Date: 01/03/08 06:46 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
This was hot and funny. I just found a few words out of place, "cook" for "cock", "where" for "were". And you forgot the apostraphe everytime you said "Toms". Other than that, I loved it, especially when Tom found out he was tied up with Bill's scarf. Priceless. I literally laughed out loud. Great job, and I can't wait to see more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar :) the thing about Bill tying Tom up came to me at the end of writing it and I just had to make it work ;)
Date: 01/03/08 06:42 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Yes, Bill tied up PLEASE!!
You must do a sequel!! (;
Author's Response: I have now done a secuel damdamdamdaaaaa its called "payback time" hope you enjoy :)
Date: 01/03/08 06:31 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
haha XD, that was fuuuuun!
so so gooood XD!
Author's Response: hihi glad you liked it honney ;)
Date: 01/03/08 06:10 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
This was so good, honestly i LOVED it!!
But you HAVE to continue and write a sequel to this because you can NOT leave me hanging there (;
Author's Response: okey now you guys have seriously made me consider writing another one because I was actually kinda scared you wouldn't like this one (but you made me blush) and I will try to make the secual better because I can imagine that Tom can be really patient ;)
Date: 01/03/08 05:49 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
oooooo nice!!!
xoxox
Author's Response: Thanks sweete :)
Date: 01/03/08 05:48 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
*jaw drops* This was so hot ! I loved it! I think you write very good and this story was just amazing! I'm looking forward to reading more from you :D
Author's Response: *blushes red* thank you so much :)
Date: 01/03/08 05:45 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
yes please bill tied up it's so HOt
i'm waiting for the sequel
u have to write it
i'm flattered to be your first officially reviewer
Author's Response: hihi :)
Date: 01/03/08 05:33 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
ohhhhhhhh it was bill who tied tom up
omg...what a surprise...but it was better if it was bigger
Author's Response: You are officially my first rewiever :) I know it shoul have been longer :/ it felt right when I wrote it, but then I read it and it felt kind of rushed maby I'll do a secuel some time and make it slower when Bill is the one tied up! (I bet Tom could do that)rn