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Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 04:05 pm Title: dangerous temptation

Wow. I liked this chapter. ^_^

Author's Response: that made me smile ^^ thanks

Reviewer: daphne_always Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 03:41 pm Title: dangerous temptation

I LOVE IT!!! so awesome)

Author's Response: thank you ^^ glad you did!

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 03:22 pm Title: dangerous temptation

I just realised I never did write a review for the last chapter. Sorry about that.

But this one, I liked it. I missed Tom, especially in the last chapter and you really did bring him back! That was so hot, you really know how to write. If it was now this hot, I can't wait when they really take their clother off ;) Yes, this chapter made it all worth it ;)

I'm very curious to know what'll happen. I have a feeling that they are brothers, but how will Bill react when he finds out.

Very very good. I love the relationship between Bill and Tom at the moment - so hot and mysterious.

xx

Author's Response: No problem darling ,) lol, I'm so happy you liked the biting scene, it was so much fun to write it ^^ as for their clothes coming off ,p I'm not gonna promise anything, but that might happen very, very soon. As always, love your guesses ^^ hope you'll enjoy what comes next! much love <3

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 02:49 pm Title: strangers in the alley

SO, let's fix it now, cause Bill totally needs a new boyfriend!

Author's Response: lol, indeed he does ,p

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/09 06:56 pm Title: bloody news

Oh my!

Plot thickens and Tom isn't even in it! Sneaky ninja. :PPP

However, he didn't stray far from someone's mind! *smirks*

BOO HISS on Andreas. EXTREME FAIL on his part. >:{



Author's Response: I guess you could say Tom is present in the form of him being on Bill's mind aaaaall the time ,p and yes, boo on Andreas -.- major boyfriend fail!

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 08:56 pm Title: bloody news

I still love this x]

But I want more Tom! Dx

lol, much love =]

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you do ^^ and there will be more Tom, very soon ,)

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 04:02 pm Title: bloody news

wow so they like blood... so wars with the chick that kidnapped bill does she like him or something... and wat happend to tom

Author's Response: well, you kind of answered your own question ,p they like blood...Bill gets pushy girl sniffing his neck ,) thank you for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 10:35 am Title: bloody news

*gives some cookies*
i really like this story, update soon luce? ^^
missed your stories

Author's Response: OO kitten? my cookie monster? babe? *possible heart failure and loss of breath* missed you *munches cookies desperately* I've been eating vegetables for what seems like centuries :( das not good! thank you, thank you, thank you for reviewing! (and for cookies ^^)

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 12:21 am Title: bloody news

Well that was a VERY unexpected addition to the story.

Author's Response: and a good one I hope ,p maybe I'll get some reaction to it after this next chapter I'm posting?

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 04:35 pm Title: bloody news

smokin shizzle *.* this is going deeper and deeper than I've even imagined! whee, can't wait 4 da next update :D

Author's Response: and deeper it will go (am I the only one who thinks that sounded totally dirty? oO) hope you'll like what happens next ^^

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 03:27 pm Title: a choice

ieeeeek seems there's a peeping Tom! xD

Gosh, this story is so nice 2 read^_^

Author's Response: a peeping Tom indeed ,p thank you, love <3

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 02:28 pm Title: visitor at night

Gosh, that nightmare, makes me wonder what happened in the past giving him them.

“Where do you belong, Bill?” This is my fav part! Has so much meaning!

hmmm, getting kidnapped and being watched over by a sexy ninja doesn't seem 2 bad -nods-

Author's Response: ooh, yes, Bill's past is a big point to this story, it'll be revealed over time! I'm really glad you liked it, and your reviews always help me see what parts of my story are better than others ^^ and I would so not mind getting kidnapped by sexy ninjas ,p

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 01:49 pm Title: a dark corridor

Ninjas :D Are so cool! *ignores Bill* I DO wanna become a Ajhin!!! Pick meee ohh, ohh, meee! xD

Lolz, ignore me will ya?

I wonder why Gusti was so surprised when Bill described Tom.

Author's Response: that's totally why I came up with this story xD because I wanted to become a ninja when I was little!

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 10:41 am Title: invisible shackles

"A freakin’ ninja wannabe with a hard-on for Bill and lust filled, blazing eyes is more than passionate enough!"

Think so too -nods-

Interesting story :D

Author's Response: hihi ^^ glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sheerac50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 09:25 am Title: a choice

A naked, oil slicked Bill o_o Are you trying to kill me here?! lol. That part was my absolute favourite, no explanations necessary ;) I very much approve of the peeping Tom too :) much love to you!

Author's Response: can you believe the hard time I had writing that scene, trying to keep the images out of my head oO thinking about you, darling <3

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 01:56 am Title: bloody news

I love how Bill is starting to feel at home there and then how that is shattered when he hears of Andreas and then how it sort os stabilizes again. It is his home, he doesnt question that anymore. But ts sad that he feels so alone. I like that we got to know more about them, and I lile that they are sort of like vampires ^^
You're the best Lucy!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you caught onto the feelings inside Bill that I wanted to communicate with this chapter ^^ because you're entirely right! Bill's able to accept Bech Alchim as his home as he loses connection to the outside worlds, for example Andreas! glad you like them as vampire-ish ,p that's gonna play a part in the story! much love for you em, you know how much you're appreciated <3

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 08:53 pm Title: bloody news

woah, curve ball.

Author's Response: good ball or bad ball? thanks for review ^^

Reviewer: midnightskeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 07:36 pm Title: bloody news

vampire ninjas? really? i do believe this story is officially made of awesome. though, for the record, i really don't like this mariah chick.

Author's Response: lol, vampire ninjas is pretty sweet, I think (and it might even get better ,p) I'm not too fond of mariah either, but she's really not that bad, just a little spoiled, I think ,) thanks for reviewing, means a lot to me! love

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/09 02:22 am Title: a choice

Oh Tom Tom Tom... Wonder why he has been acting weird past few days (I'm sure they were talking about him) and spying on Bill? Bad boy ;)

Now we know more about Ajhin.

“You were misjudged as a child.” Her voice is sad.

Sounds like what I thought happened.

Today another chapter! Can't wait! :)

xx

Author's Response: liz ^^ I'm so happy you're following this story, it's always nice to see familiar names in the reviews! your guess was very good, and things might become close to what you guessed ,) thanks, love <3

Reviewer: _sleepwalker_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 01:45 pm Title: a choice

Tom is such a pervert. I love it.

Author's Response: lol, good ,p

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