Date: 08/06/09 11:08 am Title: invisible shackles
yeah i loved it
Tom seems so dangerous so misterious...i like that
but i still don't get it
is he a guard there?
and why Bill is kidnapped? for money i guess
Author's Response: lol, Tom is indeed dangerous and mysterious, you've got that right! as for him being a guard...not quite, but I guess that's one way of putting it ,) good guess by the way, that Bill is kidnapped for money
Date: 08/06/09 10:49 am Title: invisible shackles
I can't really figure out what Tom is yet but he seems exciting enough though ;) And apparently Bill thinks so too :) The end of this chapter was my favourite part and had me reading as fast as I could and I was so disappointed when Chapter Notes came up and I went, NO not yet!
Can't wait for next chapter. I hope we'll see more scenes with Bill and Tom ;) Love, Susanne
Author's Response: lol, whatever he is, he's exciting? that's good ^^ aw, and I'm sorry for the shortness of the scene, but so glad you liked it that much ,) I'll make up for it, promise! next chapter actually doesn't have Tom in it at all, I think oO which is weird, since it's me writing. But there will be more of them...interacting later ^^ much love
Date: 08/06/09 10:33 am Title: invisible shackles
You promise? Because his introduction made me kinda uncomfortable. (Don't mind me, I've just been reading loads of bad dub-con fics and now I'm paranoid.) I do wonder why Bill is in a palace, and why he was dreaming about his grandmother. Gustav seems nice enough, though. Great update! :)
Author's Response: I know, I know, writing Tom as an actual rapist would not be fun, that's why I said that in the end notes, because I know how he appares to be in that scene. But that's not how he is at all, promise! he will not attempt to rape Bill in this fic at all (but persuasion and seduction is another thing entirely), promise! ha, you're actually the first person to mention the dream ^^ and the dream is actually really, really important ,p thank you Beccs, love ya for it <3
Date: 08/06/09 10:04 am Title: invisible shackles
Wow, Tom like, freakin' scared me! o__o Wasn't only Bill who got the shivers! That is some damn good writing! Keep on :D
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you ^^ this made me smile so bad!
Date: 08/06/09 09:48 am Title: invisible shackles
TOM! Wow, that's all I can say really. I'm a little confused though but that might be due to lack of sleep, but did Tom jump to the balcony and then off the balcony like a ninja? Or did he walk through the door? Sorry, that's probably the stupidest question ever. Anyway, this chapter was great and the setting sounds lush even though Bill has been kidnapped, can't wait till next Thursday xD
Author's Response: lol ^^ Tom did indeed jump to the balcony and then leave the same way, yes ,p and that is not a stupid question. Looking back on it, I could probably have written that clearer! lol, I kinda got carried away describing the palace and everything, not really thinking about how Bill would probably not care how beautiful it is, he's been kidnapped ,p thank you so much for this review <3 you made me smile!
Date: 08/06/09 09:30 am Title: invisible shackles
I like Tom as a ninja! Makes a change from the generic "Gangster!Tom" :) Although I'm still curious as to why Bill's been captured... hmm. Gah, Thursday seems so far away...
Author's Response: as much as I do love gangsterTom, it is liberating to be able to write him wearing something besides denims and a t-shirt ,p Thursday is here, love, hope you'll like what I'm posting ,) thank you for this <3
Date: 08/06/09 09:02 am Title: invisible shackles
Woah. I dunno what to say. o.o
But uhm, why did they kidnap him in the first place?? I NEED to know. :D
And ugh. UPDATE BEFORE NEXT THURSDAY! I can't wait that long... I just love it so much already. *sobs*
Author's Response: lol, you will get to know all the reasons for why he's been kidnapped later on, promise ,) and although it does make me smile like hell hearing you say that, I can't update before Thursday. If I don't drag it out, I'm gonna kill my beta ,p
Date: 08/03/09 05:09 am Title: strangers in the alley
Hello!
Good to see a story from you again.Eventhough I didn't read all your stories,I've read most of them and made sure to leave one or two reviews(except for winter kisses,the first story i could follow til the begining)
I have to tell you this story intrigues me so much and you are a very talented author so I'm wondering what's hidden in your sleeve this time.
For one, I am currently in India.And I feel like you were discribing my hotel just now lol!The brick of wall abd stuff,the fan lol.I look around me now and I nod to myself.Yep, you've been sneaking in my hotel just now lol!I am in Mumbai since the last week of June but I moved around a lot.Next weekend,New Dehli.Be confident that this first chapter's description were all very realistic.Have you been here before?The old lady with the necklace, lol I have those everyday.Except it's not always too pleasant because they are SEVERAL people crowding around you shoving their products and jewelery at you saying all "Yes Ma'am! Yes Ma'am! pretty!pretty" or "You want?You want Ma'am?" It's quite impossible to progress normally at the market.The best thing is to have a native with you,because they won't hesitate to shout at the people to tell them to back off. Right then,I thought I understood the boys of Tokio Hotel and celebrities in general surrounded by a crowd.
So far,I could think about one or two places everytime you mentioned something lol!I have the perfect scenery and image in my mind.Even the dancers.The guys who do some demonstration of talent are the most impressive though.Gosh,I swear I feared for their life when they played with those sharp items O_O
Back on this fic,it's a very good start.You first introduced Bill,our hero *_*,I think he is going to be proven wrong with his beliefs then?I wonder what those people wanted of him.Will their curse him O_O?Can't help but wonder...Just looking at the banner and "paranormal" before reading this and at least we have a hint.But now,everything's still a mystery.I wonder what happened to Andreas(btw,his description reminded me SO much of my cousin.In my mind I was like,D.You should read this,this is you she's writing about lol.He's exactly like that ,if not worse.)
Blah.I keep blablating I should stop before you snore reading this lol! Can't wait to read more *_*
Author's Response: lol, believe me, some of my earlier stories I just want to forget exist ,p it actually makes me comforted that you haven't read them all ^^ you have no idea how much it makes me smile to hear that this story intrigues you, that's all I ever wanted out of the first chapter ,) and so jealous of you being in India, I wanna go there some day, too! It's so cool that my descriptions are pretty much accurate (seeing as they're completely based on pictures and what I would imagine India look like). You're so lucky to be moving around in India, you must experience so much! I've been in markets like this in Spain and Greece, and I imagine they're much the same thing: chaos ,p people who swallow swords and fire and such? yeah...freaks me out oO I'm always terrified they'll make a mistake or something. And whoever comes up with those things? "hey, why don't we try to stuff this knife down out throat?" yeah, good idea -.- pretty impressive though, I must admit ,p this story definitely focuses mostly on Bill and his 'journey'. Oh lol, if you manage to guess why the "paranormal" is listed on this fic...I'm gonna accuse you for reading minds, because it is so far out ,p and lol about your cousin xD Thank you so much for the long review, you made me smile a lot ^^ hope you will like what I post next for this!
Date: 07/31/09 08:46 pm Title: strangers in the alley
I think at this point it's safe to clarify that there isn't anything you write that I won't instantly adore and want more of. Darling, they can be homeless on the street, beggars, and I would still read it if you wrote it.
LOVELY to see a lucy fic again!!! <33333
Need to know what's happening with Bill omg!!!
Author's Response: lol, girl, you make me smile so bad xD I'm guessing that when you wrote 'homeless on the street, beggars' the wheels began turning in your head for a new plot? ,p I'm gonna read your fics soon, and review, promise! just need to get everything in place (school starts soon -.-) much, much love <3
Date: 07/31/09 03:45 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Its nice
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/31/09 03:04 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Oh!!! I liked this. A good setting, a good intro: I'm looking forward to reading more =]
Author's Response: thank you so much, I really appreciate this! hope you like what I post next ^^
Date: 07/31/09 01:10 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Oh my, that is SO exciting!! I could actually feel my heart pound hard, and it was allmost racing! You have to update soon or I'm going to go bonkers!
Author's Response: that is one of the biggest compliments I've ever received ^^ I love it when I'm able to move people like that, thank you so much for telling me! I really hope this story won't disappoint!
Date: 07/31/09 11:59 am Title: strangers in the alley
LUCY!! *grins*
You're back. I was only talking about you the other day and wondering when you'd be back with another epic fic :)
I would never in a million years have guessed at this plot! Everyone knows I can't bear Bill paired with anyone other than Tom, lol. But seeing as it's you I'll trust it will be ok :)
I'm already sooo excited about this! India is such an amazing place to set a fic because it's beautiful but mysterious and dangerous too. I'm so glad it's you writing this, because it's full of potential, and I know you will do it justice.
Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: lol, just seeing your name here made me grin like mad ^^ don't know if this one will be epic, but I do hope you'll enjoy it! the entire plot for this story came to me in one night, it was crazy xD and you know me, I never write the twins serious with anyone but each other, trust me ,) and you got exactly why I placed it in India: mysterious and dangerous! really hope the rest of the fic won't dissapoint! much love <3
Date: 07/31/09 04:13 am Title: strangers in the alley
It is worth it, and again there is suspense! I await each Thursday's updates, now.
I love that it's taking place in India. Makes me wonder how he's gonna meet Tom.
Author's Response: yay for the suspence, glad you feel I pulled it off! Well, he might meet Tom very soon ,p thank you so much for this <3
Date: 07/31/09 12:58 am Title: strangers in the alley
I want more, being a naturally spoiled girl, and I want it now, being a natually fast pased person.:).
Author's Response: lol, well, I'm posting today, hope you'll like what I post ,)
Date: 07/31/09 12:11 am Title: strangers in the alley
Everytime I read something new from you, I'm amazed by how good you are. I think this looks like a very promising story and I'm eager to see where you take this. I can't see any reason in the world to be nervous, love. Keep writing and we'll keep reading :) *hugs*
Author's Response: You make me blush, girl. You have no idea how much I hope you'll like how this all turns out. I'm scared some of it may be a little childish, but we'll see when I get there. I have every reason in the world to be nervous xD all the time ,p much love, hope you're all doing well <3
Date: 07/30/09 10:19 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Hi Luce,
Do you have any idea how much I have missed you and your stories? When I found out there'll be a new story from you, I just couldn't wait. At the moment it's 5am and I have to leave for work soon but I just had to come to read this first ;)
And it sounds interesting! It sounds good that it's from Bill's point of view. I like the first chapter - well, Andi... You know ;) I don't have to tell you anything about your writing but the hole chapter is promising for a good story.
Who is Tom in this story and why they took Bill? Can't wait to find out!
Luv ya!
xx
Author's Response: Liz <3 it's so good to hear from you again ^^ I really, really hope you'll like this story, it's so fun to write it. lol, and yeah, Andi ,p your questions will be answered within the next few chapters ^^ I've missed you, darling. Much love <3
Date: 07/30/09 06:58 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Very good! I just came back from a vacation in India, and your vivid description takes me back again :)
I absolutely love the way you write your stories and this one seems really interesting, I really cannot wait to read more, every story I read of yours is like unwrapping a present, hehe.
Author's Response: lol, seriously? my description takes you back? that is so cool, seeing as I've never been in India ,) you made me smile so much with this review, thank you so, so much! hope what's inside the wrapping turns out to be what you wished for ,p
Date: 07/30/09 06:36 pm Title: strangers in the alley
You know you are one of my favorite writers that this site has seen and I was so excited to see you had posted a new story. It's got a great start and the trip to India thing was neat. I would love to go there one day and to see their culture. I'm hooked already (:
Author's Response: ^^ you just made me smile so much, thank you! I would love to go to India, too, it's such an interesting country. Really hope you'll like how this all turns out. love
Date: 07/30/09 06:35 pm Title: strangers in the alley
I'm so glad you're posting this now! I swear I will get my beta ass in gear.
I love this story, Luce, and I love you, too. I'm so glad you're back.
Author's Response: lol, your beta ass is fine the way it is ,) you know how much it means to me that you love this story? because it's a lot! your opinion is the most important to me, no question about it!