Date: 08/15/09 10:55 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
oh bill is so cute...poor thing! can't wait to see more of bill in tom's house.
i'm really enjoying this.please update soon.
Date: 08/15/09 06:19 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
i am so intrigued by your Bill!!! Where did you find him and when are you gonna let us know???
It's gotta be so weird that Bill knows Tom's house and all. Coincidence? Blind luck? Or is there more to this story than meets the eye? ;-)
Date: 08/15/09 04:14 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
awwwwwwwwwwwww bill wormed his way in! go bill! although i think he might really be crazy lol. tom has ALOT of patience to deal with it lol.
Date: 08/15/09 04:09 am Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
so awesome! gonna read more now : D
Date: 08/15/09 04:03 am Title: In which Bill falls to Tom's feet and Tom gets a new admirer.
omg this story sounds SO good. i must read more!
Date: 08/15/09 02:22 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
So, Bill already knows, huh? Maybe Tom was the one who fell and bumped his head?
Date: 08/15/09 01:09 am Title: In which Bill falls to Tom's feet and Tom gets a new admirer.
You never answer you're reviews DX
ANYWHORE
I love this story so much along with ever other story you write. You are simply amazing. Nuff said
Author's Response: I'm sorry D: I get so many reviews that it really comes down to either me updating a fic or me responding to every review. I apologize if that offended you. I really do appreciate your reviews to me. :)
Date: 08/15/09 12:11 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
he still had to groan when he realized that he had no milk for that morning. That could only mean one thing, and that thing was that he would have to go right the fuck back to Wal Mart. Fantastic start to a vacation. – lol
he dropped his milk, it bouncing down the parking lot. – lol
There in front of him was Bill, wearing the same clothes and same hair and makeup of the last two days. His face was dirtied though, his clothes ripped and his hair in a mess. He looked like he hadn’t seen home in the three days since Tom first met him. – awh you have to adopt him at least for a little while. If he still can’t remember who he is in three weeks you can get him a job at walmart and make him pay his way.
As Tom looked to the tiny store bench behind the teen that was covered in newspapers for a makeshift bed, he realized that the situation he had hoped to leave behind him was way more dangerous than he first thought. – well for Bill not for you.
“Tom, you came back for me!” The boy screeched, running towards Tom with his arms opened. Tom, too shocked to do anything else, opened his arms wide and let himself hold the very smelly, very confused boy. – awh
Seeing these, Tom felt even more guilty. – yeah! Super guilty!
“I don’t like that woman, Tomi.” Bill declared randomly as they drove. “She’s way too weird.” – says the boy who feel in love the guy he’d only met once.
“It’s so good to be home, Tomi!” – lol
“Um…yeah. Well, my only rule is that you take off your shoes. That is, if you don’t mind.”
“Silly Tomi.” Bill smiled. “I know the rules to our own house.” – lol
“Uhh…sure.” Giving Bill a tentative smile, Tom lead the way into the house, closing the door behind them. Bill slipped off his shoes before walking straight into the kitchen. Tom raised an eyebrow at that. He wasn’t sure how Bill had known where the kitchen was. Passing it off as just plain old luck, Tom followed Bill into the kitchen where the teenager was sticking the milk right where the old milk jug had been. – hum?!
Bill nodded, smiling once more before leaning and abruptly kissing Tom square on the lips. Tom froze, not sure how to react as Bill attempted to deepen the kiss. Truthfully, Tom would have let the kiss go farther had it not been for how stinky Bill smelled and how disgusting he tasted. And the most unromantic kiss goes to… - lol
Date: 08/14/09 11:46 pm Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
He had chosen a job at Wal Mart so he didn’t have to deal with nonsense, but apparently he had made the wrong choice. – ha ha
Bill was ushered out of Tom’s office faster than he had entered. The moment the stranger was gone, Tom took his seat at his desk and went immediately back to work. – Is Bill going to wait outside his office? Or outside the front door?
“No one’s ever told me they were in love with me before.” – awh that’s sad
Since his day was already off kilter and everything was messing up around him, Tom didn’t expect anything less than disaster as he stepped out of his car and made his way into the building. – lol and when will Bill be showing up? *grins*
“Good morning, Tomi!” Bill’s cheerful voice rang throughout the office. “I brought you breakfast! And look, I got you a magazine too! And flowers! And a new coffee mug! And a new tie!” – lol
“Listen kid, I…”
“I’m no kid, Tomi.” The teen pouted. “Stop calling me that.” – just go with it Tomi lol
“Pft. Of course I do.” Bill looked scandalized. “What do you think, I’m some crazy homeless guy? Nooo, I’m not homeless.” – sure he does he just can’t find it lol
“Where do we live?” – lol
“You need to leave my office right now and you need to never come back or I’ll call the police next time, and they can take your lying ass to jail, do you understand, sir?” – awh poor Bill!
He would never see that little love proclaiming, lying, sad looking teenager again. Ever. – um yeah
Date: 08/14/09 11:34 pm Title: In which Bill falls to Tom's feet and Tom gets a new admirer.
“I…I know you.” He whispered, reaching forward to touch Tom’s face, giggling when Tom wrinkled his nose in protest. “Oh, don’t be like that! You know me too! We know each other!” – *giggles*
“Complaint? Why, I wouldn’t complain about you, darling! You’re my everything!” – darling? Lol
“Don’t you love me?”
“I don’t even know your name, sir.” - *giggles*
Date: 08/14/09 11:21 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
I like this story it's very unique
Date: 08/14/09 11:08 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
lol, awww. crazy Bill is adorable =]]]]]
Date: 08/14/09 10:48 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.
plz update soon thx=]
Date: 07/24/09 09:51 pm Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
WOW. Bill sure is a persistent lil bugger ain't he. Lol
Date: 07/24/09 09:48 pm Title: In which Bill falls to Tom's feet and Tom gets a new admirer.
Wow. Got my attention. :3 Great start.
Date: 07/23/09 06:07 am Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
aww,poor B! I wonder what's up with him though^^ T's such a workaholic!
Date: 07/22/09 04:56 am Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
Awww. Even though I feel for Bill, I can understand Tom's behaviour as well. I really can't wait to see what happens when Tom's on vacation, though. XD I like it! :)
Date: 07/21/09 10:15 pm Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
okay that was incredibly funny!
i found it very entertaining! i'd been having a bad-ish day and this made me happy! thanks!
i must say though... tom is in need of removing that stick from his butt. lol
loosen up! lol
more soon when you can ya?
Date: 07/21/09 08:25 pm Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
I saw this story when you posted chapter 1 last night, but I didn't get a chance to read it. But it looked so interesting that I added it to my Tracked list, so that I could come back to it. I LOVE THIS!!! Seriously, it's amazingly funny and quirky! Bill is just... indescribable, and Tom is... well... wow. The stiffest 23 year old I've ever seen. XD I can't wait for an update. Your stories are always brilliant. :)
Date: 07/21/09 04:55 pm Title: In which Bill surprises Tom and Tom kicks Bill out...again.
YAY! me likey :]