Date: 09/04/11 09:01 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
Very interesting story. I didnt want to read it at first, because it wasnt finished, but the summary got to me and I went for it.
VERY good plot.
Brilliant the silent Bill, so different of his real self and in the same time so composed!!!
I also liked the chapters titles, it was a good find.
And last, but not least, I liked how you wrote the intimate scenes between them, very realistic and sweet. And hot.
Im keeping this story tracked, and I hope you will update whenever you can. Please do.
Date: 04/06/11 07:18 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
WHEN WILL THE NEXT BE UP!?!? IT'S MAGNIFICENT!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much, I'm glad you think so! Really (:rnI'm in a bit of a dry period right now and education is taking up a lot of my time. Therefore I don't know when the next part will be up, but I promise that I work on it whenever I find the time (;
Date: 12/14/10 12:46 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
OMG!!!!!!! this is absolutely amazing! i love love love the story! I lose myself in the plot =] pls update soon!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D I kinda like the idea of the mute Bill because it's so far from his real self;it makes it interesting! I'm still stuck (and extremely bussy) but I will try to write and update, still
Date: 10/28/10 10:33 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
i like it but it makes me wonder what do they want Tom for? and what will they do to him once they find him?
Author's Response: Well yeah, it'll all be explained once I've written and posted some more chapters (; I'm kinda (REALLY) busy at the time, though, so it'a a slow process :( -But thanks anyway :D
Date: 05/29/10 03:49 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
wow just finished reading this whole story and i loooooovvvvveeee it!! omg! ITS AMAZING! pleease update?? :)
Author's Response: Wow thank you SO much! That makes me so happy :D I'll try to update, I really will! (;
Date: 03/22/10 07:40 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
Ok, so it was sorta what I though. But that can't be legal, of course tell the govt and somebody will want ot study them, but what about the others? Are they still being experimented on? And the camps being reopened right? That's not good, they've got to do something!
Author's Response: Ooh you've caught on to some things the others haven't! *dingdingding* Haha (; *hands out homemade cookies* But, you'll still have to wait to get the answers, sorry ;b
Date: 03/22/10 06:10 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
great chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ Also for the review
Date: 03/22/10 04:07 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
Wow.... Umm I just wanna say I've just found ur story and it is ...... Amazing. Now i'm can't really be a judge of stories (mostly cuz I've never writte. One) but I will say it can't stand when someone writes a paranormal story and it sounds stupid and fake. Well urs is not one of those stories. It's pretty realistic and simply a good story. U are a really good writer, I mean jeez ur summary was amazing! I can't wait to read more ;)
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for that review! :D I'm always glad to know when I get new readers (especially when they love my story, writing and summary haha) (;rn And yes, I know exactly what you mean; paranormal stories that are just too fake aren't fun at all Oo There has to be at least some sense and explanation as to how all the paranormal stuff started
Date: 03/21/10 03:28 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
I knew it! Tom can read minds that's why he knows what Bill really wants and understands him so. I just feel badly for Tom that he was tortured as a child and now has to run for his life. I'm still curious as to what the men will do if they ever do get to Tom but I hope he can get away and I surly hope that they don't try to hurt Bill in the process of getting to Tom. I have a feeling their goal isn't to kill Tom but to use him. Tom has the information in his memory about the camp but I also feel like they might use him to get more information about something. I don't know what maybe the government or some other thing they have going. I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Yearh, we don't want them hurting poor little mute Bill; it's not like he hasn't been through enough already Oo But hey, we don't want Tom to get hurt either! x) And the men... Well, you'll all find out exactly why they're after him eventually (;rn Thank you for reviewing and stuff! :D
Date: 03/21/10 02:52 pm Title: A stranger is just a friend you haven’t met for a long time
Welcome and yay!
Date: 03/21/10 02:13 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
i didn't see this coming at all. But it's good really, like the twist of the story. keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad at least some of my readers didn't figure it out before this chapter! xD Wasn't sure whether I gave too many or not enough clues but it seems like I gave just about enough, then haharn And I will (;
Date: 03/21/10 06:06 am Title: A stranger is just a friend you haven’t met for a long time
Course Im hooked it such a good story!!! And can;t wait :]
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D I'm gonna write right now, then! x)
Date: 03/21/10 04:55 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
I'm glad to finally understand whats going on. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Yearh it was about time I let you in on what was happening, Tom's been keeping all those secrets for far too long I think (; Thanks! ^^
Date: 03/21/10 01:45 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
the fuck.
that was a shocker.
but so good! LOVE IT.
Author's Response: Hopefully not a really bad shocker? (; I thought most of you had figured it out by now so I decided to just drop the bomb haha. But I'm so glad you like it! :D
Date: 03/21/10 01:31 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
EEEkkk post again soon! I'm freaking out wanting to know what you have planned next!
Author's Response: Wee I'm glad to see someone's hooked! ;D And as for the update... I will try, I really will (;
Date: 03/21/10 01:31 am Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
EEEkkk post again soon! I'm freaking out wanting to know what you have planned next!
Author's Response: Wee I'm glad to see someone's hooked! ;D And as for the update... I will try, I really will (;
Date: 03/20/10 09:52 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
i like this plz hurry and update!
Author's Response: Thank you (: And I will (; Thanks for the review
Date: 03/20/10 07:10 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
after chapter 11 i was like 'yuppp hes a mind reader' lmfao.
well..mind listener haha x]
Author's Response: Yearh, I think I made it pretty obvious too x) But hey, no fun if there'd been no clues, right? (; But thanks for the review! ^^
Date: 03/20/10 12:08 pm Title: A secret is never meant to stay secret forever no matter how surreal it might be
I fucking love this story, Tomi, I really fucking do!
This chapter is.. a-fucking-mazing! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! I have no words o_o
I though I kinda guessed it, it surprised me anyways, and I gotta say; You are an amazing writer, honey! *-*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: *squeals* Aww thank you so much, twinnie! It always makes me blush when people tell me I'm a good writer #^^# That (and music) is sorta the only things I really wanna be good at (: -And I'll try to hurry up! :D
Date: 03/20/10 11:51 am Title: A black lounge suit is what you should wear if you want to look suspicious
Well.. I think he can read minds, but I dunno xD
He keeps answering what Bill is thinking, and it freaks me out o_o
Well, I gotta say, if Tom hurts Bill, Imma personally kill him in my next review. I'm being dead seriously! xD
Author's Response: Hahah I'm pretty sure it freaks Bill out even more! xD And as for Tom asn what he does... Well, just read the next goddamn chapter! ;Drn And hey, don't hurt poor little Tomi (goes for both me and him xD) But... Well, actually you're allowed to hurt him juuust a little if he's a meanie xD Lol