Date: 06/13/12 03:27 pm Title: Good brothers help eachother
You have a few typos, but other than that, this story is kinky brilliance!! :) Hahaha, nice twist at the end too. The situation u put them in is like the best thing in the world: Tom tied up- "Um, Bill? Little help please?" Hahahaha!! Great scenario. And even if this wasn't long, and Tom came around a bit too fast, I just loved this. There's a really sexy urgency about it. Well done. :)
Date: 07/28/10 09:32 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
I LOVE IT! your amazing, that's all x
Date: 09/09/09 03:26 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Hahahahahaha nice! GO Bill!! Really cute oneshot and I liked that Bill was trying to be the dominant one. :D
Date: 03/27/09 12:04 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
this story was hot omg bills the 1 that tied him up haha.but i do think you should add more on there but thats just my opinion still hot hot hot story
Date: 02/01/09 01:14 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
tehehehe that was niiiiccceee.
Author's Response: thanksies ^^
Date: 01/24/09 09:35 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
oooh i loved it!!x
Author's Response: thank you !!!
Date: 09/01/08 06:02 pm Title: Good brothers help eachother
haha i luv it
xx
Author's Response: lol, thanks ,)
Date: 07/01/08 06:16 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Sorry, I'm kinda speechless after reading your 4th fic of the day.You have a manner of creating funny situations and then pull the hot parts out of nowhere,Lu. Question: Bill had been surprised to see Tom, so I assume he didn't remember the other night, did he? So did he just tie Tom up and leave or did they...ya know, 'cause heh heh, I'm kinda up to a prequel of what they had done that time.
Author's Response: haha no Bill actually just faked the whole surprise thing, the reason for why it may have been a little confusing is probably that I first wrote it off as if there actually had been a girl who had done it, but then changed directions in the last second. Don't know about a prequel though, but there is a sequel! *hugs*
Date: 06/14/08 01:40 pm Title: Good brothers help eachother
AARRRGGHHH.... What's keeping him so long..... ( my BF, that is)
ROTFLMAO :D
I just asked for more bondage, and girl, did i get it... Thank you!
Bossy!Bill and Tiedup!Tom It doesen't get any better than this!!!
Author's Response: haha ,p want more bondage? read the sequel to this, there's tied up Bill in that one xD God did I just come out as even more perverted o.O thanksies <3 hihi watch out boyfriend when you get back ,)
Date: 05/23/08 08:53 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Aw~! God! You know how to write cute (and hothothot!)! *___*
Author's Response: aw so sweet of you, thank you so much *beams*
Date: 05/07/08 01:13 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
XD Well well, Tom was all tied up. *smirk* Love the "tell junior to behave down there" part. I cracked up laughing!
Author's Response: oh my, I'm so glad you liked it because it was one of my first fics (lot of grammar mistakes I know) I'm having so much fun because every day there's a new review from you :) thanks
Date: 04/08/08 11:27 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Your stories should be forbidden, they make me horny all the time T_____T XD
If i could draw, i'd make an art with tied Tom and Bill straddling him *__* but i can't so I'll save this hot, sexy, amazing, orgasmic picture in my imagination.
I think that i should build you some temple or something... What do you think? XD
Author's Response: it should be a strip bar ! one of the dark and mysterious ones, 'Lucy's fire' and you my love would have your very own gold laminated VIP card !!! I have actually made a picture of them like that *hides* :)
Date: 02/28/08 11:22 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
UGHHHHHHHHHH HOTNESSSSSSSSSSSS *O*
Author's Response: hihi thanksies
Date: 02/14/08 04:46 pm Title: Good brothers help eachother
If I did own these boys do you seriously belive that I would be sitting here posting fanfiction ? --- Actually...I think you would!!
but then he felt something against his ass. --- I wonder what he felt
“Take of your shirt” -- cause Tom is in a position to give orders...XD
“Now, now be patient” -- Bill is such a tease...poor tomi...you don't do this to your twin!!
“That was… amazing” --- agreed and I mean the story ^^
He hadn’t brought a girl back the previous night. -- OMG!!! BILL IS SUCH A DEVIL!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I WASN'T EXPECTING THAT AT ALL....SO COOL!!!
Author's Response: haha oh Hell you're so much fun :) read the sequel and you'll get the picture about Bill being the devil ;)
Date: 02/08/08 05:35 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
God! that was just amazing.
Author's Response: thanksies :)
Date: 01/06/08 04:45 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
hot damn.
well. i loved it. like most of all your writing. :)
Author's Response: aww that is so nice thanks hun (:
Date: 01/04/08 05:44 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
Oh, okay that was a surprise. *squeal* but a good one. Yay, I loved it. Now... *runs to read sequel*
Author's Response: hihi thanks darling hope you like the sequel too
Date: 01/03/08 02:10 pm Title: Good brothers help eachother
haha im laughing my ass off here!!! haha this was really good!!!
Author's Response: happy you liked it cus it was my first fanfiction ever (:
Date: 01/03/08 09:16 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
you should write more~
Author's Response: I am *hides behind hands* and I'm really nervous about the other stuff
Date: 01/03/08 07:31 am Title: Good brothers help eachother
teehee! I love it!
Author's Response: thank you :)