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Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/09 03:57 pm Title: Meeting

Oh, this is so exciting. Dang, I read too many of these! I can't wait for Bill to laugh already! It's okay, I'll be patient and wait for the story to emerge.

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 05:57 pm Title: Meeting

Hey!
Just love the meeting scenery you use for them to get to know each other. A caffé!
Think you should continue.
Looking forward to read what's next!

Reviewer: darkness069 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 05:52 pm Title: Meeting

EEEEEEEEEE!!!

You posted it :D

Reviewer: myforgetfulness Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 05:46 pm Title: Meeting

you should most definitely continue...i like it so far...=)

Reviewer: Puff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 05:06 pm Title: Meeting

Yes continue please :D

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 04:46 pm Title: Meeting

Me likey:D More soon?

Reviewer: Emokjeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 04:44 pm Title: Meeting

continue

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 04:26 pm Title: Meeting

I like this your English is fine for me I like this chapter can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 03:46 pm Title: Meeting

For English not being your first language, you did very well. The only thing I found was a missing quotation mark! And that's a really small thing in the grand scheme of things.
Please, continue. I like it already!

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out! :D I fixed it. :)

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 03:34 pm Title: Meeting

oh yes.. continue...

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