Date: 02/22/12 04:01 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
I'm sorry about your dad, and just to let you know I love this story, and i think it's amazingly well written - hope you update soon! xx
Date: 01/22/12 11:38 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
Write more please! :) This is so cute!
Date: 07/21/11 07:08 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
tom-ass. Lol! The chapter is great!! I want a continuation!!! As for the CEN, i'm sorry about your dad. I hope everything will turn out alright.
Date: 07/21/11 12:13 pm Title: Contemplation, and the rules.
gotta say, tom needs to grow some balls.
Date: 07/21/11 12:00 pm Title: First days, and morning haze.
so that's the reason, huh? quite weird andreas said nothing about bill's make up.
Date: 07/21/11 11:12 am Title: Welcoming, and clumsiness.
wow. it's a nice change to see tom as the hated, unpopular one. it's usually bill. i wonder what's the mystery about tom.. oh well i'll go read the rest of the chapters. love the plot :)
Date: 06/04/11 04:59 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
Oh ho ho.
What?
What?
What?
I'm everywhere.
Which means, I'm still here, too.
Date: 04/10/11 04:45 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
*shyly rubs foot in the dirt*
...Hey there, person...
*suddenly frantically waves arms*
I'M STILL HERE, GIRLY. HOW YOU DOIN'?
Yeah, just droppin' by, because I'm incessantly annoying.
Date: 03/20/11 06:24 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
i'm really sorry you had to endure losing a father; it never is easy and as much as they say it gets better, it will forever hurt you...well done on perservering with you life like this - maybe writing is a good way to channel you energy and emotions.......AND it showz =D i'm really liking the developement in this story, i'm just sooo curious as to what Tom did to piss off Andi soo much, and what bout Adam???
i also seems that Tom is opening up to Bill which makes me happy that he can be himself now...bt i'm fearful of how Andi is gonna react to this developement -_-'''
excited bout the next chapter, cause i really enjoy reading this story...so keep it up ;D
Date: 03/07/11 12:36 am Title: Basketballs and Harmony
This chapter more than makes up for the wait. I'm so glad you started writing again and I'm terribly sorry about your dad. Maybe writing will help you take you mind off things?
Date: 02/13/11 11:57 am Title: Basketballs and Harmony
This is a sweet story.
Date: 02/09/11 03:22 am Title: Basketballs and Harmony
I love this story. I think its coming along great and cannot wait for more. Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Reviews like this really mean a lot to me. I'm going to try my best to update much more frequently. I hope you keep reading!! :D
Date: 02/09/11 12:58 am Title: Basketballs and Harmony
Sorry for your loss and all that you're dealing with. I loved this update! The interaction between Bill and Tom was so fun to read! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it :D I was afraid the interactions between Tom and Bill would come off a little silly, but i thought it was important to show that their relationship is still growing, and they can tease and stuff, ya know. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 02/09/11 12:20 am Title: Basketballs and Harmony
I'm afraid Tom and I share the same level of physical fitness skill.
I can't run to save my life.
..Or play sports.
Or anything even remotely energy exerting. But hey, we all have our weaknesses.
I also love how Bill isn't some small flailing girl, and can actually play sports, haha it's different.
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I am seriously just as bad as Tom is myself, lol. I think it takes a lot of skill to be good at a sport, and not alot of people can say that they are. I know that snippit about Bill's strength is sort of a filler-fluffy info snap, but i thought it was important to show that he really wasn't like some 'small flailing girl', as i steal your words. Thanks so much for the review!!
Date: 02/08/11 09:55 pm Title: Basketballs and Harmony
This is really good! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 01/31/11 11:07 pm Title: Poems, and ex's.
Haha, Bill's enthusiasm during Tom's story XD.
The ultimate cliffhanger depresses me though...
Author's Response: i was originally going to have tom's story be a flashback, but i though Bill's participation in the recitation was important so i changed it up a bit last minute. i honestly love this version much better, and i'm glad you liked' Bill's enthusiasm! I'm sorry about the cliffhanger, and for it having been such a long time since this last update, but i'm hopeing to change that soon. I think my muse died recently, but the gods decided to bring her back to life and now i should have the next chapter posted within the next few days!!! thanks for the comment!
Date: 01/31/11 10:35 pm Title: Contemplation, and the rules.
Ohhh!
I just made the connection that Tom's childhood friend was named Andreas, and Andreas is also the name of Tom's bully!
They're the same people!
It may be obvious, but I feel proud none the less.
Author's Response: I really tried to make it obvious, because yes, they are the same person, but i was worried some people wouldn't quite get that. good for you though! :D
Date: 01/31/11 10:27 pm Title: First days, and morning haze.
Wait..he's hated because he's gay?
Really?
Kids can be so stupidly cruel, eugh.
Author's Response: unfortunately it's a really common thing. I've moved 22 times, and in all teh schools i've been to, there's always at least one asshole who thinks it's ok to hate on the 'different' kid.
Date: 01/31/11 10:16 pm Title: Getting to know you games, and emberassing moments.
“It’s summer Mom, I’m an 8th grader now, God! That’s like, almost high school.”
Ha! I acted the EXACT same way in middle school!
Author's Response: haha, yeah i know, right? i think that's classic middle school attitude. 'don't treat me like a kid'. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 04/19/10 10:50 am Title: Poems, and ex's.
*knock, knowck* Hello? Just dropped by to see if there are any updates.
I really hate the way Andi seems to control Tom's life in school. I hope that with Bill around they both (Bill and Tom) can gain the strength to stand up to the bullies. Two heads are better than one for sure.
Author's Response: *checks peep hole...* oh! hello :D I'm so glad of your review, i love to hear reader's interpretations of the story. It certainly does seem Adreas is controlling Tom's school life. We'll just have to wait and see what role Bill will play in all of this :D keep an eye out ;)