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Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 07:05 am Title: visitor at night

"fuck,fuck,fuckety,fuck"

that line made me laugh my guts out >.

Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 06:57 am Title: a dark corridor

C-Catwoman...

bwhahahahahahaHahHAHAAHaHAHAHA

HhAHAAaha *wipes tears off face*

that seriously caught me off guard. catwoman=bill in disguise! hahahwhahahaha

^^ grins; 2 thumbs up!

Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 06:45 am Title: strangers in the alley

woooo exciting!!!

Reviewer: Cwwiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 10:41 pm Title: consequences

This my friend, deserves a feature, by far. ;)

Author's Response: aw ^^ it makes me happy that you think so! thank you

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 05:41 pm Title: consequences

This is so totally my favourite chapter so far, and I'm not just talking about the lovin', (although that was very nice...). Your writing is so beautiful, and even though I know that, every new chapter makes me realise it even more. The pictures you're able to paint in my head, are so clear and realistic, and it's as though I can actually feel how your characters feel. There isn't a single bad thing that could be said about this. Simply wonderful. b29;

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 12:39 pm Title: consequences

this was totally worth the wait lol

*claps*

Author's Response: so happy it was! thank you

Reviewer: tomilovesbilla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 12:31 pm Title: consequences

aw...I absolutely loved the ending! so cute^^ but that Georg; dumbass! you don't do that to pretty Bill, he belongs to Tom! hehe...
and of course we forgive you for missing last weeks update;) we should just be grateful that you even take time to write this amazing story for us to read:D and this chap definitely made up for it=]

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 05:32 am Title: consequences

*faints* isnt this the best chapther in the world?
seriously... just...GAAAAHHHHH!!! ITS PERFECT!
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRFFFFFFFFFEEEEEEEEEEECCCCCTTTTTTT

*glomps* THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL JOY LUCYYYYY!!!
who's my fav author? who is it? *grabs ur cheeks and pulls them* yeeesss, its my lucy! x3
lol

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 03:18 am Title: consequences

Don't worry about it. This story is so good that I don't mind waiting. I know you didn't make us wait on purpose or anything.

Oh Bill, but you did find your one true love. You just don't know it yet. At least I hope he found or I won't speak to you again. I'm serious. Or not ;)

I knew it would be hot when they take their clother of! ;D I like the way Tom was jealouse to Georg. Even though I hope Georg can keep this teeth ;)

Can't wait for more! :) Luv ya!

xx

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 12:45 am Title: consequences

loved it

Author's Response: makes me smile ^^

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 10:26 pm Title: consequences

Aw. How cute that Bill called him "Tomi" at the very end. ^_^

Author's Response: hihi, glad you thought so ^^

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 06:56 pm Title: consequences

Sex without love? That's...strange for twincest, lol, but I like it because I know it's coming! Right? The luff is coming...? Anywayssss I am supersuper pleased you updated today, but I don't want you to feel this obligated to! It seems like you feel so bad about updating that you didn't get the joy of writing it! Don't make it a jobbbb silly. I love you, and bby, this chapter was awesome, *squeezes tight*

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 05:52 pm Title: consequences

Girl, no need to apologize. I understand completely. College is certainly kicking my ass, so I know the feeling =/

But this chapter MORE than makes up for last week. Just...*melts* So great. I felt so bad for Georg, though :( Poor thing.

♥ Wonderful, m'darling, as usual =]

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 05:40 pm Title: consequences

ahhh!!!!!!i love it!!!! XD please contiue!!! i love it!

Author's Response: thank you ^^ I hope to update today!

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 05:08 pm Title: consequences

AWE.

Author's Response: ^^ thanks

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 04:45 pm Title: consequences

honey...dont feel so guilty
some authors almost never updates!
and that was soooo worth the wait!
just when I thought it couldnt get better
it was way sexciting :p
hot, beautiful, amazing!
Im a little sad for Geo, but he'll get over it
Oh and syupid little Bill, cant he see that his true love is lying in that bed? ^^
and I would love it if he chose to have music as his "thing" its perfect =)
and, quoting Tom; you're the fucking best!
thank you

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 04:44 pm Title: consequences

Georg grrr...Tom guh...The End. *falls over dead*

Author's Response: lol ,p thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 04:35 pm Title: consequences

yeah this chapter def made up for missing the last week update

Georg really scared me...he acted like a psycho
maybe it really is a big deal with the biting...like Bill now is branded or smth

well...the sex was awesome i loved it that Tom was angry and then he gave it to Bill good
i'm expecting more passionate hot sex

and Bill has to see that Tom is his true love ,right?


can't wait for more but maybe that u didn't post last week u'll give us another chappie quicker *grins*

Reviewer: Emeycia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 03:49 pm Title: consequences

Aww. I found this chapter extremely sweet, well maybe despite the part where Georg forced the bite on Bill. Very detailed and good description at the sex scene - I loved it! Tom and Bill are amazing together. *_*

Author's Response: thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 12:37 pm Title: dangerous temptation

i've been waiting for so long for this update
*waits upset*

Author's Response: I am so sorry, you have no idea! I will update tomorrow, I promise, and I hope that chapter will make up for my failure last week.

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