Poetic and sweet... in a sad way. I liked it very much. Especially the beginning and the end at the fountain were touching and dream-like. I think you were able to describe that twin-bond very well and play with the ideas of twin-bond, imagination, selfsuggestion and reality. Reader couldn't tell which was real, which was part of this special bond between them and which was purely desparate acts of imagination.

So yeah, nice one-shot, like a sad dream. Flowing and flickering images. I liked it.

Author's Response: This was a really sweet review, thanks! :]