Date: 01/12/13 06:54 am Title: Breakfast
You have to write another chapter! ;)
Date: 12/26/12 07:22 pm Title: Breakfast
Dude, you need to do the next one!
Date: 11/30/12 09:29 am Title: Breakfast
YES YES YES!!! Please continue!!!
Date: 05/26/12 09:18 am Title: Wanting
Tom had become scary and frightening, i don't like the course of the story anymore :/ just like you replied to someone else, i guess most people cant stomach your fics, oh well
Date: 02/19/12 07:53 am Title: Breakfast
of course you should continue this!!
Date: 02/19/12 07:53 am Title: Breakfast
of course you should continue this!!
Date: 02/19/12 07:36 am Title: Flower
i want it to be a deranged fluff. lol
Date: 01/16/12 08:38 am Title: Breakfast
Yes continue. I want to know what happens next, if you end it there then.... I will be very sad:(
Date: 11/13/11 03:09 pm Title: Breakfast
omg continue this please, I know its so evil and everytime I gasp at reading this but I dont care,
Date: 08/28/11 09:25 pm Title: Wanting
Oh God... how old is Bill? What they have is so controversial and yet so adorable simultaneously :/ I guess that comes with incest ^^
Date: 06/15/11 10:50 pm Title: Breakfast
continu!! plez! continue!
Date: 04/07/11 10:14 am Title: Breakfast
this is amaziiiiiiiiiiing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue ,it is great all things u write is!
Date: 01/20/11 05:01 pm Title: Breakfast
I like it, a unique story ^-^ Keep up the good work :D
Date: 12/26/10 01:01 pm Title: Wanting
Merry Christmas!!
CONTINUEEEEE ;-)
Date: 12/23/10 01:51 am Title: Breakfast
OmG !!! Hey Im a Mexican Boy , my name is Jose Carlos really I love your fic its amazing !! Poor Bill , like always hahaha :) please continue your Fic Ich Liebe Dich
Date: 12/13/10 03:52 pm Title: Breakfast
Please continue.
Date: 11/28/10 02:25 am Title: Wanting
Definitely continue. Very unique plot. Too unique and intriguing to give up on.
Date: 11/21/10 11:41 am Title: Breakfast
Yeah, I knew what I was getting myself into, and I really liked first two chapters. In first review I guess I haven't expressed my feelings right - Tom simply drasticaly changed in third chapter. You asked once if people want fluff or Tom forcing Bill into something, so you weren't decided back then... this story would be really good, I mean if you would writing about Tom's obsession with his little, sweet brother. But this is... I wouldn't say anything if you haven't described Tom in first chapters as completely different boy. It's just not the way things work - people don't change so drasticaly in few days. Yes, he is obsessed with his brother, yes he wants him, but this was... I don't know. One day he would do anything for his little brother and the other he's beating him, forcing him to call him "Master" ? It's just not right and I am sorry, but this is just not something I would want to read - you changed your story, at least according to me, into really wrong thing. Sorry.
Author's Response: That's perfectly fine if you don't want to read this anymore, by all means. However now that the poll has been taken on what most readers of this fic want there are is going to be flasbacks and further plotlibe development so it will all make sense. I've decided to take the Poe approach with story so it will make sense in a really twisted way if you do decide to stick with the story. Some people just can't stomach my fics so I understand if you don't want to as well, can't win 'em all
Date: 11/20/10 10:21 am Title: Wanting
Well, it would be nice of you if you'd finish this but... I don't like Tom in here. The idea is just great, but first two chapters he was as sweet as honey and now he's... it's just not right. Sorry, but it's not. In first chapters there was seen that Tom really loves his brother ... now, though? I have a feeling of it, that he's just a jerk. Sorry, but the story loses it's point... :(
Author's Response: Sweet as honey when in the first chapter Tom's narrative tells us about obession with his younger brother? Or when he ends the chapter saying that he desperately wants him? Or how about the title "Sweet Dream or a Beautiful Nightmare? You knew what you were getting into the minute you saw the banner and story warnings...the point is not to like Tom. I appreciate the review but maybe this story isn't your style
Date: 11/19/10 11:19 pm Title: Breakfast
Yes, please continue with this! I've been waiting forever for the next chapter!! please continue!