Date: 12/28/09 02:38 pm Title: an approaching sunrise
*huggles you* dahling, this was amazing, much like yourself, and don't worry, the wait wasn't as bad as you think (christmas stories helped loads) but I'm glad you're back with this, and *huggles you again* i remember the great hunt for college (and the horrible grade scavenging --kinda) and all I can say is do your best wherever that leads you, and don't worry about here too much, we'll wait for you forever and ever LOL. anyways, glad you see you're back, and if you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here (again, this chapter was wonderful -- has me grinning like a loon)
Date: 11/15/09 02:42 am Title: a bloody past
please please PLEASE more! i am addicted to this story and i need to keep reading! dont give up on us. this is turning out to be one of the best fics ive ever read!
PLEEEASEEE continue your fabulous writing for the sake of keeping me alive (heh)
you are an awesome writer love all your fics please keep it up
xx
Date: 11/14/09 05:49 am Title: a bloody past
I like it! :D
Was Tom the one who killed Bill's parents 0_o?
I was thinking it was David, but then you hear the end of Tom and Simone's convo, so that got me wondering.
I like how you always make me wonder about stuff ^_^.
Date: 11/06/09 01:03 pm Title: a bloody past
I'm so confused about all this situation.
I'm sure that "brother of shame" refers to Tom. Shame because they're committing incest.
But I don't really get why he got upset and left when Bill told his story.
I can only assume that he has something to do with it or knows something.
Tom being a killer, could it be him who killed Bill's parents?
But it makes little sense. It was bloody apparently and it's not the ajhin's style. And David fits much better with the snake thing and all.
So I really don't get what Tom understood when he heard Bill's secret that compelled him to run accuse his mother of something. Maybe that he and Bill are twins? But I really don't see how he could infer that...
Well, we'll see I guess ^^
I'll try not to get my brain in a twist until the next chapter XD
Date: 11/05/09 02:16 am Title: a bloody past
yes i love it but why did tom leave and wat the heck were tom and simone talking about... was david his dad or something or does tom know something bill dosnt like him killing his parents
Date: 11/05/09 01:25 am Title: a bloody past
Okay, I re-read the last few chaps and I have to say I am NOT happy with Simone! I'm totes convinced she's going to be pulling some bad ass shit soon and I'm not pleased! She doesn't want them to do it b/c they're brotherssss and she had Bill's parent's killed. Urgh. So angry right nows! lol Sorry for this rant bby, I looooove you :)
Date: 11/04/09 04:16 pm Title: a bloody past
I'm O_o intrigued... I'm assuming that by the fight that Tom and Simone had, that Simone ordered Tom to kill Bill's parents or... something? I don't know since Tom would've been younger, but the Ajhin can be young, I believe. At least... from what I know with that seventeen year old Ajhin at Bill's ceremony. So then... this makes me wonder... if Tom's dad left him, was it Simone who wanted him killed for doing so? Perhaps his dad left for Bill's mother, therefore leading to their deaths? You know... kill the man who left you AND the woman that he left for? This would also make Tom as Bill's half-brother O_o making him the "brother of shame" perhaps. This also brings up that brick with the snakes on it that Simone showed Bill "the descendant of snakes"... Maybe I'm just thinking about this too much xD LOL
Date: 11/02/09 04:19 pm Title: a bloody past
ooh oh omg
I thought it was interesting, this turn of events
Tom running to Simone is really interesting
I wonder what thats all about
I have a few hunches...but I'll keep those to myself until I see what you choose to do :)
Date: 11/02/09 05:42 am Title: a bloody past
My dearest Lucy,
I missed you so, and this fic. It was so boring two weeks when you didn't have a time to update. But don't worry, I'll wait until the end of our days to get a chapter to this fic ;)
"a brother of shame"
I knew it! I have to be right. I'm so curious to know what'll happen. Bill and Tom have to stay together, you hear me! Or I'll hate you forever... Well, almost anyway ;)
I don't give you constructive criticism because I'm bad at giving it. I'll give you my support, if that's ok :)
xx
Date: 11/02/09 12:20 am Title: a bloody past
Hmmmm. I'm suspicious now... It was a very nice twist Lucy, thank you :)
Date: 11/01/09 11:44 pm Title: a bloody past
shit, im crying!
that was soo amazing cant wait for the next chapter! this is absoloutly brilliant
AHHHH!
Date: 11/01/09 10:44 pm Title: a bloody past
TOM KILLED BILL'S PARENTS!!
OMG. Am I right?
I just... I don't know why I think that but... That's my theory and I'm sticking to it.
It's not like you'd tell me if I was. XD
Kudos for this chapter!
Date: 11/01/09 08:26 pm Title: a bloody past
Uhmm... Hahahaha...
I'm confused...XD Yeah, I got Bill's past right, but the thing with Tom confused me a little. So Simone was the one David stabbed? And who's David, Tom's dad?? Eeehhh...XD And and... who killed Bill's parents? Is it David, or could it be Tom - because of a mission?? I don't quite get why he cried - if it's because he could relate to Bill losing a parent, or because he has something to do with Bill's past (could be David, or could be something he did)...
Gaaaaaaagghhh... I know I'm wrong in a lot of ways hahaha..XDXD
Date: 11/01/09 06:55 pm Title: strangers in the alley
If Tom killed Bill's parents something's wrong here:or Simone made a mistake or his parents weren't good people.
And if Bill is Tom's twin he had adoptive parents...so why would Simone let Bill be raised by bad people or, in case they were good, want them killed?
so many questions xD
Date: 11/01/09 06:16 pm Title: a bloody past
omg so many mysteries x]!!!
lol good job on this, still got me hooked.
Date: 11/01/09 05:41 pm Title: a bloody past
Oh no, Tom killed Bill's parents. That's not going to go over well.
Date: 11/01/09 04:26 pm Title: a bloody past
this is really good! did Tom kill Bills parents?! was it that he realized?
or that they were brothers in some kind of way? no..
anyhow! looking forward to the next chapter^^ this is getting very exciting;D
Date: 11/01/09 04:14 pm Title: a bloody past
This is all so mysterious and I really want to know all of what went down. Was Bill's assumption right? What detail made Tom fly away like that? And what did he do? And who is Simone to Tom and Bill? So many questions. So many good, juicy questions that I know will be answered in time. This is too damn good!
Date: 10/29/09 07:29 pm Title: Ajhin at last
hehe..yay you!
I love the way you describe the characters in this story..they all seem so pretty!;P and you have an amazing imagination! all those details you come up with, about the ceremony, Gustav's and Georg's tasks at Bech Alchim, Simone and well..everything=) so, if you ever publish a book in "real life", let me know;)
Author's Response: *hugs you soooo tight* you don't even know how much the imagination part made me smile, that is one of the best compliments I've ever gotten! thank you ^^