Date: 08/14/09 10:36 am Title: a dark corridor
I wonder if Tom knows he's Bill Brother ("Simone" name, twincest wanrning, it seems so, also by gustav's reaction to Bill's descripiton of the wannabe-ninja I'm sure Tom has a different status, maybe that being to be Simone's son)
I have to say I love sexual tension, I even felt it in his chapter and Tom was not even there LOL xD
Author's Response: lol, I love it when people guess about my stories ^^ of course, I cannot tell you if they're brothers or not, but with the twincest warning I guess it's pretty obvious ,p happy you noticed Gustav's reaction! sexual tension is the best, you don't know how happy that comment made me ^^ thank you so much for reviewing me, means so much!
Date: 08/14/09 08:06 am Title: a dark corridor
I love this chapter, as always, no question about it, and Simone seems nice enough, but I can't get passed that they kidnapped him. I mean, if it was me, sure, I'd love to become one of those ninja things (heh), but only if they'd asked, you know, like civilized people. Had they kidnapped me I'd told them to go screw themselves. I suppose I'm just uncomfortable of non-con in any form. But whatever, you know, it's lovely anyway!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter despite the massive amount of information ,p I get what you're saying about being against any non-con, I am, too. But I've really wanted to explore this for so long, because even though I detest being controlled, I can't help but feel that it would be much easier leaving home and everything behind to start a life somewhere else if someone forced me to do it. And maybe Bill, deep down, wishes for that, like most of us wish to be somewhere else, living a totally different life, from time to time.
Date: 08/14/09 02:30 am Title: a dark corridor
omg that's scary
she has no eyes....
i hope that Tom will be around more often *cough*
Author's Response: The eyes were actually milky white when I first started writing this story, but as I wrote it, I changed it to them not existing at all. lol, and yes, it is pretty scary! as for Tom...you'll soon find out ,) hugs <3
Date: 08/13/09 08:52 pm Title: a dark corridor
I really really want to know what's going to F-word on.
Author's Response: lol, well, it won't be revealed any time soon, but I think you already guessed that ,p
Date: 08/13/09 08:34 pm Title: a dark corridor
Ok, not a harem, but Tom is there and he so wanted Bill. HA!
And I'm guessing Simone is Bill's mother? Hence why he was born to be one of them?
Author's Response: lol, you're impossible (and I love you for it!) ^^ ah, so you caught the 'born to be one of them' thing, I was wondering if anyone would ,p
Date: 08/13/09 08:02 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Oh god, don't even go there with me, cause I may just write that.
Very very soon.
As in, right now soon.
Author's Response: Do. It. Now.
Date: 08/13/09 06:42 pm Title: a dark corridor
First he gets kidnapped, then his kidnapper wants him to become Catwoman
THAT. MADE. MY. DAY x'D
i love u so much right now xD
Author's Response: LOL I knew that would please you xD remember I was supposed to write Catwoman!Bill once? this is as close as I'm getting, but I think it's pretty damn close ,p
Date: 08/13/09 06:35 pm Title: a dark corridor
Finally an answer! A slightly confusing answer, but an answer nevertheless. I'm still curious as to how they know about Bill, and the whole bloodline story behind it, though. And about Tom. But I'll be able to wait through some more chapters to find out... I think :p
Author's Response: confusing as in I explained it confusingly, or confusing as in you need more information? ooh, the blodline story will be revealed with time, glad you caught that ^^ thank you so much for this <3
Date: 08/13/09 05:51 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Okies babe!
TELL ME YOU SAW NEW PICS OF BILL'S NIPPLE PIERCING? BECAUSE MY BRAIN HAS DIED.
Author's Response: that boy is trying to kill us! (can you just imagine a certain someone licking that piercing? his lip ring sliding up next to it?)
Date: 08/13/09 05:47 pm Title: strangers in the alley
Read my fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic! *begs*
Author's Response: I am going to, I promise! but tonight my parents took me and my sister on a drive that took freaking five hours there and back and tomorrow I have a friend coming over and this weekend I'm looking after some horses with another friend and then school starts on monday and...aaaa, where did my vacation go? but I am going to read your fics! you have my word!
Date: 08/13/09 01:05 pm Title: strangers in the alley
DAMN! I was really hoping for that!
Author's Response: LOL ,p of course you were
Date: 08/08/09 01:57 am Title: invisible shackles
Huh. (This is the good I'm-pondering-your-characters huh.) I was definitely not expecting that and I'm possibly more curious now than I was last chapter.
Author's Response: lol, glad it was the good huh ,) so happy you're curious. Hope you like what comes next!
Date: 08/07/09 01:46 am Title: invisible shackles
Yummy yummy. You see, we can't get enough of the tom ninja and captive bill action. Need more.
Author's Response: lol ,p there will be more ,p hopefully something that will satisfy ^^ thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/06/09 07:00 pm Title: invisible shackles
I love me sneaky ninjas with yummy erections jumping out at me in strange places.
Well, only if I'm Bill.
And said ninja is Tom, lol.
IS HE BEING KEPT IN A HAREM?! XD
Author's Response: me, too! xD and no, he's not being kept in a harem ,p lol
Date: 08/06/09 04:04 pm Title: invisible shackles
The whole time I thought it was Tom who Bill met first and then like: "I'm Gustav." and I was like WHAT!? XD *scrolls back* I really thought it was Tom he was dealing with there XD
But hey, I like THIS Tom better than the one he would've been had he been the one Bill first met *grins* Don't get me wrong, I love tender and caring Tom but oh hell, this fierce one was SO HOT *wiggles eyebrows*
Keep the goodness coming! :D
Author's Response: oh lol, sorry about the confusion at first, I guess I could have made that clear earlier that it was Gustav ,p lol, very happy you like the Tom though ,p and who knows, maybe he'll turn out to be tender and caring as well ,) thanks darling
Date: 08/06/09 02:55 pm Title: invisible shackles
ahah never knew that ninjas wannabes could be hot xD but u had to prove me wrong xD
Author's Response: ah, my little vampire ^^ oh yes, ninja wannabes can be hot, and hopefully, they're about to get hotter ,p
Date: 08/06/09 02:42 pm Title: invisible shackles
New favorite line of a story, new favorite. The last line is pure BRILLIANCE. More, soon, please?
Author's Response: seriously? thank you so much ^^ I'm posting more right now, as soon as I'm done responding to reviews!
Date: 08/06/09 12:46 pm Title: invisible shackles
ummm *_________*
Author's Response: lol, that's good, right? ,)
Date: 08/06/09 12:09 pm Title: invisible shackles
“…I’ll take that pretty little body of yours and you’ll be begging me for more than mercy before I’m done with you.”
Oh yes! Please Bill, try to escape again! ;)
And Tom is back in the building! And I like him already, even if he is puttinhg up a show ;) And Gustav seems to be a nice guy, I liked him. Tom seem to be passionate, am I right? I reaaaally can't wait for the fluff and smut... ;)
Any quesses? Not really, maybe we will know more about Bill's past, Tom and why he is there?
A freakin’ ninja wannabe - LOL
xx
Author's Response: lol, naughty Liz ,p but yes, it would be rather amusing to see what would happen if Bill tried to escape again ,) and oh hell yes, Tom is indeed passionate! you will definitly get to know more about Bill's past, but it might be later in the chapters. Why he is there will hopefully get clearer in the next one. Thank you so much for this, girl, you know what it means to me to have reviewers like you ^^ much love
Date: 08/06/09 12:01 pm Title: invisible shackles
I am curious as hell for the next chapter, to find out where exactly Bill has been taken and why. And Tom makes one hot, cocky wannabe-ninja ;) LOVE the passion that's already sparking between them.
Author's Response: hopefully, some of that will be answered in the next chapter, but it'll take me some time to explain it all ,p so happy there is passion ^^ thanks, darling <3