Date: 10/19/09 03:25 pm Title: Curious
I love the tension, hahaha i am sorry for them thought
Date: 10/19/09 02:37 pm Title: Curious
I want waffles. So bad.
Date: 10/19/09 01:51 pm Title: Curious
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.
You gotta do something about this thing pleaseeeeee ! And a happyend would be purrrfect! *puppy eyes*
And some continue too... ;D
Love.This! ‹3
Date: 10/19/09 11:04 am Title: Curious
I can't wait til Tom breaks XD
Date: 10/19/09 09:10 am Title: Curious
omeingoshupdateplsplsplsplspls!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/19/09 05:44 am Title: Curious
xD I love the tension xD Though I can hardly feel it 'cause I'm sick :( Whatever, I lvoed it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 10/19/09 03:41 am Title: Curious
:pets you: That was was just tooo cute!
Date: 10/19/09 02:30 am Title: Curious
I can't wait for more.
Date: 10/19/09 02:28 am Title: Curious
the tension is sooo perfect
but I cant wait to see where you'll take this story
I hope its heading to a good place...heh ^^
Date: 10/19/09 02:08 am Title: Curious
Yay, Tom's mom knows about Bill! I'm so happy she accepted so easily xD
And Bill draping over Tom in bed, mmm, delicious pictures in my mind. Actually, the scene reminded me of the one from Ouran High School Host Club where the twins, Hikaru and Kaoru, are in bed together ('cause even at 16 they share a bed) and talking on the phone with someone and they're liked drapped over each other xD
But yeah!
And omg at the end with Tom. In my head I was like 'wtf is he doing?! stay with Bill, stay with Bill!' but seriously, they need to have cuddle session where everything just comes out xD lol but it would probably give Tom a heart attack, seeing how tense he is here lol.
This chapter was great and I'm about to go back and reread it xD can't wait for the next one.
Date: 10/19/09 01:55 am Title: Curious
No, sweetie! it wasnt too much, i love this torture Tom is going through!! Bill just HAS to know what he is doing right? Please don't let the love and lust be one sided? I love you so much for this story! update soon babe
Date: 10/19/09 12:52 am Title: Curious
You are mean lol lol jk I can't wait to see what happens next I love this story you leave such mean cliff hangers lol lol
Date: 10/19/09 12:39 am Title: Curious
Wow, talk about a wake up call. Man, I know I wouldn't be able to stand the sight of a sleep-mussed Bill.
Date: 10/19/09 12:32 am Title: Curious
this is wonderful. Also, they should totally kiss.. sometime.. soon >_> :D
Date: 10/18/09 11:59 pm Title: Curious
ofcourse its not to much
its never to much
hurry up and update!!!
i need more.
now!!!
Date: 10/18/09 11:57 pm Title: Curious
Clueless Bill is clueless xD
I want them kiss, and to naughty thiiiings!!!
*loves the chapter and you*
Author's Response: BABY!!! *glomps* I can't promise they'll kiss soon, but they will. I LOVE YOU, BABY!
Date: 10/18/09 11:49 pm Title: Curious
y lo repito, te odio x dejarme con antojo >.<
teaseeeeer! me vas a sacar los ojos de la tensioon
y luego me dejas la imagen de tom en boxers y con serios problemas (x asi decirlo)
y bill acabado de salir de la bañera con low-cut jeans y sin playera
WTF! pretendes k me de un infartoo vrdd!!!!
Author's Response: :D Ya sabes lo que dicen: entre más te cuesta obtener algo, más lo aprecias al final. Así que prepárate para cuando algo sí pase. No me odieeeeeeees.
Date: 10/16/09 07:03 pm Title: Gathering
lol, it would be a weird thing for him to have it on his neck.
have to kill him and he didn't want to ruin his backyard lawn having to bury his body. He knew blood was hard to remove from clothes.
That was completely golden XD
make Tom want to lick it right then. “I... I like it,” Tom stuttered.
That was so much fun too, because guys normally tend to think like that. "Look, omg, mine lick!" okay, so not quite what I said, but they normally think with their dick a good chunk of the time, not saying they can't be sensitive, just they're more dick sensitive. So in other words, in a round about way, I'm saying I'm so happy you're having them act like guys, and not making them go mushy girl. They're guys, who think and act like guys. I liked the heart thing, it was just great. Everyone is always worrying about other people hearing their heart beat quickly, and Bill did. For some reason, I really liked that part n_n good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comment! :) I'm guilty of having written slash and making boys act like mushy girls before, and that's exactly what I was trying to avoid. So I'm glad I managed :) I'm happy that you liked the heartbeat part. I thought it was fitting :P
Thanks for reviewing, again :D
Date: 10/15/09 04:33 pm Title: Gathering
YOU'RE EVIL! :O I LOVED the chapter, adorable! But please update fast! I love this story :"D
Date: 10/15/09 02:57 am Title: Gathering
Ahh! They were sooo close! lol.