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Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:58 pm Title: 7

i loved this chapter, ESPECIALLY the end. i lol'd so hard that i think i hurt my kidney xD

Author's Response: thank you :)

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:54 pm Title: 7

OMFG, lololol!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:49 pm Title: 7

EWW...Y FART..LOLZ..plz update soon i luvz thiz=]

Author's Response: wow, long overdue but an update is being posted tonight :)

Reviewer: BlackLamb21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:44 pm Title: 7

lol, that last bit was hilarious. poor bill. XD

Author's Response: thanks xD <3

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:37 pm Title: 7

I just pissed!

Author's Response: LOL? xD

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:33 pm Title: 7

Bahaha! The end of this was priceless lmao!

Author's Response: thank you :)

Reviewer: ninaelisabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:25 pm Title: 7

Loved it! This story is so cute and sweet. I love the chef, oh my, poor Bill!

Keep the updates coming girl! :D

Author's Response: How sad is it that almost two years have passed since this review? Posting an update today!

Reviewer: tokiobillhotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/09 06:21 pm Title: 7

I want more already and I have to wait an entire week. ):

Author's Response: Try two years lol ;_;

Reviewer: tokiobillhotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 08:24 pm Title: 6

I hope there are more 'lip bumps' soon. ;)

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 06:23 pm Title: 6

Please update SOON! I'm addicted! This storyline is clearly going places.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 04:34 am Title: 6

=) cool story. i'm excited for more.

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 06:52 pm Title: 6

oooh plz update soon thx=]

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 04:45 pm Title: 6

GUH.
Hurry up, Leana.

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 10:23 am Title: 6

Oh, whoa, I wonder what Tom's expecting.

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 09:28 am Title: 6

Awesomesauce! Great chapter!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 08:45 am Title: 6


I shall forever remember 'lip bump' as my favorite phrase for a kiss. I love you so much for that!<333333

And oh god, this story is so exciting!

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 05:28 am Title: 6

ooo, whats gonna happen noow? *grin*

UPDATE!

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 05:10 am Title: 6

I absolutely love this! It's nice, seeing Tom's personality revealed bit by bit, and I like how Bill seems to be changing just a little bit. I think Tom has been a good influence on him.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 02:04 am Title: 6

thanks!!!! please continue!!!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 01:52 am Title: 6

ooo i really like it! post more soon please!

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