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Reviewer: FishieLPKaulitz8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 10:49 pm Title: animal

For a minute, I didn't know what you meant when you said that there are no such things as black panthers... but then I realized that an ACTUAL black panther truly does not exist, but there are black leopards and jaguars xD Took me a minute... Anyways *-* I loved the chapter. I think I melted at the end xD I really love Tom's character in this story, though I feel like he's a very mysterious person O_o And I like it... lol

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 06:53 pm Title: animal

AW TOM!!! GO AND FALL IN LOVE WITH BILL!!! Just do it!!!XD Wahehehehe...XDXD

Hwaaaaaaaahhhh thank you for the beautiful update!!XD I always thought panthers were black...@___@ Aren't they black??O___O OMG I need to reeducate myself. LOL..XDXD

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 06:04 pm Title: animal

Awesome chapter! Keep 'em coming...you know...when you can get around to it :)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 05:10 pm Title: animal

waoooo!!! a panther!! incredible!!!! XD
and tom a dragon, waooo!! that is so cool!!!

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 04:06 pm Title: animal

*shifty eyes* I totally thought black panthers were real... ahem. Anyway! Yay! This update made my day bby, I've missed you much!

Reviewer: Raiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 02:08 pm Title: animal

Ohhhh!!! I was just thinking about this story a few days ago =]

Blank panther, good choice x]

Reviewer: Winry Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 01:40 pm Title: animal

The panther suits Bill just fine.
And Tom with a flaming tattoo? I so wanna see that for real...
The end of the chapter was so sweet, thank you :)

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:57 am Title: animal

This was so good
I love that you adress the "love thing" nd its apparent that they are soo flaling for eachother
and the animalspirit cermanoy was beautiful...cant wait to find out more about Bills inner animal
love it lucy, as always!

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:45 am Title: animal

I loved this chapter so much. The ending was just... *__*

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:22 am Title: animal

i love the idea with the animal and all
hmmm Bill really seems like a panther

i love Tom's attitude in this story

Reviewer: Winry Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 05:13 pm Title: consequences

I finally got around to reading this story that has been sitting in my bookmarks for such a long time now. That's different from what you've done before but I love this story nonetheless. I just love your style and characterisation anyway, so I think I'd like anything you could write ^^
I wonder where you're going with this story and I can't wait to know what happens next.
Somehow, I feel Bill will turn back to his granny at one point or another. The poor woman only has Bill left, he can't let her believe he's dead.
Good luck, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: stoicgenius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 05:11 pm Title: consequences

I love the progression between Bill and Tom this chapter.

Maybe they are like soulmates or something, which would explain why Bill reacted to Georg's bite differently from how he reacted with Tom.

Reviewer: FishieLPKaulitz8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 05:34 am Title: consequences

No O_O Next... button... I need more, lucy!!! lol I don't think I have words to describe this, really. But you write in a way that I want to *-* Your work is absolutely amazing, I'm jealous lol There is not one thing that I have questions about at all. Usually, I do, but with you ;) I don't lol. Though I do have to say,

Bill stands on his balcony, staring out at the dark mountains, smelling the cold air that’s blowing his way. It smells of snow...

that I love that!!! I tried telling my friend that the air can smell like snow. He told me that the air can't smell like anything, let alone snow. My attempts to explain were fruitless, though lol. But I'm glad to see that other people can smell snow in the air, too ;)

Reviewer: FishieLPKaulitz8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 01:23 am Title: a choice

*0* Lucy... I love you. Not in that way, but I'm sure you know what I mean!!! This story is pure love, and steinsgrrl always talks about you in such great ways, and I've been dying to finally get into this story!!! And now I'm one happy Fish. I see now, how I should write. Not like you, per se, but I see how you've managed to eliminate all of the "and thens" and "before hes" and "a little bits" and have made your sentences so much more smoothly than mine.

*melts* This is my favorite story to read right now. Actually, I think all of the stories that I've read of yours so far are my favorite. So really, you're my favorite author lol.

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 06:35 pm Title: consequences

Loved it! Man, you scared me with Geo going bonkers on Bill like dat! *.*

And then you got me so *coughturnedoncough*

Yeah... you're writing moves me 2 the core :D

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/09 04:02 pm Title: strangers in the alley

*cries* u didn't update again
i really miss this story

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/09 10:38 am Title: consequences

This TOTALLY makes up for missing last weeks update. That chapter was amazing. There are so many things going through my head right now. I cannot wait to see how the rest of the story will unfold and to see what Bill's future looks like.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 02:49 pm Title: consequences

Oh SNAP! Georg, that was badbadbadbadbad and did I mention BAD? >_>

And UNF, Lucy, that SCENE! *melts and becomes a puddle that slowly goes down the drain*

I love claiming sex scenes, don't you? :DDDDDDDDDDDD

Reviewer: Abe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 11:51 pm Title: consequences

Holy cow!
I'm usually not into the whole fantasty genre, but this story is so wonderfully unique. You write so WELL. I'm very impressed.
Ooooh the sexual chemistry between them is amazing *melts* Tommm is veryyy hot as a flying-ninja-batman-vampire. :D
Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 07:41 am Title: consequences

i luv this story~ *sighs happily*

thx 4 the update

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like it ^^

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