Date: 08/31/08 09:19 pm Title: Part 1: Boring, Little Town
AHH!
I want the next chapter!
XD
Date: 08/07/08 02:49 am Title: Part 17: She Likes You
holy shit... I would have never guessed English wasn't your mother language. I haven't noticed any mistakes at all. I do enjoy this story very much though :)
Date: 08/03/08 04:59 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Ahhh please i love it!!! I wanna see how this is going to end!
Date: 08/03/08 03:55 pm Title: Part 1: Boring, Little Town
This is just wonderful :D I really really like the way you describe things it's just fantastic.. Don't know how to write things down, my english is SO bad. But I just want you to know that you should add more, SOON! :D I LOVE IT!! :)
Date: 08/03/08 01:42 am Title: Part 17: She Likes You
Nope, I haven't seen mistakes thus far and even if I see any it won't bother me coz your English is amazing. I even thought you were American lol.
Ohhh btw I was very happy to find your stories here coz I have subscribed to your youtube channel and I love it!
Loving the story too :D
Date: 07/15/08 10:13 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Just to wonderful! A very nice OC and the little twins are too cute! And the normal twins... (Normal is a loose term.) Nicely written with good use of language. Looking forward to the next instalment!
Date: 07/10/08 04:12 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
this is such a great story! plz update soon!!!!
Date: 07/06/08 10:43 am Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Haha hey, ik ken jou =P
Jij bent ook van Schrei toch? ^^ Dit hoofdstuk staat daar nog niet! :O
maar ik vind je verhaal nog steeds geweldig =D Hopelijk post je snel weer een nieuw stukje.
(ik ben btw Henry, van schrei XD die mod weetjewel :'D)
Date: 06/25/08 06:01 am Title: Part 25: Nature Sucks!
i just wondered.. You said that barry and melanie's mother was 16 when he got barry, and barry is 21. How can their mother be just 9 years older than melanie? I didn't really get that, cause melanie is 12.. Anyway, your story is wonderful!:)
Date: 06/25/08 05:37 am Title: Part 24: Never Heard of...
yeah! I've heard about the saus:P havn't tasted it yet, though.. But i just wondered.. You say that english isn't your mother tounge, then.. What is? Your english is incredibly good! :)
Date: 06/15/08 11:06 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Aw poor Gustav.
Stupid fangirls.
CFF's.
>.
Date: 06/06/08 08:48 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
ROOFL Biiilll Toooooommm
hahaha
i lvoe the story
please write more
and the ending isnt predictable like in most stories so thats goodXD
Date: 05/30/08 09:23 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
haha
Date: 05/29/08 07:11 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
that is SO what would happen. gustav has the best reactions to annoying fangirls imaginable.
"BIIIILLLLLLLLL!!!"
"TOOOOMMMMMM!!!"
*cacklet*
Date: 05/29/08 06:23 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
xD this was a little funny XD write more please? *puppy-eyes*
Date: 05/29/08 02:26 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Continue soon :D:D ;)
xx Chi
Date: 05/29/08 01:20 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
bill tom its always them if you cant see um leave them alone evil girls
grrrr
gr8 worth the wait
luved it
update soon
ly
xx
Date: 05/27/08 09:44 am Title: Part 29: You Don't Have to Understand...
you can't stop NOW!? write more PLEASEE! (a)
Date: 05/23/08 10:16 pm Title: Part 6: You Wanted Chicks, Tom?
What are you saying? Of course she didn’t know us! How could she know us? They won’t sell our cd’s at that stupid grocery store with the ugly trees!” Haha i cant stop laughing at this haha good job =DD
Date: 05/19/08 09:53 pm Title: Part 29: You Don't Have to Understand...
postie?