Date: 10/13/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
What I told you about Body Language, well, actually most of the signs and clusters we do are not controlled by our rational mind, that's why, even though they behave one way onstage, the little signs tells us how they really are, and they are there if you know where to look.
Let's just say that they can control main body movements like arm position, and be very convincing when talking, but more than 2/3 of communication is done through (mostly) unconscious movements and gestures. So yeah, I still think your daughter is really intuitive, and sorry for the speech, I just read your answer and had to do it :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the explantation and for the little speech, it's okay, I like to be taught (okay I'm weird I'll admit that, sorry). And you're right, absolutely right=D. Oh and she is, she really is, like I said I hope the world doesn't change her. Thank you again=D
Date: 07/16/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww thats sad, I wish it would have been more romantic on Bill's part, like he actually got what Tom was trying to do. Well happy early birthday to your little girl if I dont see anything new from you between now and then. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Ehm...well I kinda wrote Bill with my own guy in mind (ehm and yeah he kinda is something like that *blushes*) and he can be romantic but usually...*sighs*. Thank you very much, that's sweet=D and thank you for the review tooxD
Date: 07/16/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Because although most people see Bill as the 'needy' twin, I reckon it's actually Tom.
I mean, don't get me wrong, I'm certain Bill is high maintenance, LOL! But he is clearly the stronger of the two emotionaly - he oozes confidence, and self assurity, even though he plays the 'innocent' one. Whereas Tom is awkward, shy and clearly uncomfortable in many circumstances. Bless him.
I think the others allow his boasting and constant joking at their expense, because they know it's the only way he can feel that he has some control over the situation.
I don't even mean it in a twincesty way, but although Bill is the one who is openly more affectionate, if you watch closely - those displays fluster Tom quite a lot, lol.
And OMG - this was NOT meant to be so long! Anyway, great little fic!
Author's Response: Yay lengthy review<33=D You know you're probably right about that, no wonder I think he's the sweet one (Tom I mean...I have a tendency to write him as sweet, don't know what that is) Thank you for your lovely long reviewxD
Date: 07/16/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol, actually Tom's body language shows that he's the submissive one, while Bill is the dominating one (Apart from the fact that their body language suggest a more than brotherly bond...tells you a girl studying about BL among other things). You've got a very intuitive daughter.
Author's Response: Yeah you're probably right, but you never really know how they act when they are in private...But based on what they dispplay to the outside world, I might not be far off with this...and neither is my daughter. And yes she is=D, just hope that the world doesn't take that away from her
Date: 07/16/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah you did. Lol. I thought Tom was going to be the late one. This was good!
Author's Response: Yay *does happy dance* lol. Thank you for your review=D