Date: 09/17/11 12:21 pm Title: dangerous temptation
- Tom is coming back. He seems to have a high status in Ajhin's hierarchy. He comes back from Paris....Will we know what he has done there?
It is a bit ironic that Bill shared important moments with him without really knowing who Tom is. Georg and Gustav mock him for it. They seem to know something happened between the two, but I guess they don't really know what it was.
So Tom is Simone's son....It explains his position. Is the leader's title that Simone has a inheritance, and will Tom be leader one day??
- Georg is a bit strange with Bill, but it's since their first encounter. I still have the impression everybody hits on Bill. Is it just an impression or am I right about it? Bill seems to have a unconscious attractiveness.
- Here is the first real encounter between Tom and Bill, we had to wait until chapter 7 for it to happen.
Bill had already a weird crush on Tom and it gets stronger now that he finally sees Tom's face. Tom has a strange effect on Bill, but it's apparently mutual. Even if Bill can't hide it as well as Tom. What will happen next between those two, whatever it is, will be strong and fierce. It can't be otherwise, their relation will always be marked by passion. Bill doesn't know why he's attracted towards Tom and it's a bit disturbing but he's more attracted because of it too.
- What is this argument between Tom and Georg about ? I thought they were best friends. Tom seems to want Bill in a way Georg and Gustav disapprove....Tom is so cocky and somewhat a spoiled child, using his mother to get what he wants, it's unfair.
- I didn't expect Bill to become close to Annabelle in this way. But I see it's more a fraternal kiss than anything else. I totally understand Bill, at this instant, Annabelle appears so frail and defenseless. Maybe it's what Bill needs; someone to protect and love in a way that isn't sexual.
Their kiss was so sad. But Annabelle is a bit sad herself; despite her love for Bech Alchim, she misses a lot of things because of it and her duties. Being an Ajhin, or leaving in Bech Alchim is not always so great after all.
But then....there is a ceremony to become an Ajhin. What is it? When will Bill's one happen? I'm very curious about it.
- Oh Naughty Bill. Eavesdroping like that...
Tom and Simone's relationship is a bit strange. Tom is using his mother affection to gain what he wants. He seems to have the upper hand in this relation, but has he really or is Simone just humor her capricious child?
Anyway, Tom is determined but mostly arrogant and full of himself. And despite all this attitude, Bill can't help but be attracted to Tom. It strengthens my hypothesis there is a strange but strong link between those two.
Simone wants them to be friends, but nothing more. Why does she insist so much that Tom only bites Bill and nothing more? Even if he promises, I'm sure Tom will break his word, he won't be able to resist. And I'm sure Bill won't either. They never will be friends, the way they met, their attraction for each other..... They can't fight against it even if Bill is torn and confused by Tom and his own reactions.
- So the bite is an obligation to become a Ajhin but Bill has still the choice to refuse it....This choice seems a bit questionable according to me. Bill's mind and body have already chosen.
The way Tom talks about their third “encounter” in the bathroom could have slowed Bill down, but once more when they are together, all is full of erotism, it's so hot that Bill can't help but succomb. He ties to resist but his mind and his body want it, almost need it.
- Tom's tattoo....is it a mark that he is trully a Ajhin? Is there a reason for the design?
- Tom seems to read Bill so well. It's like he has always known him, better than Bill knows himself. It's a symbiosis between them, body and soul. A mere touch is stronger than anything Bill has known before, the bite more powerful than a orgasm....What is this vision? A memory but how and why this one???? Did Tom have one vision too? The same one than Bill?
- Tom could have gone further, Bill wanted it after all, but he's not ready yet....And Tom respects his choice. It's a tad unusual for Tom to step back...But do sex need to be willing too? Like giving one's blood?
Bill is not ready yet...but he still wants Tom to come back, and seems eager and desperate for it. I'm pretty sure, the next time won't be so chaste....Bill has only postoned it but it surely will happen.
Will it be only sex or will feelings quickly grow between them? Wait and see.
Date: 09/17/11 11:57 am Title: bloody news
Hi
I don't why I never read the end of this wonderful story almost two years ago....But I was searching something to read and found it again...So I read the first chapters to get back in, and now let's tell you what I thought about the new chapters I discovered.
- Bill slowly get used to his new condition, the place and the people are no longer strange for him. Even if he has his preferences.
- His body hurts from his training, all he seems to have left are his soul and mind, but they hurt too from his thoughts. Bill always think too much, asks to many questions even to himself. But it's not always the good ones. He's not losing himself, maybe he's just discovering himself...
- Kirikh is a very interesting way of fighting, It suits Ajhin very well. It's very beautiful, like a dance but Bill learn to not forget it's lethal. Every rose, even the most beautiful, has thorns.
- Georg is a good coach. What he made Bill do prepared him unknowingly. Bill thought he can't do it but he surprised himself . He learnt without really knowing it. Bill then realise that he maybe will trully be able to be an Ajhin..
- Oh, the dancer is back. She must be thankful that Bill doesn't hold a grudge against her. But he has already gained so much since h'es here that it overpowers his previous anger.
- Mariah becomes soon close to Bill, but she seems to have an ulterior motive and to hit on Bill. Could he be ok with that? We know 'he loves' Andreas but is he bisexual? He doesn't seem to mind a bit of flirt with a woman.
But Mariah says the wrong thing to Bill, attacking Andreas and Bill's feelings towards him was a bad move. But is Bill really angry against her? Or is he angry against himself for not thinking more about his boyfriend and his grandmother? Even if he acclimates to Bech Alchim, I think he has not totaly distanced himslef from his past. Bill wants so bad to belong somewhere, but for now he belongs nowhere. That's what Mariah reminded him and tha's why he's angry against her.
And so it's the end of a potential friendship before it has truly begun.
But the way Mariah acted....it's so strange and disturbing. Was she really going to bite him? It's a bit twisted. Bill is uneasy and I must confess I'm too.
- Everybody seems to hit on Bill. It's funny but strange. Is it just his natural charm or is he really special for a reason he's not aware of yet?
- I expected to see Tom appear. He is always here when Bill isn't alright and I was surprised he didn't come after this disturbing encounter with Mariah and mostly after what Bill found out about himself.
It's the end of something for Bill. He's now aware his previous life is definitively over. Does it mean he now trully belongs to Bech Alchim? Not yet! Bill has still a long road ahead of him.
- Kamino, it's another side of the training to become a Ajhin. It's different from Kirikh, but I prefer this side. It fits more Bill, according to me. Kirikh is about killing, and Bill is not a killer. And Kamino allows me to see Gustav. But the latter dosen't really answer about this possible biting thing.....Why do Ajhin always make so much secrets? It's very infuriating.
- Simone gave the answer...So it's true: Ajhin are vampires. I really was surprised. I could have guessed it from the title, but I thought 'the bloody news' was more about Andreas and Bill's grand-mother
So Ajhin have urges, stronger urges than humans. Is it why everybody hit on Bill?
And the blood, will Bill sooner or later give in on it? He is not ready at this moment, but maybe it will come.
Does giving your blood to someone make you special for this person? Does it create a link with the one who bite you? Will such a link be created between Bill and Tom?
Evry Ajhin is from the same bloodline....so is Bill, isn't he? Then why didn't he know that? Why didn't he arrive sooner to Bech Alchim?
Like always, there a lot of questions, some answers but it is the mystery which prevales in your story.
Date: 07/12/11 08:28 am Title: the snake and the dagger
WOW i woke up early just to finish reading this story, i really appreciate all the time you took to come up with/find the material needed for this story, but in the end it was worth it and i really enjoyed this story!! thanks soo much :)
Date: 03/31/11 08:03 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
What an incredibly interesting world! I really loved reading this story. woah and wow
Date: 01/05/11 05:23 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Wow. This was amazing. A very original idea, very well written. I certainly didn't see this ending coming, and I loved it.
Date: 11/20/10 05:39 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
This is really original story. Whole their world... is just all new! I quite like it. :)
Date: 10/22/10 07:35 am Title: Ajhin at last
oh wow. did you write that poem? it`s lovely. and chilling..
Date: 10/22/10 06:27 am Title: animal
this is so beautiful, so full of warmth.
Date: 10/21/10 05:13 pm Title: dangerous temptation
for writing this i love you. so much
Date: 10/20/10 11:59 pm Title: invisible shackles
ok. now. jesus. um. what do i say to the person who made me laugh at 7 in the motherfucking morning? thank you for making me happy doesn`t seem adequate somehow. i don`t even know dude. how so brilliant and naughty? oh, i got it, i got it: ^__^ you make me wanna la la))) all right. that seems adequate. then again, it`s goddamn early and i am not to be held responsible for what i say. a vague disclaimer is nobody`s friend. xxxxx
Date: 07/02/10 09:54 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
best story i have ever read. FACT. <3
Date: 06/30/10 05:40 am Title: the snake and the dagger
Jeg elsker denne historien:)!
Lykke til videre med skrivingen, du har mye talent.
Date: 04/02/10 11:47 am Title: visitor at night
Huh, I just realised... Ahmaliya... the daughter of the crownprince of the Netherlands is called Amalia. That's awesome!
Date: 03/16/10 11:17 am Title: the snake and the dagger
this story is absolutely awesome...great...wow i loved it!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/09/10 04:33 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Very intriguing fic. I love how the end is open and yet .. closed at the same time. It's over but it's just the beginning, Tom and Bill are together, yet in a different way and still you can't tell what exactly is to be expected next. Very realistic (as far as fiction goes). Good job !!!!!!!
Date: 03/09/10 04:00 pm Title: dangerous temptation
End of chapter 7 and I already need a fan because this is getting steamy and fast. Wow!!
Date: 03/09/10 03:06 pm Title: invisible shackles
Oh boy, I just finished chapter 2 and I love it so far. Good good stuff !!!
Date: 03/08/10 04:01 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
I loved it times thousands. I'm sorry I don't have a better review for you, 'cause it's late and homework sucks, but know that I absolutely, truly, deeply loved it.
Date: 02/28/10 09:01 am Title: the snake and the dagger
Holy shit..
I am... utterly speechless. You have ended that story so well.. with so many twists.. and I am just awestruck and speechless.
God damn, lol. Good job on this, it was incredible.
Much, much love
Date: 02/25/10 09:34 pm Title: the snake and the dagger
Wow, I loved this fic! (lol I always end up reading your stuff in the middle of the night -or should I say morning XD)
Simone suprised me a lot :O Took a while to get all the answers, but it was absolutely worth it. Seriously, some of the things you write just blow my mind.
I hope Bill and Tom figure things out... Open endings like this makes me a bit uneasy, but come on, being twins can never stop Bill and Tom from doing whatever they want with eachother :F
........Tom was freakin' sexy in this fic *___*