Date: 02/04/10 03:26 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
I loved this one! That was amazing and unexpected. I really thought it was gonna go longer, though. Hence the surprise!
Date: 02/04/10 02:49 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
so well written!!! Amazing, I really enjoyed reading it all today! It would be great if there could be a sequel....
Date: 02/04/10 12:24 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
I never saw this fic until now, and it looked interesting. I loved it!
And are you freaking kidding me? Plenty of fic out there? *snorts* there isn't a lot of GOOD fic out there. Het's taking over THF. Write again and bring slash back? *is hopeful*
Date: 02/04/10 10:56 am Title: the snake and the dagger
I can't believe it's over. The ending felt a bit quick but I think I just have to re-read it in its entirety.
Date: 02/04/10 08:35 am Title: the snake and the dagger
I was upset when I saw that there was only one chapter left. After reading this chapter, I feel much better. You managed to tie everything up brilliantly. I adored this story, from the beginning to the end. The only thing the bothers me now is Bill and Tom situation. Do they stay together, as if nothing has changed? Or will they push back their feelings and simply live as brothers? I kind of get the feeling that they can't not stay together as they were. Their love for each other seems too strong. Just something I'm left wondering about.
Overall, an amazing story. Like, wow. Words can't describe how much I loved this story.
Date: 02/04/10 07:28 am Title: the snake and the dagger
The end came pretty fast, but I loved this story.
I hope your inspiration will come back as well. You really are a talented author :)
Date: 02/03/10 11:31 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Bye bby, we'll miss you.
Date: 02/03/10 10:10 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Uhm... WOW...O__O
I only realized this was the ending when I read your end notes lol..XD It was really a surprise. The whole chapter was quite a surprise.O__O I kind of figured out already that it was Tom who killed Bill's parents, and Simone knows things that will answer Bill's questions. I didn't expect them to be Twins though. So... WOW. Surprise ahahaha..XD It's like dropping a bomb in my head and leaving me... *stares blankly*
Another great fic has ended once again...*___*
I just love your stories and your style of writing... I'll be waiting for your new stories - no matter how long it will take...O___O God bless you!!^^
Date: 02/03/10 09:21 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Amazing! What a great way to end this story. I followed this fic from beginning to end, and even though the twins' relationship ends on a hesitant note, I really enjoyed the build up and resolution. Everything finally came together; the puzzle pieces fell into place.
Date: 02/03/10 08:49 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
I really loved this ending. It took me by surprise, but all the puzzle pieces finally fell into place. I really liked Gustav's role too. I hope you get inspired again, but I know how real life can be. *hugs*
Date: 02/03/10 08:39 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Holy shit that was a mind fuck! Some of it was already figured out but the part of them being brothers and all that was a complete surprise to me! Wonderfully done sweet lucy! I have loved every part of this story and it has been worth all the waiting :) I am very sorry to see that you won't be updating for a while though and really hope that inspiration will return to you as soon as possible, I'll be waiting!
Date: 02/03/10 08:28 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Awww. :') I'm both happy and sad for the ending.. and I'm curious as to what happens to the twins after all this.. but maybe it will never be answered. ;) I do hope you get your inspiration back.. I love your stories so much, and I was so excited when I saw this one updated today. Thank you so much!
Date: 02/03/10 07:59 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
What?? ;__; *cries* That's it? That's the end?? D"X It only seemed like the end of a chapter, not the story. Now Fishie's sad ;__;
And I totally knew it! I knew that Bill and Tom were really brothers and that Simone had loved Bill's father! I was just... missing a couple minor pieces of it lol.
Date: 02/03/10 06:55 pm Title: strangers in the alley
So sad that this is over ;_;
I do feel like it could have been longer, but I still loved the way you ended it! :)
Hope to see more from you soon ^^
Date: 02/03/10 06:09 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
omg!!!!!!!!!! it can`t end like this!!! please continue!!!
poor bill!!!! it was all so shocking!!! also poor tom, he didn`t knew anything...T___T
please continue!!
thanks!!
Date: 02/03/10 05:39 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
this can't be the end! i've waited so long... *wails*
Date: 02/03/10 05:19 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Oh my Lucy. I don't even know what to say at the now surprising end of this one, but please know that it just left me speechless, because I had a feeling Simone knew things, but not like THIS.
I didn't see any of this coming, but I feel like this ending is not the end for them, but I do hope that they can somehow overcome this hurdle and stay together.
And sweetie, I've missed you so and I will be sad not to see your name around here for a bit, but I can understand your reasoning.
I love you, I will miss you and you still take my breath away with your words.
Bravo, my lovely. Just bravo!
Date: 02/03/10 04:47 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
i think i had figured out everything, i even told Rose a couple week ago about the raiting change & how you never write stuff that isn't twc-related xD
but oh lord, I can't believe you ended it there. it's just like...wow
Date: 02/03/10 04:20 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
aaaaaa i like the ending
really
honey,u are a wonderful writer and i can't wait to read more from u...when u'll have time in the future
hugs
Date: 02/03/10 04:20 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Good plot, this fic really had a story behind and that's great. you probably always imagined the end like this but I can't help but feel like this needed a epilogue at least, the end seems a little rushed.