Date: 09/22/09 11:58 am Title: Flower
thanks for the timeline i was a little lost before but this chapter cleared that up.
Date: 09/22/09 11:38 am Title: Wanting
you really like to write some twisted fics. so is this story take place in the 60s. I am trying to remember when scherly temple was big.
Author's Response: Haha close but this takes place in the 1930-1940s during the Great Depression in England. I realize the pizza may have thrown some off but they did have pizzerias during that era. Historical context won't matter much in this fic so don't worry
Date: 09/14/09 07:29 am Title: Sausage
XD omg "did your sausage get hard?" OMFG i couldnt stop laughing after that. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!
Date: 09/06/09 07:37 am Title: Wanting
hope you update ur story soon ! XD
Date: 08/12/09 05:27 pm Title: Sausage
Wow. That's quite a personality change, isn't it? I'm not sure that I believe that the same Tom who busted his ass for weeks just to buy Bill a toy set, would suddenly turn into this selfish, manipulative person, shamelessly hurting his younger brother...
But, then again, we're only three chapters into this, aren't we? There's quite a bit we don't know yet. And I am very anxious to see how this plays out.
Date: 08/12/09 05:12 am Title: Sausage
Omg... How can Tom be that vicious all of the sudden? Do you think that has gone a bit too fast? No offense, I still like this story but Tom getting all brutal all of the sudden kind of lost my interest. Oh well I hope you update as soon as possible! I'LL BE WAITING!!!!! WOOOOOO!!!
Date: 08/12/09 05:05 am Title: Flower
omg omg omg! This story is making me all jumpy and anxious!!
Date: 08/12/09 04:55 am Title: Wanting
“T-tomi?” Bill whispered as his eyes fluttered closed when I began to message the back of his neck.
“Rawr.” I whispered leaning in until our lips touched chastely.
.... I have to say dude... That was fucking HOT! Man... Duuude... I don't know what to say. I 'm starting to like this story....
Date: 08/09/09 10:10 am Title: Sausage
Oh god:) You know, this chapter was really good, like _really good_ :P I just got goosebumps...I don't know why but I am not sure if I like this part of Tom, I think that I would prefer him to be something between...Really not sure why but I do...But still, good work hun, keep going;)
Date: 08/04/09 12:14 pm Title: Sausage
-cries- can I take Bill-chen away? -sobs-
Date: 08/04/09 12:27 am Title: Sausage
No don't make him sweet I love him just the way he is feel sorry for bill but oh well lol
Date: 08/03/09 11:34 pm Title: Sausage
>_< I don't like this Tom much...can't wait to see what he's like in the next chapter!
Date: 08/02/09 08:31 am Title: Wanting
do a little bit of both
Date: 08/02/09 06:02 am Title: Flower
omg... -smacks Tom- you naughty little!!!! -headdesk-
I'm a pervert.. more?
Date: 08/01/09 08:53 pm Title: Wanting
Can we have a little bit of both?
Date: 08/01/09 08:49 pm Title: Flower
I think you should do a little bit of both
Date: 08/01/09 06:35 pm Title: Wanting
This story is disturbingly fascinating, it's interesting to see what happens next but also sort of like watching a train-wreck happen, you can't look away haha. I don't mean in it in a bad way, btw, just that pedophilia isn't ever a great thing but this is fiction after all!
I'd say I'd prefer fluff because well, who wants to see Bill hurt? Especially a kid Bill. A happy ending would be great (I can't stand sad endings=() but idk how realistic that would be, but well, it's your story=)
It's original & one of those stories that you keep thinking about it for a while, definitely not something that blends in with other fics, so good job there!
I also like your style of writing, it's quirky.
Well, I gotta say I can't wait to see what happens now!
Date: 08/01/09 05:48 pm Title: Flower
just sweet fluff fluff . please a happy ending with tom and billa together . it's all i'm asking for.
Date: 08/01/09 05:47 pm Title: Flower
Really, I would prefer Tom to be little bit naughty...;) Not sweet but just...I don't know...Horny teenage boy? :P