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Reviewer: hazex Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/10 04:51 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

awww that sooo cute!

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/09 05:59 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

aww, what a cute chapter.

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 06:10 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

I love this! Bill is just so adorable, and Tom is just so... haha. It's so sweet, how he's slowly but surely falling for Bill, but just doesn't want to admit it. And Bill just keeps pushing him further because he thinks that he and Tom are dating! XD It's golden! And that last line... priceless! I can't wait to see how Tom handles this one, hahaha! Can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 07:50 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Bill in a bathtub is a very sensual image, and I thank you for it.

Update when you can.

Reviewer: madamxkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 06:12 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Shit D:
thanks to you, now i have ANOTHER addiction on here xD
more nau plz?

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 05:22 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

uh oh, now Tom is in trouble! I'm glad Bill is so cute though, and winning Tom over. =) Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 05:15 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. *_* Seriously, the best chapter so far! I think it showed Tom's personality better, like how he is inside, nice and caring. I don't know what will happen when Bill gains his memory back, though, and finds himself in a foreign house with a stranger... I hope he won't throw a fit and call Tom a perv or stalker or whatever, because after all TOm couldn't do anything else with him... Gosh it's so good, I'm so addicted. *-* What school are you attending? I know how bad school can get, so you've got all my support. :( *hugs*

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 03:59 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

lolz. plz update soon thx=]

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 03:35 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Keep updating this! I didn't even know it existed and then I saw it and I read it all in one go, and omg omg omg Tom's so great in this fic...like hilarious kind of great.

Reviewer: haenniTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 01:41 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Hahaha aaaw. this is so cute. Love it!!! update soon

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 12:28 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

I really like this one! Great story!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 12:21 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Tom had been so stupid to leave the kid there all on his own for almost three days. Yet now that he knew his mistake, he would make sure never to make it again. – yes he had been stupid but he didn’t’ know and he’s rectifying it now so it’s going to be ok!

Bill smiled widely, nodding way too enthusiastically for a kid his age. No one should be that happy about showering. – awh he’s all dirty!

Just as he was making his way back to the bathroom to give Bill the towel and clothes, he heard the boy scream out and Tom jumped, running as fast as he could towards the bathroom and slamming open the door. The door being opened scared Bill even more and he screeched, curling up where he lay against the tub, clutching his ankle dangerously. – awh poor baby

Tom had been a boy scout for most of his life, getting almost as high as Eagle before dropping out – I fucked an eagle scout once…he was so thrown off after it he prayed *cracks up*

Sighing, Tom held his arms out for Bill to take. That was when Tom noticed something very crucial that he hadn’t paid much attention to when he first entered the room. – Bill was naked…duh he was getting in the tub! Dorky boy!

Tom waited until the water was warm enough and high enough in the tub before he turned off the faucet, picking up the bubble bath bubbles without a second thought and dumping them into the water. – why does a grown man have bubble bath? Lol

“Tom, I don’t think I can move.” Bill assessed after sitting back in the tub. “How am I gonna clean myself?” – lol Tom’s going to have to do it *giggles*

The whole time Tom was scrubbing off the muck from Bill’s skin, Bill simply sat there and stared, watching and observing every little touch, every little scrub. There was something about the way Tom was acting around him that was weirding him out but then again, he loved the older man! There was nothing weird about him. – oh are we starting to remember?

there was one area on Bill that definitely hadn’t been cleaned yet.
Tom cleared his throat, looking away as he handed Bill the cloth to clean his…area. – lol his area??? Lol

“Taking me to bed, Tomi?” - *blush* lol not where Tom had in mind lol

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/09 12:16 pm Title: In which Bill twists his ankle and Tom has to give him a bath.

Hahahaha perfect ending. I love how Bill was in the BATH (not shower, BATH) and Tom STILL washed him. He was sitting!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 06:12 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

hee hee, this is lovely so far. i'm curious as to why Bill knows things about Tomi's house. i am also looking forward to tom falling for Bill. =) Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 05:43 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

Aww. :) This was extremely sweet! I don't think Tom's being selfish or anything, after all he'd tried to shoo the stranger away, hadn't he? What's there more to try and do? Just let him be and do what's to please him until he recoils... I can't even imagine what will happen then, I just hope Tom won't suffer. :( And I also hope you'll post another chapter soon! :)

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 06:33 am Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

I'm so glad that you finally updated this one; it's my favorite out of all of your stories! :)

Bill is too cute, with his amnesia and oddness, lol. I really appreciate how realistic you made it when it came to describing Bill. Too many times, too many authors forget that the guys are NOT perfect, and had they written this chapter, they would've had Bill smelling like flowers and sunshine, despite the fact that he'd been living on a bench for the past few days. Thank you for making Bill imperfect--- it's a small thing, but it means so much, and makes the story so much better. :)

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Betje Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/09 04:28 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

aww, poor bill. Glad Tom is nice enough to look after him, for a lil bit.

Reviewer: classicDOA Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 09:37 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

Loves so much. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 06:55 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

*Shudder* Thank you for making Bill so disgustingly real. Everyone seems to think that since he's Bill, he's gorgeous and smelly nummy all the time.

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 04:43 pm Title: In which Bill looks gross and Tom doesn’t mind a few kisses.

Well I would b enjoying things if I were Tom. :P

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