Writing Gustav as a professor is a great idea. However, I do wish we'd gotten to see more academic stuff. The details, like the silly midterm answers, were really good, so I couldn't help wanting more. (Just my personal taste. I'm nerdy). Would have been fun to see Bill and Gustav arguing over literary theory together, or Gustav disagreeing with other profs in his department.

Author's Response: Oh, that would have been to much of mental masturbation for me, for I am a geek too, and I was afraid I'd get lost in the debate and forget the actual plot.

Although the sex scene was a little...short for my liking, I still really liked the story. I'd love for it to be continued to see how his wife reacts when she finds out?

Author's Response: my detailing of sex scenes is a WIP. Be glad though. I used to dread them. Now i'm accepting them :)