Date: 01/27/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
That Tom is not bad? You say that he's not bad? *snorts* yeah, right, what he needs is a good, hard session of bitch-slaps to understand how selfish he is ¬¬ and that Alex-chick... oh *eye-roll* I'm not gonna say what I was thinking to say.
Anyway... I hope you update very, very soon!!
Author's Response: No, he's not. Mostly cause even when I first developed his character I knew that he'd be different than Alex. She's just flawlessly selfish. he's got shit going on that neither you nor Bill know about, which is why he's so agressively mean.
Date: 01/27/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
ahh poor billa. that was wrong of them to take his child and can someone kill alex, like in a plane crash. get the little boy to talk to billa and let tomi over hear the boy talking about not being happy and wanting to go back home with billa. omg i have never read a mpreg i liked much less love!
Author's Response: bah, Tom's innocent here. kinda. And no, Alex has to live a very long life. people need to realize that early death is NEVER the way to go if you want them to suffer xD. And Tom knows Mani isn't happy there. He can't do anything about it atm.
Date: 01/27/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
Oh, can you say asshole? I want Bill to choke that bitch and his wife. I know he'll redeem himself somehow but damn.
Author's Response: no? i can't, cause suprisingly enough I don't hate him. but that's because i know the reasons behind his actions xD
Date: 01/27/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
Yay! A new chapter. That's always an exciting day. ^_^ Oh Tom, you have battered husband syndrome: married to an uber bitch wife that you're terrified to cross. Now the question I'm left wondering - did it used to be love or does she have something over him?
Author's Response: Lol, am happy you were happy for the new chapter. and LOLOLOL, you're so right, in each any every way. read on and find out how. xD
Date: 01/27/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
Tom's behavior is halfway understandable. He seems lost, confused, and even a bit sorry sometimes. I feel bad for the both of them -_-
Author's Response: he'll work it out, they both will. they've both got shit going on.
Date: 01/27/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
OK...Tom needs to get a clue. He and Bill need to have a deep heart to heart beyond this brief conversation. Tom needs to understand what he did was wrong.
Author's Response: Lol, Tom has a clue. You guys just don't know what he's been through, like he said. but it'll all come to light...in the next chapter.
Date: 01/27/10 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear
i think you are doing a great job writing tom and i understand whats going on. i dont hate tom. i think bill said things very well in this last outburst and i hope they make tom think. because bill is totally right. another great chapter, thanks so much for the speedy update. this is on of my favorite stories that i am tracking--which is a lot!!
Author's Response: *nodnod* I'm glad you don't hate him. there are stories that I've written where he is DEFINITELY the bad guy, but that's not one of those stories. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter anywhoo and there's a new one up now
Date: 01/26/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
Good chapter. I'm so happy you updated!!!
I love how Mani is afraid of Elmo. Hilarious!! :D
Author's Response: *grins* I'm happy you're happy. ^_^
and yea, i tend to find ways to scare children, and with my own nephew, he was SCARED TO DEATH of his laughing elmo, so I used to punish him with it. He has since grown out of it, and i have to use my mum to scare him LOL.
Date: 01/25/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
lol about time u updated more!
Author's Response: lolololol
Date: 01/25/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
am i seeing tom softening a little bit??
it's a start! i want them to be together so baaad
Author's Response: bah. more mellowing than softening. xD
Date: 01/25/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
Just read through all 7 chapters and absolutely love it! It's definitely a twist on the usual mpeg stories. Poor Tom, though. He's trying so hard to keep up the prickly front but I can still see the softy hiding in him. I can't wait for you to update again, hope the writer's block has left you!
Author's Response: WOW, that's insane. I only do that once in a while, but I'm happy that you like the plot twist, and the plot in general. And Tom's a bastard asshole. but we're not meant to hate him, despite how stupid he acts xD
Date: 01/25/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
awww i luv it plz continue and thank you for the new chap
Author's Response: ^_^ am glad you love it.
Date: 01/25/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
aaaa Tom's not an asshole anymore
i wonder why they don't make up ?
Author's Response: oh yea, he definitely still is. his assholeness is buried deep deep within. he's just a little mellowed out. xD and they're not making up for two reasons. 1. the story would end and 2. they're both in emotional places where they just can't make up.
Date: 01/25/10 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
I liked it. Tom keeps staring at Bill's belly. lol. write soon.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it ^_^. and yea, Tom's a creeper xD
Date: 01/25/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
This is a great story :D continue soon :) Please? ;)
Author's Response: lol, thanks ^_^ and of course, there's a new update now.
Date: 01/25/10 08:42 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
I like this! I was a bit hesitant to read it because of the summary, but now I really like hwere this is going! I can't remember what other fics of yours I've read/reviewed besides MADE, but I think it's safe to say that you are one of my favorite authors... you and I are alike in SO many ways... :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Sorry for the summary *shrugs* I kinda tend to put whatever comes to mind and hope that it attracts the masses LOL. But I'm still happy that you like it.
on a sidenote, MADE is a fic written by my friend Lazurline, not by me. She and I tend to have two different and yet distinct writing styles lol. But I love the story MADE too, so yea. I do know that you favortied my oneshot 'Erosion' however, and I'm glad that you did, because that was one of my most important ones ^_^
Date: 01/25/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
I love this story... you gotta keep going!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you do, like really ^_^ and I will
Date: 01/25/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
Awww I love it! I hope Bill and Tom become more closer. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm happy you love it ^_^. er...I can't promise that, because they're kinda retarded xD
Date: 01/25/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
So cute *goes on to babytalk the chapter*
Is Mani pronounced with a short or long 'a' sound?
Tom and Bill are flirting. I swear they are (without realizing it). It makes me happy inside ^_^
Author's Response: the same way you say Armani. xD
And........you're weird. xD
Date: 01/25/10 04:28 am Title: Chapter 7: Shut Down By Strangers Whose Glances Can Cripple The Heart
yay!!! i'm so happy about an update!! tom's interest is very cute. i hope you dont wait so long to update again, i just love this story. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Lol, I'm happy you're happy about the update. And Tom's interest is totally weird. but funny. xD