Date: 06/18/17 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
this was a good story!!
an also creepy
u should do a sequel to this
Author's Response: thanks for the review!
Date: 02/20/16 07:57 am Title: Chapter 4
WHOA!!! Creepy indeed. Poor boys XD
The fact that they got out made me even more happy. Great writing here.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/07/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
O.o Creepy... very creepy.
Author's Response: thank you >:D
Date: 08/24/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Phew. They got out. That's a relief! And very nicely done!
Author's Response: thank you :) i'm glad they're all fine, but with real emotional damage being done :P
Date: 07/30/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
im sorry if im getting the wrong idea but is your inspiration the movie "Ghost Ship"? cuz this stuff happens in that movie.. maggots, dead people, rewind... great movie.. and your story is good too.
Author's Response: ghost ship? i mihgt have watched it, but i can't really think of it right now. Actually my inspiration is my own experience in a haunted hotel at night and the movie/games Silent hill
Date: 07/27/09 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was positively revolting. And I would like more, please. I think you've turned me off of pudding for awhile.
Author's Response: I ate some today and got the idea :D
Date: 07/20/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
I got tingly chills up and down my spine. This is really creepy! Please update as quick as possible, because I really want to know what happens!
Author's Response: thank you. i'll take the fact that i made you scared as a compliment :)
Date: 07/20/09 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
someone doesn't like Bill much...
heh.. poor G's...
Author's Response: i feel sorry for them. having to deal with one pair of twins is horror enough. two pairs is just murder
Date: 07/17/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Those pictures were pretty creepy! Scary stuff.
This is shaping up to be a genuinely frightening thing. I like it, please continue.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 07/17/09 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1
dude... legit.. ur crazy for actually going in one of these places at ngiht! update soon!
Author's Response: we all were :P but we had a good dose of adrenaline for the next 20 years :D. Probably in the weekend i'll have another chapter up
Date: 07/16/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I couldn't see any of the pics. Every time I'd click on one - it wouldn't come up. :( I am liking this story!!
Author's Response: i'll check it out and see what happened
Date: 07/16/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1
yeek.. all those boys making stupid ass asumptions and getting separated...
Author's Response: i know... they're idiots
Date: 07/16/09 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.. a little short but you got my attention
Author's Response: that's cause it's not the whole thing. The site must have split it. I'm reposting. Sorry.