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Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

please don't delete this wonderful story
i pity Tom cuz he's only Alex's doll
i hope that he'll admit it soon

i really want them to not argue anymore...



mooooooooooooore?

Author's Response: I won't I won't. I'm enjoying writing for it nowadays. just trying not to update too much or I'll lose my mpreg muse. and bahhh don't worry too much love, they'll be fine.

Reviewer: Loneee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

huhu, Bill's beeing kinda.. bitchy. Meh lieks :D

Author's Response: Lol. Me no likey bitchy Bill in this xD

Reviewer: Dianqa2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

i am reviewing...i love this story veery much..
one thing i dont like- since i only begun reading... is there a possibility that u wont update formore than a month?..plz dont do that!!! plzplzplzplzplzpzl
tyvm!!

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you love it, and honestly, idk. When I write something that isn't completely finished, I don't have a set updating schedule because a. I have school and crap outside of this fandom/THF that takes over and b. sometimes I just get the urge to write for something else. I do try to work on my fics in moderation though, so I can ~try~ to have something done. I'm hoping to update as quickly as my brain will let me though ^^

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you love it, and honestly, idk. When I write something that isn't completely finished, I don't have a set updating schedule because a. I have school and crap outside of this fandom/THF that takes over and b. sometimes I just get the urge to write for something else. I do try to work on my fics in moderation though, so I can ~try~ to have something done. I'm hoping to update as quickly as my brain will let me though ^^

Reviewer: Dianqa2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes I really HATE who you are.

I love it... onmg to think that this really happens in the real world...it's just... i donno what i would have done...but Tom...i cantbelive him...

Author's Response: lol, mhmmm, i would imagine that it does, just not EXACTLY like this, thank the lord. And leave Tomi alone. he's ~innocent~

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

more more more ooo and you need to update princess cafe

Author's Response: Lol, there's more up now, and I'll get to it. I'm trying to work through stuff my muses actually like atm. xD

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

I hope everything goes well.

Author's Response: It will...eventually

Reviewer: Kenyatta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/10 10:26 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

Awesome chapter! Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ and there's more up now!

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/10 04:45 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

-cries then hugs Bill through his tummy- it's gonna be okay right? right??? more plz?

Author's Response: lol it'll be fineeeeeeee. xD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

OMFG>>>>plz update again like NOW. i love u and this haha

Author's Response: Lol, it's updated now ^_^

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes I really HATE who you are.

Thanks for this chapter, I love this story so much, well I like all your stories...you are one of my favourite authors on this site, so thank you for you wonderful breathtaking stories ...:-)

Author's Response: no problem love. ^_^ I'm glad you love it so much, hell I'm glad you love all my stories, I work hard to post for you guys ^_^

Reviewer: Akira Ashiya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 09:46 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

Yaaaay!

I can has moar, plz? :D

Author's Response: Lol, of course!

Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 07:17 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

wow this is amazing and so heartbreaking can't wait to read more

Author's Response: *grins* thank you, I'm glad you think so, and there's more now ^_^

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 06:30 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

I love it!!! I totally agree with both what you said at the end and what Bill thinks about Tom. Tom does seriously need to have a reality check, get away from the controling people in his life and finally become the person who he really is where he can think and act the way he wants without someone controling him. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Lol, I ~don't~ agree with what Bill said about Tom, tbh. He's not a bad guy. He's got a lot of shit going on that you guys don't know (that Bill doesn't know) and he pitted to look like the bad guy, but he does love his son, and he has tried to help, but he also knows that he's in a situation that he can't get out of.

Reviewer: beeceexx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

I really like your writing style and the story so far i love how you are not one of those authors who they meet and suddenly everything is butterflies and daisys. The characters are developing slowly and at a realistic pace. I also like how Bill has done so much for his son and how he is a man who will do anything and yet is still very intependant and 'Manly' i guess. I have to admit that i haven't liked Tom much but i guess that will change and i even saw some other sides of him then teh uncaring father in this chapter. Anyway good job and please update quickly this in one of teh stories i really want to know what's going to happen!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you like my writing style (it's fluxuated a bit here since I went through about 2-3 writing phases during writing/posting this LOL) but I'm glad you like how slow it's moving. I'm always worried about the pace, but seeing that you actually like it that way, it makes it SO much easier to write this lol. And dude, Bill is a guy, I can't write him too 'girly', not even in stories where he's IN a dress. I just can't. xD But I'm glad you like it, and that you can see that side of Tom that he keeps hiding away. ^_^

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

It's about time Bill told him off. He needed it like...years ago >.> Like when he first tried to take Mani.

And I AM weird, Darlin'. After all, I DO like twincest xD

Author's Response: Lol, psh. Bill only deserves to tell people off when he knows the entire story. Cause right about now I guarantee he's regretting everything he just said to Tom.

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 02:58 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

:)

Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

Mani is a sweetheart
is he mute?
but he hears right?

i like a little angst but not too much...

Author's Response: Lol, thanks ^^ Er, he's mute, but not deaf, and him being mute is because he was taken away from Bill ;_; but I LOVE angst....and this is not even NEAR 'too much' LOL. i've got stories WAY WAY WAY worse than this xD

Reviewer: icemint Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

I am so incredibly hurt for Bill and Mani. I love this story and it's so frustrating for me to see Tom act like such a wuss. I'm really proud of Bill and how he's come back from bottom up. This happens so much in real life and my heart just breaks at how true some things are. Good job, bravo, really. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: ;_; Don't be hurt, things work out, and yanno, 8 reviews in and I'm grinding my teeth at y'all cause Tom's NOT a wuss nor is he a bad man. everyone (Bill included) is making decisions about his personality based on what Bill's seen, rather than anything factual in Tom's life, and it sucks for me cause I KNOW there's more going on behind the scenes. least you guys get a look into his life in the chapter that i just updated

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

Loved it but seriously Tom is a jerk. I loved the fast update because this story is one of favorites! Mani is the cutest thing EVER! I thought he was going to talk. Hopefully soon! Update soon!

Author's Response: Lol, nahhhhhhhh, not really. it's all a facade, I promise xD And nahhh, Mani isn't gonna talk for a while. I've got plans for him xD

Reviewer: huntstx2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Vision I Was Seeing Is Finally Clear

Bill is such a badass...he totally owned Tom in this chapter...especially at the end

and come on Tom! man up fool lol XD

Author's Response: Lol, so you thinkkkkkkkk. read the next chapter. you'll see a bit clearer xD

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