Date: 08/02/09 12:41 pm Title: II
Chris, you butthole! UGH.
Well, anyway, I can't believe he would just do that D:. But, I'm so happy Tom made an appearance x]
Haha, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Next chapter very soon :D thanks for reading!
Date: 08/02/09 12:04 pm Title: II
omg!! what a fucking douche!!! i want to throw him over board into a pool infested with Sharks and Piranas!!!
but hehe Tomi appears!!!!
Author's Response: Lets all gang up on Chris! thank you for reading and liking it :D
Date: 08/02/09 11:16 am Title: II
I didn't feel it was rushed :)
I'm really enjoying this story. Chris needs to die in the next chapter! What an ass!!
But yay for Tom saving Billa!
More soon? D
Author's Response: A lot more soon =D and I agree, yay Tom! Woo!
Date: 08/02/09 10:00 am Title: II
An update! ^_^
Yay! :D I loveeed this chapter! :D
I hate Chris. ¬_¬
I hope Andreas finds out Chris did it! D:
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading :D
Date: 08/02/09 03:47 am Title: II
0_O
can i kill chris??
Author's Response: Yes, yes you can xD
Date: 08/02/09 02:55 am Title: II
thanks!!! continue!!! continue!!
Author's Response: I will :D
Date: 08/02/09 02:12 am Title: II
I really like it! Maybe a bit rushed, but I definately like it!
Author's Response: I hate rushing things! but I'm very happy you liked it, hopefully the next one will be more put together :)
Date: 08/02/09 02:07 am Title: II
This was perfect! I hate Chris and I can't wait until Bill wakes and fully takes in Tom. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 08/02/09 02:07 am Title: II
The only real suggestion I have for this would have been to make Chris's actions a little more thought out or premeditated. Yes, he was trying to flirt with him and yes Bill was being an idiot, but there should maybe have been more of a struggle between Bill and Chris as far as Chris's motives for doing what he did. Unless you put it in later. Really though it is good and I want to know what happens when Tom gets Bill to shore. I wouldn't mind if Tom saved me from drowning. I think I might just pretend I can't swim so he would. Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion, I love constructive criticism :)
Date: 08/02/09 01:28 am Title: II
Poor Bill! And Bad Chris! I hope somebody will through Chris to the ocean in the end (with the sharks...).
But way to go Tom!
xx
Author's Response: Tomi is always such a hero xD
Date: 08/02/09 01:25 am Title: II
Aw dude I want to read more!!!
Author's Response: More soon :D
Date: 08/02/09 12:53 am Title: II
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Yes Ma'am! *salutes*
Date: 08/01/09 07:53 pm Title: I
Good start, I can't wait to see more =]
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 08/01/09 02:41 am Title: I
I like the beginning. Can't wait for more!
xx
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Date: 08/01/09 02:04 am Title: I
Bad Chris! *frowns*
Author's Response: I know right! D:
Date: 08/01/09 12:41 am Title: I
Oh dear. We don't want that. I like it so far, Bill is adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you kindly =D
Date: 07/31/09 11:52 pm Title: I
Honey, don't say anything about hoping it's good. It's really interesting and fun! And at least you have the guts to put your story up here. Gosh, I'm such a wuss... :(
Author's Response: Aww you're too kind lol. I was nervous to post it, but I'm glad I did! :D
Date: 07/31/09 11:03 pm Title: I
poor poor andreas...i really like this so far...more soon?
Author's Response: thanks, yep, more soon =)
Date: 07/31/09 09:29 pm Title: I
It's awesome thus far. I love how you paint Bill in this. He seems...well, unfortunately for him, a lot like me. Hahahaha. Great thus far, though. I really love it. And Andreas is AWESOME! Hehehe.
Btw. I smiled when you mentioned the little eskimo dog that isn't fixed yet. I have an American Eskimo dog and he does the same thing. Hahaha. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, it means a lot to me. I adore eskimo dogs, they are so cute! :D
Date: 07/31/09 08:48 pm Title: I
thanks!!!!! it was incredible !!! continue!! continue!!
Author's Response: I'll make sure to continue :D