Date: 08/23/09 07:35 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 13.46
YAY! They caved in!!
This chapter was lovely, and extremely-nervous Tom was hilarious.
Author's Response: I know, right? And Bill managed to NOT rape Tom (however much he reallywanted to this chapter lol)
Date: 08/23/09 05:47 am Title: Saturday, July 11th
Yeeeeey!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
Date: 08/23/09 04:26 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 13.46
heh.
hehe.
ICH WILL SEX! xD
but other than my obsession with having you write Bill riding Tom (you're fault for always alluding to it), i REALLY loved this chapter.
i lol'd when i saw part that you sent and parts that i helped on.
i went all awww b/c they're retarded and won't hurry and get together
and then squealed when i saw the last line, EVEN THOUGH you had sent it to me xD
i'm a loser and this chapter was still awesome xD
Author's Response: lol don't forget the handcuffs! ^_^ Tom will be HANDCUFFED XDrnrnAnd I'm happy you liked it ^)^
Date: 08/23/09 01:23 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 13.46
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
UNDYING LOVE AND AFFECTION
THAT'S WHAT I LIKE TO SEE
I SO HAPPYYYYYY
...aaaaand Shelly's ripping me apart for that last chapter of Vicious. ._.;
Sometimes I feel like I can do no right with her.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ *plots* Now how to break them up again and make this fic longer... >.>
Date: 08/21/09 09:37 pm Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
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fuck you.
Author's Response: 100 reviews=bonus chapter... >.> Other than that, I'm going back to my 3-5 day updates. lolrn
Date: 08/21/09 04:12 pm Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
Okay okay, I know I haven't reviewed in a while but I swear to god my computer problems were like massive!
First a virus them the net wouldn't connect on mine, then my mothers mouse broke then my mouse broke then no net on her computer for two days and now we both finally have working mice and computers with internet!
So yes, my rat takes offense to being called devil-like in this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm extremely sorry to your rat. I should have put a disclaimer that I only showed Bill's view on rats, not my own ('cuz I think they're cuddly & sweet XD) I'm glad your comp is okay, now, though ^_^
Date: 08/21/09 03:01 pm Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY why are you so CRUELLLLLLLLLLLLLL D'X
and why on EARTH would there be RATS in such a high scale apartment?
insects are much more realistic.....
Author's Response: Well, the apartment honestly hasn't been lived in for a while (since Bushido "died") and Bill JUST moved back in. Sometimes rats do get in, but usually an exterminator is called almost immediately. Since no one was living there, and it can be assumed that there was food left in the apartment, though, I'm calling a possible on rats. And it was fun to write ^_^
Date: 08/21/09 10:15 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
Oh, shit! Wait, am I allowed to swear when reviewing your stories? *winces* sorry! But, seriously, wow. I can't wait to read the next update. Cliffhangers. *sigh*. I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: Considering how much Bill and Tom swear in this story alone...it's totally fine lol. I saw the potential cliffie and couldn't resist XD
Date: 08/21/09 08:11 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
OMFG Either you start writing now or I will kidnap you and...you remember the book 'Misery' by Stephen King? Yeah? Well, I think that's enough hinting.
Oh, and check this sentence: "He no longer cared if it was wrong; he was in love with ill". I know you meant Bill...but it's a hilarious typo.
Author's Response: But I have a going away party tomorrow and I have to get ready and >.> That was a freakin' awesome movie. And thanks for the typo ^_^ I guess spell check can't get everything lol *goes off to get ready and write*
Date: 08/21/09 01:19 am Title: Saturday, July 11th
Because I can just see you doing that and making me wait even LONGER for my pornz. XP Why else? XD
...Vicious is being stupid. Still. Bill just got mad at Tom because Tom said Bill likes to hear himself talk. Which is TRUE. XD
Author's Response: lol well, since you suggested it, I might have Bill freak out after all ^_^ And as for Vicious...doesn't Tom tend to tell Bill to STFU, even when he is mad? XD
Date: 08/21/09 01:04 am Title: Sunday, July 19th, 7.00
OMG.
I LOVE YOU
LIKE, SERIOUSLY.
FUR REALZ.
YES.
I even stayed up to read this, even though my mom will surely kill me/take away my internet for the next 2 weeks if she catches me again.
AND IT WAS SO WORTH IT.
Even if Bill freaks out or something, still SO totally worth it. XD
Author's Response: Why would bill freak out? lol I mean, it's not like he doesn't want it... >.>
Date: 08/20/09 08:32 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
Good chappie
Date: 08/20/09 02:28 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
more more more more MOOORRREEEE PLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEE *gets on hands and knees and begs* *kisses your shoes* pwetty pweese? *puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response: Your wish is granted ^_^ Tell me what you think lol
Date: 08/19/09 08:01 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
Awww the ending made me sad. But all the little memories were cute, and they made me want to reread this entire series again. XD
Still loving that Bill reads Shakespeare graphic novels btw, and I still need to get off my lazy bum and go buy some for myself. XD
Author's Response: I think I actually read IMH like...five times before I posted it lol. I think it's the best one in the whole bunch. If I could just get each day to a thousand words, I'd change the names and try to publish it lol. rnrnAnd somehow Twelfth Night seemed perfect for this story XD
Date: 08/19/09 07:27 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
This is just like... a random guess, but did you get "Potts" from Benjamin "Pottsy" Potts on Whale Wars??
Cause that's who I was imagining the guy looking like, then you said Potts and I was like WOAH.
Author's Response: Sorry. Potts is just a random name I popped up with XD I'm definitely gonna look at Whale Wars, now though!
Date: 08/19/09 05:03 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
urgh, Potts is frustrating! Thank you, Rats! Now, why was I thanking them? *is confused* ah, well. Happily awaiting your next update!
Author's Response: You'll see why next chapter XD Then you'll REALLY thank them lol
Date: 08/19/09 03:52 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
hahahahaha i love things being dedicated to the awesome person that is me xD
and HAHAHAHAHAHAH about Potts. just HAHAHAHA and er...i want sex in this. now.
Author's Response: Well, guess what? *points finger* NO SEX 4 U! At least not for another chapter or so lol. I don't want them to 'accidentally' have sex and then decide they just can't be around each other at all. It'll be a bit slower...sex in the epilogue XD
Date: 08/19/09 10:41 am Title: Saturday, July 18th, 21.54
Only a few more chapters? that means that it won't be long until they cave in? Good then, and Potts is...a very poor imitation of Tom.
Author's Response: Bill thought so, too XD And it won't be long now *singing the Beatles song*
Date: 08/17/09 01:59 pm Title: Saturday, July 18th, 14.00
Boundaries...boundaries...who needs them? Life is hard enough by itself, no need to make it harder. If you are in love, whoever it is, just give into it. It won't be long till life takes something away from you without any help from your side. I say enjoy things while you have them, no matter how "wrong" it's meant to be.
Author's Response: Hopefully Bill will figure that out in the next few chapters ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/17/09 12:51 am Title: Saturday, July 18th, 14.00
Boo on boundaries! D: Although I must say it's cute the way they always do something together and are like "This is okay, right? It's a brotherly thing!" XD
Love love loooove it. Looking forward to the next part. :)
Author's Response: lol They adorable together even if they aren't (currently) dating XD