Date: 09/22/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really really, totally loved this one chapter in particular. I mean, I know there's still a long way (I so do wish it's long) for this to end (cries helplessly) but this chapter will surely remain as one of my favourites. So much suspense! Yeah, I guess Tom is right, Bill is a little androgynous. Update soon, please?
Author's Response: I will try to update as soon as possible, I've got a lot to do at the moment but just bare with me please :D
Date: 09/22/09 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow you really are a great narrator and you do know how to intrigue people! Totally awesome, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/31/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy crap, I'm so pissed there isn't a third chapter yet.
That ending was such a cliffhanger!
I'm so excited about this story.
The plot sounds pretty damn cool,
and you're writing it nicely, too.
Author's Response: Oh gosh, I just read this, 'holy crap, I'm so pissed..' and I thought 'OH NO THEY DON'T LIKE IT!' but omg, thank you so much. Really, that's like inspired me to hurry up and write the next chapter, thank you soooooooo much xD
Date: 08/29/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love this, update more if you can bc this is rlly good.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/29/09 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooohh this is so eerie and different, I love it! Can't wait for the next update! (:
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/29/09 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
....OUH :)
like that
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/29/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww!!! You dedicated this to me!!! *where's that fangirling smiley when you need it* XD
But I really loved this chapter. Tom's a total douche to go to Bill (because seriously, normal people just try to avoid the creepy stuff XD) - but at least they're meeting!!! Yay!!! LOL
Can't wait for the third chapter!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for doing the quick beta on it for me, I really don't know where mine has disappeared off to. Ha, I know Tom is a total douche, bless him.
Date: 08/29/09 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooo this is exciting! :D
Although, wouldn't you be unable to reply to a text if the sender was unkown?
Author's Response: That is a very good point, but when someone sends you a text message the number usually comes up with it, and, Tom is obviously replying to that number and just because I couldn't be bothered to make up a mobile number I just decided to have the sender say unknown. I hope this doesn't confuse you too much or anything. I'm glad you're enjoying this so far xD
Date: 08/29/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/10/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll admit, I'm a little confused by what's going on so far - but, mostly, I'm just intrigued. I can't wait to find out what happens next. =)
Author's Response: What are you confused about? Maybe I can clear your confusion up a bit. And I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Date: 07/14/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Author's Response: Glad you do! :)
Date: 07/14/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohh!! another story from you x]
I like this start; and I'm too excited to see more lol
Author's Response: Hahaa, thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...that's creepy...but not like the other stories...cool.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very nice and captivating. I will definitely continue reading this! I have this feeling that Tom will go meet this stranger and I love Andi for some unknown reason. I guess it was just the description of him twirling his hair :PPP
Btw, RESPECT for writing this while sick Laura. If I had been in your position, there wouldn't be a single coherent sentence for anyone to read :P
Author's Response: Yay for Andi :) Hahahaa, when I read that 'respect' I read it just like Gustav says it in that one THTV episode; RESPPPEECT. Anyway thank you so much :) even though I'm a little better, being stuck in bed all day with nothing to do I just had to write another story ^__^
Date: 07/13/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL~~ 00ooh~ something fun and dangerous in Tom's life~ XDD i wonder if he'll us reply to the "unknown sender" that he has the wrong number now. LOL
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm intruiged! I'll continue to read this :D Update soon.
Author's Response: Will do and thank you :)
Date: 07/13/09 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Now, if I had to get a message like that I'd delete it and wonder for the whole day what the hell just happened.
But Tom, lol, shame he thinks it's Andi playing a joke on him.
I'm liking where this is going. I usually don't like horror (unless it's paranormal) because they just scare me... I hope this won't be too scary.
But I like it. I want to know what happens when Tom goes down to the Docks!
Author's Response: If I got a message like that I'd do exactly what you would do :) But thats because we're sensible and if Tom did that then there wouldn't be a story LOL. Anyway, don't worry I don't think there will be ~that much of horror-- I've only planned to the 5th chapter and there's not anything too drastic. And eh, who said Tom will go down to the Docks?! ;) Thanks for the review Chels ^__^
Date: 07/13/09 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems like it's going to be a very intriguing story! I love the mystery and hints of horror...I'm very curious to see what will happen in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetieeee :)
Date: 07/13/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooo I like "who done its!" keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thank youuuu :)
Date: 07/13/09 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh! This is certaintly very interesting and I can see that it's going to very much draw me in!
Update soon?
Author's Response: Thank youuuuuu :) I have no idea when the next update will be, in the near future hopefully :)