story i've read lately. i couldn't even read this chapter til the end cause i pretty much freaked out about how unreal it is. i'm sorry, but you make bill seem like he's some 10 year old who can't stand up for himself which is pretty unreal even though he lost his memory, he can't lose his personality and from what i read in the beginning he pretty much dispised the perveted looks he got, so if he's still afraid of water then he probably should still hate the nasty Chris-behaviour. oh i dunno, i'm really not trying to bitch around, just couldn't hold myself back, which in some ways is probably good because if you make people react that way with your words that must be a good sign eh? lol.
the plot is otherwise real good. only these behavioural problems freaked me out.
Date: 08/01/10 04:03 pm Title: VII
New reader lol! ;D
I totally love this, oh my gosh. Poor Bill, I wish he'd just tell Tom what Chris is doing to him D:
Fucking bastard, I hate him gaah. >_>
More soon, pretty please? :*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and liking it. :)