Date: 08/27/10 08:59 am Title: Meetings
Haha awesome the story is really awesome :D
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Date: 08/26/10 07:33 am Title: Meetings
The nonchalance to violence your characters display has always been my favorite thing about them, and this is certainly no exception! I'm so glad to see an update of this, your vampire twins are just so amazing... *__*
Author's Response: I love my evil vampires. :) They live off death, so they might as well either enjoy it at least a little. And it's not like they can break TOO badly, so a little extra rough rough housing is just fun. :D
Date: 08/26/10 05:52 am Title: Meetings
lol....sillies.
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/26/10 05:41 am Title: Instinct
wow. I always knew you would lead me into sin...such a scandalously sexy parting line. that was hot, btw. loveee
Author's Response: Bill knew what was what. ;)
Date: 08/26/10 04:57 am Title: Bye Bye Andi
seductive little monster ;P
Author's Response: Aren't they just?
Date: 08/26/10 04:39 am Title: The Fire
awaaah.
Author's Response: Poor dears. Poor, murderous dears.
Date: 08/26/10 04:18 am Title: Never Leave Me Again
yesssssssss hotnesssss! and then, either gradually or immediately, they become the bill and tom-pires that we came to know in for charity, the greedy freaky sexy little fuckers we know and love, yes?
Author's Response: Semi gradually. ;)
Date: 08/26/10 04:10 am Title: Beginning
wow, bill did a quick one-eighty from the pious little thing he was in the beginning. that sharing stuff is hot ;) *next*!
Author's Response: He most certainly did! Seems vampirism suits him. ;)
Date: 08/26/10 04:04 am Title: Meetings
Haha, I love it! Gustav is just great in this universe.
Author's Response: Gustav is so wonderfully cold and uncaring. I have GOT to get around to writing his backstory one of these days.
Date: 08/22/10 05:06 pm Title: Instinct
I love these cookies :D I would really like to read more of them!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I shall have to write more, then. :D
Date: 01/04/10 10:25 pm Title: Instinct
Dammit! I left a review but then the server went down. :( Anyway, the gist of it was that I enjoyed this tons, even though I was dumb and read vamp sex in the lunchroom at work...or maybe because I read vamp sex in the lunchroom at work. >_> And the last paragraph was brilliant.
Author's Response: Aw, darn server. I'm glad you enjoyed even if you were a naughty bunny reading it at work. ;)
Date: 01/04/10 10:20 pm Title: Instinct
I love love loooooove your vampire twins. ♥ And the circular feeding, just, UNF. What a delicious first time for these crazy vampire twins.
Author's Response: They're just so...vicious. Here it's only been a matter of months since the big turn over and they're already dabbling in their own bit of sadomasochism with each other. Imagine how much fun their going to have once they finally hit on the taste of fear. ;)
Date: 01/03/10 08:16 pm Title: Instinct
But he's so worth risking your immortal soul, isn't he? XD
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: He SO is. Dear little priest to be Bill doesn't even care about all that now that he's got Tom. :)
Date: 01/03/10 07:09 pm Title: Instinct
I'm so happy to see this updated! This chapter was just so entertaining and hot, I'm at a loss for words!
Author's Response: Yeah, it doesn't get updated a whole whole lot, but at least it's fun when it does, eh? :D
Date: 08/22/09 10:48 am Title: Bye Bye Andi
"And Bill, of course," Tom amended, brushing Andreas' fingers away. "You know that I don't hunt without Bill."
"Of course not without Bill. I wouldn't expect you to do anything without Bill," Andreas agreed, looking over his shoulder to find Bill picking a small fleck of nail polish off his skin.
Faking a yawn, Bill stood. "You guys can go if you want. I had something that I wanted to do, anyway," he said, grabbing a jacket off the back of the couch and sliding it on. "Save me a taste if you do go out, though." – eeeeeee bad very naughty.
"It's been so hard watching you flirt with Tom all the time," Bill said, nuzzling against Andreas's cheek. "It makes me so jealous to see you two together. You have no idea."
Andreas smirked, pulling Bill closer to his chest. "Really?"
"Really," Bill purred, rubbing against Andreas. "All those times I see you touching him, trying to get his attention, and I just wish it was me. It should be me."
"Well," Andreas said slowly, letting his lips drift across Bill's neck gently, "maybe it could be you." – ha ha uh-oh!
"Bill? Hey, what the hell are you doing?" Andreas asked, yanking against his binds as hard as he could.
"I told you," Bill said, lashing down Andreas' leg. "It makes me so jealous to see you flirting with my Tom. To see you touching my Tom when it should be me touching him." Checking the knot on the last rope, Bill slid up onto Andreas' lap again. "You were warned when you met us. Don't touch our things. That includes each other." Folding his arms, Bill rested his head on Andreas' chest. "But you just kept on touching my Tom, and now you get to pay for it." - *shakes head* well he is into people who do coke so? *makes a face* that might explain why he can’t see the wald vo lauter Baumen nicht!
Bill pressed his fingers to Andreas' lips. "But afterwards, afterwards he would fuck me until I remembered who I'm supposed to be with. Tom and I belong together. Forever. You don't get to come between us, no matter how hard you try." – yup!
"I'm going to go in and fuck Tom until morning, so you can scream up here all you like. I don't really see much point in it, though. You may as well take your punishment like a man and be grateful that it isn't worse." Grinning, Bill gave Andreas a little wave. "Bye bye, Andi. I hope the other side is nice." – evil *shakes head* evil Bill! lol
Author's Response: You do NOT get between the twins and expect to live. That's just not how it works.
Poor Andi.
Date: 08/22/09 10:39 am Title: The Fire
If he could kill the man on the other side of the glass with a thought, Tom just might have, but then he would be denying himself the chance to watch the man suffer. He was the last one Tom had to deal with before he could join Bill; he was the ringleader, the man who had sent Tom's entire world up in a plum of acrid smoke. – awh that must have been so scary!
"No! You're dead! I watched you burn!" he shrieked, recoiling from Tom's approach.
"I am fully aware of what you watched," Tom said with sickening calm. "You and your little friends." Leaning down, he brought his face close to the man's, smelling the fear racing through his veins. "Tell me, where are your dear friends now? Do you know? Something tells me you haven't been hearing much from any of them lately. Isn't that funny?" - *chuckles*
"Bill," Tom said softly, touching Bill's shoulder gently.
Growling, Bill turned on him, teeth bared, his face still maniacally streaked with soot and various ages of blood. – awh Billy!
Chin quivering, Bill flung his arms around Tom's neck, his sobs drowning out the gurgling wails of the man dying behind them. "I thought I'd lost you. I thought you were dead," he whimpered into Tom's skin, his tears soaking through Tom's shirt.
"You can never lose me," Tom cooed consolingly, stroking Bill's hair. "Even if you wanted to, I wouldn't let you." – awh
"Will you wash me?"
"Darling, you're going to have trouble trying to get me not to touch you for awhile," Tom said with a smile, giving Bill a squeeze. - *squidges up nose* awh so cute! Like puppies *wiggles* I love evil vamp Bill and Tom!
Author's Response: Cute little murderous puppies. :D
Date: 08/22/09 10:31 am Title: Never Leave Me Again
Bill frowned to himself. He hated hunting alone. It never felt right to take someone down without Tom at his side, both of them pressing in against their victim's neck in unison, occasionally letting their fingers tangle against each other's garments as they fed. – awh you got left behind.
Sniffing, Bill tried to place what it was, deciding that it was definitely Tom, but with something more, something that reminded Bill of those nights when Tom would slip away and be gone up to days at a time. It smelled like Tom when he finally came home again. – uh oh
Reaching out, Tom tipped Bill's chin back up to face him, leaning in and licking a clean line over Bill's cheek. Another lick followed, then another as Tom gently cleaned the blood from Bill's face. Sighing in pleased contentment, Bill slumped back against the wall, submitting almost more than willingly to his grooming and idly thinking about how good Tom's tongue felt against his skin.
Gradually Tom's licks got shorter, little flickers to clean away whatever he had missed on the first pass, licking at Bill's eyelids, down his nose, across the small divot in Bill's upper lip, and just barely touching the corners of Bill's mouth. Whimpering softly, Bill turned, catching Tom's mouth with his and sucking Tom's blood stained tongue into his mouth. Tangling a hand into Tom's hair, Bill held him in place until he relented, melting against Bill and exploring the forbidden recesses of his mouth hungrily. – awh it’s the first lick so sweet!
"Never leave me again," Bill said, running a blood slicked finger across Tom's lips.
"Never," Tom agreed, licking Bill's fingers clean. – and that was that. *sigh*
Author's Response: And that was that. :)
Date: 08/22/09 10:25 am Title: Beginning
No one is locking me away. I wish to follow in father's footsteps and become a leader of the church. It's a good and just path, Tom. Sadly, if either of us is wasting our lives, it is you. Your current path of pubs and debauchery is only going to lead you to a bad end, and I fear for your immortal soul when the judgment comes." - *snorts* but it’ll be different in the end.
Bill chewed at his bottom lip, unsure. He was somewhat curious as to what Tom got up to on his frequent late night excursions out of the family home, but he had also heard his father rail endlessly about the damnation that awaited his eldest if he did not mend his ways as he futilely attempted to whip sense into the boy after he was caught. – What a conundrum for poor Bill
"Well... " Bill began, Tom shifting in closer in expectation, barely jostling the table he leaned over.
Bill watched in silent horror as his inkwell teetered, tipping over and obliterating hours of deliberate, careful lettering in a thick black cascade. Snatching the bottle up before it could drain its self entirely across his table, Bill cast a glare at his brother. "I cannot join you this evening, for it seems now I have my own late night to contend with," he hissed, opening his pounce box and spilling a heavy handful of powdery sand over the ink spill to soak it up. – well that ended that fun!
By the third evening, Bill was a wreck. Tom had never been gone for three nights in a row. Their father had returned that afternoon, and a cloud had descended over the household when he found that his ill behaved son had gone missing, leading to a tense dinner and an early evening for everyone. – eee
Hours passed as such, Bill playing chase with sleep, nearly catching it, only to have it ripped from his grasp once more. – OMG this is the most awesome line ever!
"Bill," Tom replied slowly, watching Bill's face as he ran his fingers across Tom's, a furrow creasing his brow as he looked at Tom closer in the gloom. Tom thought he could almost feel Bill thinking as he cocked his head to a side. He knew Bill could tell that something was off now, something was different. Something had changed. Silently Tom raised a questioning eyebrow, and Bill only paused for a moment before nodding his agreement. – nod why would he nod? Is he under thrall?
He had tried to give Bill forever, and had instead succeeded only in closing his world permanently. – what an awful feeling
"I shall return," Tom promised, affectionately stroking the hair away from Bill's face and vanishing out the door as quickly as he could. – I wonder why Tom decided to turn Bill when they were so different wasn’t he afraid of having a stuffy vamp brother following him around?
Blinking slowly, Tom felt the familiar onset of dawn creeping up on him, sleep threatening to pull him under as the sun came up. Keeping his wrist to Bill's mouth, Tom curled up against his brother's side. "Take what you need," he whispered, closing his eyes and falling to sleep in an instant. - *giggles* that’s so cute
Within the first few mouthfulls, Tom's stomach began to hurt, protesting against the overly large meal. He had eaten only the day before, so his body didn't need or want the extra blood he was forcing into it, but Tom ignored his own discomfort for Bill's sake. By the time the woman was drained, every part of Tom's body ached, the glut of fluid stretching his very veins to the point that they felt as though they might rip apart inside of him. – awh Tomi you’re so sweet.
Drowsily, Bill snaked his arms around Tom, pulling him down against him. "After I sleep. We can play then," he whispered, nuzzling his face into the side of Tom's neck and opening his mouth over the spot Tom's pulse once was. His teeth barely broke the skin before he was unconscious again, still instinctively sucking at Tom's throat in his sleep.
Tom frowned, looking at the doorway and thinking of all the night left for him beyond it. Bill needed to get on his own feet soon, because Tom wasn't sure he was going to be willing to spend the whole of his afterlife taking care of him. - *snickers* you’ll be willing to take care of him longer then you think.
Frowning softly, Bill slid himself closer to the edge of his tomb, placing his feet firmly on the ground before pushing his weight up onto them. He felt a little wobbly, his balance not yet secure in keeping him properly upright, and he clutched backwards for the tomb again before he could fall. "I don't think I can." – awh still all shakey
For the second night in a row, Tom went out into the city and glutted himself to the point of pain, carrying Bill's feeding home under his skin. He already had his wrist halfway to his mouth when he noticed that Bill wasn't on the tomb anymore, the realization sending a cold flash of panic through him. His panic only doubled as he felt a pair of razor sharp fangs bury themselves in the side of his throat, ripping his skin open with a painful lack of skill. – lol
Tom shivered as Bill worried the hole in his neck, vibrant sparks of pain running through him that should have been agony but instead left him wanting more. - *giggles* so cute
The more he drank, the more Tom wanted to find a way to simply crawl inside Bill, to rip the slash in his brother's throat wide enough to press his face into, letting his tongue taste the hidden insides of Bill's body. Instead he merely settled for giving Bill back a taste of what Bill had given him, dragging his fangs harshly across the wound he had already made until Bill whimpered and arched against him harder. – hum? When pain becomes pleasure.
"Would you like to go out tonight? You could find out first hand."
"Not tonight, not after that," Bill said, giving Tom a lazy, indefinable smile. "Anything else after that sounds as though it would be a disappointment." - *giggles*
"Uh huh," Bill breathed, his words a faint brush of air against Tom's skin as he bent in closer.
Tom hummed a faint agreement as Bill bit into him again, catching hold of Bill's arm as Bill laid them back and sinking his own teeth into Bill's wrist. Tomorrow they could hunt apart, but for the rest of tonight they could continue to share. – they haven’t figured it out yet? I suppose they are still new...and dumb boys.
Author's Response: Oh how things change.
Bill didn't know what was going on, but, as different as they were in personality, he could tell something ELSE was different, and they couldn't let that stand. That's why Tom came back for him.
Date: 08/12/09 04:12 pm Title: Bye Bye Andi
love when Bill torture’s people and Andi is no exception to the rule. First he kill’s you through mental images and words than he kill’s your bodies last after he’s bored with you. I have been waiting for this scene since the story For Charity. To bad he couldn’t have real fun with Andi because of the time limit with the sun that could have been fun. I really wished it was Tom who killed Andi because the things that he would do sound awesome. Love love love your character’s twisted sick minds and the games they play with people and their jealousy is just wicked with the things it makes them do for their love. And last I totally thought Andi deserved this and much more with the way he tried to come between them when it was obvious none of them wanted him. And the way he would take Bill is just as bad, he would go with either one at the end when he made it seem like he was in love with Tom or infatuated. I glad he died but I would have loved to see them both do it but I guess the fit of jealousy is great way as well.
Author's Response: Bill prefers to break them, and then let them die. Plus Andi just didn't LISTEN. He brought it on himself.
Date: 08/12/09 04:01 pm Title: The Fire
love how they will revenge each other’s death and then commit suicide because they can't live without each other. And Bill's lost his human self with the lose of his brother that was very interesting part to see how each reacted with the thought of the other one dead. And also love how Bill's lost in his grief and through all the gore and chaos there love shines through and it seems like nothing exist but them and he finds himself again when their reunited. this was just beautiful in a sick way I guess the way that this scene is kind of sweet.
Author's Response: Tom is Bill's life and vice versa. Without the other one, what's the point anymore?
And, man, you don't take Tom away from Bill. Bill doesn't deal well with that at all.