Date: 07/19/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
I'm SO glad Gustav noticed. But then, that guy notices everything. *huggles* Good job, hun
Date: 07/19/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
At least Gustav will admit that there's something "off" about that girl. Duh.
This story is really creepy, so I'm glad that's what you were really aiming for.
You can even write creepy stuff well. I'm so proud of you!
Author's Response: -huggles- Danke schon mein sechsling!!! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 07/19/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
*shivers because it's actually thundering and lightning here* I actually looked behind me when Bill did gave me goosebumps...it's getting creepy-er....
Date: 07/11/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
omg!!! really good!!! *Pulls out Patented Bill Pout* more please!!!
Date: 07/11/09 02:14 am Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
*murmurs to self* Georg will protect me, Georg will protect me...
Date: 07/10/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
Elizabeth is an uber bitch. Can't even call her a betch, cuz that's a term of endearment.
I'm sure Bill will be fine, since you won't kill off the singer of the group that this is about, right? RIGHT?!
Date: 07/10/09 08:20 am Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
Ok, time for Bill to get his claws out!
He can so out-bitch that bitch!
Date: 07/10/09 04:45 am Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
*sharpens blade* i'm gonna have to kill that bitch eh? No one hurts my..er Tomi's Billa >.> xD
Date: 07/10/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 2: Locked in?
I totes don't want to sleep just reading about her, to be honest. You wrote this amazingly.
Date: 07/09/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: Locked in?
That girl gives me the creeps too. Ick. She just gives off a vibe, ya know?
Date: 07/09/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: Locked in?
Ooooh! I really like this so far. The plot is cool. I always wondered when Tom would knock someone up...and the fact that she looks like Bill is great haha! Elizabeth seems....off, somehow. It's like she has a personal vendetta against Bill, which probably means she might be after Tom. She knows they are together and wants to eliminate Bill, perhaps??? Just a guess. That or she's just a psyco-freak who like raped Tom to get preggo. I'm still trying to figure out what exactly her motive is, but I guess we will find out! Please continue!
Date: 07/09/09 05:26 am Title: Chapter 2: Locked in?
yeaaaaaaaaaa. so elizabeth creeps me out xD like big time. bill should listen to his instincts more often!!
Date: 07/08/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: What Happens in L.A. Doesn't Always Stay There
And they are all supposed to be able to sleep with her there? *shudder*
Date: 07/08/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: What Happens in L.A. Doesn't Always Stay There
Again with the ominousness. Is that even a word?
I already don't like her. The smirk makes her sound like an uber bitch, and I don't like girls like that. I hope she gets punched in the eye or somethig by an irate fan at some point in time. You can punch pregnant ladies in the eye and not hurt the baby.
Date: 07/08/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1: What Happens in L.A. Doesn't Always Stay There
Well...you get me wondering a lot of things here...like, what the fuck is her plan? I mean...idk what to think anymore! Though I have a bad feeling about this girl and all this!!
Update soon, please!! *puppy eyes*
Date: 07/08/09 01:54 am Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
Tom's!? *dies* How!? How fucking it's Tom's! I'm intrigued now!!
*goes off to read more*
Date: 07/07/09 10:33 pm Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
Bloody terrible british accent lol sounds familar to me but w/e...looks like a great start to a great story my zwilling *taklehugs*
Date: 07/07/09 04:49 pm Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
Wow, that was reallt ominous with the lightening flash and the 3 AM bit and everything. This is going to be amazing, so don't worry. I'm looking forward to this... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (I almost put too many "h"s in there!)
Date: 07/07/09 11:30 am Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
I love it so far! :)
Date: 07/07/09 03:40 am Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
All I can say is: You don't love me anymore
Author's Response: -tacklehugswithcookiesgeoandgoodsex- yes i doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo u know this mah wifey!