Reviews For Amas Veritas
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Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 12:22 pm Title: Seven

Let me tell you something. Real love in spanish (because i think that's the language you were trying) is NOT amas verdadero, it's AMOR VERDADERO. I should know, I've been in spain for about 13 years.

Author's Response: Let me tell you something. If you'd like to live a critique of my story or my titles, at least try to sound nice about it okay? And I honestly don't CARE that it's wrong because I KNOW it's wrong. I'm not going for ANY language really, I'm just trying to get a point across and with the fact that they're SEQUELS so the titles are SIMILAR yet different. And as I said in my story notes for AMAS VERDADERO: "Note: I DO know that Amas Verdadero honestly translates into nothing. But because of creative license and for the purposes of this story/sequel, it means "Real Love". KTHNXBAI." -Violet

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 11:41 pm Title: Seven

WHY DO ALL OF THE STORIES THAT I READ HAVE SAD ENDINGS TODAY?!?!? Ohhh... Theres going tobe a sequel... YAY!

Reviewer: LilKim Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 08:33 pm Title: Seven

oh thank god for the sequel i would have been very upset with u if u just ended it like that lol ILD

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 03:03 pm Title: Seven

Interesting ending....I can't wait for the sequel!

Tom and Bill should be together!!!!

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 01:03 am Title: Seven

awwwww i watn the sequel!!!! today i read to sad stories and now i am crying again!!!! this is so sad!! T__T

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 01:02 am Title: Seven

hahah before i read your author note i was like wtf? thats the end? what? XD so i cant wait to read the sequel :D

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 12:17 am Title: Seven

oh wow thats so cool i always liked spells

Reviewer: nekito Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 10:59 pm Title: Seven

if u want to say "real love" it must be "amor verdadero" :)
if u want to say "you really love" it's "amas de verdad"
but "amas verdadero" it's actually nothing xD

i like this fic ;D and ..yeah :D it's cool i like the idea of a magic bill ~~~xD

bai ;D

.nekito.

ps: hope tom doesn't leave D:

Author's Response: LOL, yes I know this. but as an author i'm taking creative license. i'm using "amas" because of this story title and "verdadero" for "real". XD it's incorrect, but i don't care. XD xxVi

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 10:06 pm Title: Seven

Dude I totally loved this story. Can't wait till the second part you've promised. I'll be looking for it.

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 10:00 pm Title: Seven

That's totally uncool!!!!!! How could you just end it there, thank god for the sequel. I really do hope Bill learns to openly love again, especially with Tom!!!! Don't leave Tom!!!!!!

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 09:33 pm Title: Seven

THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL.
*coos you*

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 09:11 pm Title: Seven

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADEHIM GO! PLEASE TELL ME HE COMES BACK, AND THAT HE REALLY IS BILL'S TRUE LOVE!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 08:46 pm Title: Seven

Aww poor Bill. Maybe in the next one he will meet his true love. Maybe Tom really is the one and it will just take time:)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 08:19 pm Title: Seven

im soooooooooooooooooo waiting for it!!!!

Reviewer: thlovr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 07:39 pm Title: Seven

ugh! love it!!!!!!!!!! please let that sequel be out fast cuz i cant get enough!!!

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 06:53 pm Title: Seven

-gasp- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 05:23 pm Title: Seven

WHAT?!?!?! that wasn't supposed to happen! i can't wait for the sequel though

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 05:19 pm Title: Seven

That makes me really sad. It's not fair. He just leaves? Poor Bill...

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 04:14 pm Title: Seven

=_= ur sequel better be up SOONLY.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/09 04:10 pm Title: Seven

*points and stammers that it's the end*

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