Reviews For Do You Wanna
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Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/12 08:45 am Title: I Know That You Want It

My, my... :-) VERY sexy... And sweet to. One can only hope things will progress quite nicely after that. ;-)

Reviewer: anay Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 02:21 am Title: I Know That You Want It

tom by God

Author's Response: Um...is that a good comment? I hope so... :)

Reviewer: x_Loveless Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/10 12:45 am Title: I Know That You Want It

I'm quickly taking a liking to Samy/Tom, and this definitely sealed the deal, haha. Great fic!

Author's Response: *takes a bow* Thank you, Thank you =)

But seriously, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bellausa11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 12:33 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

O.O

phwoaaaaaaar.
im LOVING tom/samy.
good job :D

Author's Response: Thank you! =)

Reviewer: darkrainz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/10 05:02 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

I love it when people use that song in their fanfics. It just makes it a whole lot more interesting. And i also like the fact that you made one of Tom's dreams come true. It was very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I had alot of fun writing it.

Reviewer: tomisgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/10 10:10 am Title: I Know That You Want It

i have never been a big fan of samy/tom but after reading this i'll give it a shot

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/09 10:39 am Title: I Know That You Want It

The storyline isn't bad. The characters are a little flat but not painfully slow. One painful bit for me is the dialogue, oy! Please don't mix German and English. If the story is in English and we're pretending that German is English so we can understand don't mix the two. “Mein Gott! You a tranny?” *smacks hand* no bad! The criss cross of German/English took away from the very funny line.

The kicker the thing that kills this story for me is the lack of details. I don't mean the exact outfit each of them was wearing, kind of details. I mean like the transition between the club to the cab to the hotel room. You have each one like that's the important bit. Yes it is important but what's more important or more important for the storyline is the emotional details.

Examples:
Samy was so focused on her ass he didn't see anything or anyone between the dance floor and the back of the cab.

The girl was clearly nervous, Samy was regretting that he even bothered to pick her up he hated it when they turned into shy waifs at the last minute, he sighed inwardly at the effort it would take to get a good fuck out of her.

Do you see you have to get the emotional details in there to give the story depth?

On the upside there are lots of little bits that are good. - The guy hung his head, a blush gracing his cheeks, “I’m a huge fan and I didn’t think I fit the male requirements for you to fuck me. So I thought, if I dressed up, maybe you’d at least dance with me. I-I never expected to get this far.” – this is really a good bit here!

“emergency” kit. It was a small black bag with almost any sexual thing one could think of that could fit in it. – this is also good too. Lube is super important and I love that it’s an “emergency” kit haven’t come across someone who’s had that. Good detail and funny little twist.

Author's Response: Wow...what a review. Thanks for pointing stuff out, I really do like your reviews cuz they make me think back on the story. I'm sorry there wasn't alot of details, but it is a songfic and I generally don't put loads of details, although I do see what you mean, I probably could've added a bit more. But I am glad you liked the "emergency kit" idea.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:45 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

I'm not a Tomshido fan, but that was HOT! Good job on the smut!

Author's Response: Thanks...I think Samy Deluxe is hot...even though Tom is sexier, so I figured, why not pair 'em up?

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:18 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

Fuck that was hawt!!!!!! (LOVE this song too. It's soo Tom's anthem.)

Author's Response: Oh yea...it fits him real good. And I'm glad you liked it =)

Reviewer: scarletswidow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 08:16 am Title: I Know That You Want It

Tom/Samy porn, possibly my favourite thing ever :D

Author's Response: I know right? And there's not near enough of it.

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 05:31 am Title: I Know That You Want It

this song XD

Author's Response: I know...everytime I hear it, I think of Tom...*sigh* it's a yummy thought though

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:07 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

The idea of Tom and Samy together is just hot, but when you add the cross dressing into the mix it's scorching. I just wished you had made the actual sex more torturous. Like if Samy licked the heels he liked so much, or Tom sucked on his nipple. It was all very well written, I just wished it was longer and that you had added the video and not the lyrics, they defeat the point. All in all, it was a great read, and it made me smile.:).

Author's Response: Ah man! I didn't think of that! And I couldn't add the video because I couldn't get permission from the creator on youtube (well at least the one I found that I liked). If I can, I'll add one on later. But, I am really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: nekodark Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 10:45 pm Title: I Know That You Want It

I love you for this, really do and I am becoming a SammyxTom lover even more...need more of this pairing!, the way you write them is a BIG fave of mines.

Thank you for Posting.

Author's Response: Your welcome. I love this pairing, but there's not alot of it. And thank you for liking it so much =)

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