Date: 09/17/09 10:11 pm Title: strangers in the alley
I'm leaving another review b/c it's totally almost Friday and I've been updating the page every three seconds for an updateeeee. *cries* Why do you torture me so Luce? It's not right :'( I'm just gonna sit here and pout some more, love youuu :)
Author's Response: Addy, I'm so sorry! It's Hell Week in school, and this is the first time I've been online long enough to be able to answer any reviews, let alone update. I feel like such a shit for missing last weeks update, and I promise that as long as there are no unforeseen happenings tomorrow, I will post the next chapter! I'm so so sorry! Love you, too <3
Date: 09/16/09 01:02 pm Title: dangerous temptation
oh oh oh oh
*tries to calm down*
a review oly containg OH wouldnt do much good
but really...
you kill me lucy, because I stop breatjing when I read thinga like this
it was so amazing
probably the best thing Ive ever read...
when he drank his blood
it was just...amazing
and the end was the best. how bill wants him to come back ^^
makes me want more
but I really get it...school should be top priority, I graduated highschool (swedish scholar system) last year and it was hard to balance school and writing and everything else
but I look forward to every chapter, even if they may not come exactly one week apart.
Author's Response: em ^^ you make me smile so much! awww, you liked the ending? I think you're the first person who's mentioned that ^^ and between you and me, Tom will come back ,p it makes me sad because I've always been able to balance school, writing, working and horseback-riding before, but now it's just all falling to pieces. But I refuse to stop writing! I'm really sorry for missing last week's update, I promise to update tomorrow, and I hope what happens in that chapter will be worth the wait! thank you so much em, this meant a lot to me <3
Date: 09/15/09 04:22 am Title: dangerous temptation
Guh.. I think my brains fell out reading that. *fans self* HOT.. jeebus.. I love the history and background you've put into this story.. it's a really fantastic story, and I'm very happy I stumbled upon your stories. :) *favorites*
Author's Response: ^^ you make me smile! I'm so happy you like that I've developed an actual background for this story, it took me a while and I was scared it would make the story rather long and boring, but it seems to be working out well so far ,) thank you so much for reviewing, it means a lot to me!
Date: 09/13/09 06:25 pm Title: dangerous temptation
oh my GOSH! Ich liebe this story!! tomtomtomtom:D lovely..:) I must say I like having Tom around this much^^ :P and he's so funny..as in hot! hehe..and I like the way Bill responds to him and behaves around him aswell..:)
(and just to go completely off-topic; you are my absolute favourite author in here, and it's so weird that you come from Norway..cause, I mean, you could be living in the same city as me! XD hehe..:P I just think that's kinda cool^^) well..that was random...
looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: lol ^^ und ich liebe dich for reviewing it ,p lol, and yeah, I like having Tom around, too, especially if this is what they end up doing when he's around xD (off-topic: I know, right? it's weird because online and on this page, it's like we're all from the same TH world, you know? but when we start thinking about it, we could be on oposite sides of the globe, or in the same country, or in the same town. What's even weirder is when knowing that, who knows if some of the people around us that we see everyday could be people we value on this page, but don't know the identity of. That's the beauty of anonymity ,p sorry, that was one long ramble)
Date: 09/13/09 05:52 pm Title: dangerous temptation
wow just WOW
Author's Response: lol ,) thanks
Date: 09/12/09 05:16 pm Title: dangerous temptation
wow.. .lol
that... was a good scene lol
good good job x]
Author's Response: hihi ^^ thank you so much!
Date: 09/11/09 05:44 pm Title: dangerous temptation
*.* mein gott!
Hotness overload girl!
This was so sensual and... made my thoughts go wild!
Love it!
Author's Response: lol xD glad you feel that way ,) peach out!
Date: 09/11/09 10:58 am Title: dangerous temptation
Another absolutely beautiful chapter. This whole blood-sucking thing has me very curious. I'm loving these characters so far and the Tom-Simone family is another detail I can't wait to learn about.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested in the blood-sucking thing, it's a detail I will explore further ^^ and the Tom-Simone family...oh there's a lot left to learn about them, that's for sure! thank you for reviewing this ^^ you know you make me smile!
Date: 09/11/09 05:13 am Title: dangerous temptation
lucy... i hate u right now.
i have to go to work now and this chap made me fucking horny!!! i hate uuuuu x'D
like...fuuuuuckkkk it was so...frustrating!!! the tension..the intensity..AAAAAHHHHH
I LOVE HOW U WRITE GODDAMN!!! xD
this is pure porn!!!
Author's Response: ,p I was wondering how you'd react to the actual biting, my little vampire princess ^^ lol, you always make me laugh, love ,)
Date: 09/11/09 04:53 am Title: dangerous temptation
that was good! i'm glad they finally met for real. the whole thing with annabelle was kinda confusing though. i know it'll probably be explained later, but it was weird. and the not-sex was still pretty hot. ;)
Author's Response: ^^ thank you! I know the Annabelle thing was confusing, but she will be an important character, so hopefully it will make sense later on.
Date: 09/11/09 03:51 am Title: dangerous temptation
Holy fuck... I think you just killed me. This is one of the hottest things I have EVER read, all chatagories included. Honestly, I think I'm on fire! I'm falling more and more in love with this story, you keep adding more and more interesting small plots to the story, keeping it fresh and exiting without making it confusing. As always, you are one heck of a talant Luce. I can't even name a favorit quote or part, beacuse I would only end up copy/pasting the enire last part of this chapter, no kidding! I've said this before, but there is something about the way you manage to write sexual and emotional tension between characters that is just... magical. No one else on this forum does it quite as brain melting as you.
Author's Response: I'm blushing so much my face feels like it's on fire and this huge grin that I'm sporting is beginning to hurt ^^ THANK YOU! and I'm so happy you like the small plots and stuff, because I really love writing it all! whenever I see your review, my heart skips a beat because your opinion means a lot to me. I think it's like that with amazing authors like you that I like, I want to please them by trying to write something remotely close to their work. Again, thank you so much for reviewing me, love, it means the world to me!
Date: 09/11/09 12:10 am Title: dangerous temptation
this is the hottest thing ive read this weeek uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Author's Response: hihi ^^ thank you so much!
Date: 09/10/09 09:06 pm Title: dangerous temptation
awwwwww so sexy and cute!!!! i love it!!!! XD please continue!!!
Author's Response: thank you! hope you like what happens next ,)
Date: 09/10/09 08:47 pm Title: dangerous temptation
Uhm. I asked my roommate what I should say to a person who has made me sooooooo happy. And all we came up with was: I love you. Did I mention how much I love you Lucy? I took deep, calming breaths after this chapter and yeah. I am stable enough to tell you I love you :) Thanks for posting bby, I'd say this one bought you a lot of time if you're too busy to update regularly. Soooo fricken good. *happy sighs*
Author's Response: you know when you get that really, really warm happy feeling inside? like when someone who's opinion means a lot to you tells you something that makes you beam of joy? and you feel light as a feather and you tummy is tingling? yeah, that's pretty much how I feel now ^^ you've made this a very happy day, love <3
Date: 09/10/09 07:27 pm Title: dangerous temptation
i think you just about killed me with this chapter woman.
like i was excited because rose was all 'this chapter is sexy!!!'
and then i read it.
and my heart stopped at how sexy it is.
you've killed me completely xD
Author's Response: hihi ^^ gosh you make me smile so much! this is such a nice way to start the day ^^ thank you so much for reviewing this, it means so much to me <3
Date: 09/10/09 05:38 pm Title: dangerous temptation
This whole ending scene with the guys totally blew my mind.
I'm trying to find the right words, but my brain has gone dead. I know you probably get this a lot, but it's damn true. You are blown away, you can't get anything coherent or meaningful out, but I can surely tell you that I was so holding my breath as much as Bill was the closer Tom got to him. And when the final bite came, I swear I came as well in pure pleasure and I didn't even feel an 8th of what Bill really felt, but that's just how good you are.
I love you forever dearest. You still take my breath away and you put us all to shame. <333
Author's Response: weeeee ^^ you make me smile, love! (and blush) you're so good to me, Rose, love you for it <3
Date: 09/10/09 05:13 pm Title: dangerous temptation
wowzers.
Author's Response: lol xD thanks!
Date: 09/10/09 04:47 pm Title: dangerous temptation
THAT WAS FRIGGIN AMAZING!! YOU COULD CUT THE SEXUAL TENTION WITH A KNIFE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ^^ you made me smile so big with this xD thanks
Date: 09/10/09 04:24 pm Title: dangerous temptation
Nggghh, lucy, so much hotness in this one. I love the sexual tension between them and the biting scene. I can't wait for Bill to give in. ^.^
Author's Response: ^^ you have no idea how much it means to me that you like this! thank you, darling, you make me smile! as for Bill giving in ,p might happen sooner than you think
Date: 09/10/09 04:18 pm Title: dangerous temptation
ohhh my.... that was the hottest scene that i've ever read
seriously
i don't get why they have to bite...are they some kind of vampires?
u have to give me more
Author's Response: you make me blush ,p thank you! And yes, they are the original vampire, in a way. It's not that they have to bite, but that they are born with the urge to do so. Oh there will be much more ,) hope you'll like it!