Date: 11/01/10 10:50 am Title: Part 12: You're Unbelievable, Thomas
Loved it!
Date: 11/01/10 10:44 am Title: Part 11: Did You Have Other Plans With Me?
Loved it!
Date: 11/01/10 10:30 am Title: Part 10: Time to Get Our Singer Back
Loved it!
Date: 10/31/10 06:13 am Title: Part 9: It's Okay, You Can Cry
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 11:00 pm Title: Part 8: You Gotta Be Kidding...
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 08:30 pm Title: Part 7: Always Ready to Help a Friend
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 07:18 pm Title: Part 6: You Wanted Chicks, Tom?
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 07:12 pm Title: Part 5: Silly, but Sweet
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 07:04 pm Title: Part 4: No Outside-boys
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 07:00 pm Title: Part 3: They Are Delicious, Sir
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 06:57 pm Title: Part 2: Not Even a Gas Station
Loved it!
Date: 10/30/10 06:55 pm Title: Part 1: Boring, Little Town
Loved it!
Date: 12/30/09 12:50 pm Title: Part 2: Not Even a Gas Station
this is really good but you might seperate your paragraphs so its easier for your readers to read
Date: 10/18/09 11:12 pm Title: Part 17: She Likes You
Honestly, your English and your grammar are a lot better than most people I know who speak English as a first language.
Date: 02/28/09 07:31 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
I like this alot,,,,too bad you;re still working on it:(
hahah.
Date: 01/04/09 01:28 am Title: Part 30: Risky Business
Your stories are amazing!!
Please Continue!!!
Date: 10/06/08 08:01 pm Title: Part 1: Boring, Little Town
Sweet 1 chapter,29 more to go.
Date: 10/03/08 11:21 pm Title: Part 30: Risky Business
oh my god did georg kiss her?!?! Did he?! I have to know!
Date: 10/03/08 09:54 pm Title: Part 17: She Likes You
Your english is amazing, i didn't even realize it was your second language at first. Your writing is very good and the rare mistake you might make is barely noticable. Nothing you do could annoy me. (Unless you stop writing. Then i would have to kill you :D )
Date: 09/05/08 06:17 pm Title: Part 14: Nothing You Can Do About It...
Hey! Our names match. What a coincidence!
That random outburst aside, I LOVE THIS THING, I can literallly feel the depression and dullness, and I seriously love Bill the dragon or kracken.
Keep up the good work :P