Date: 08/15/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
That is one creepy girl. Such a good story, it has me all paranoid over here.
Date: 08/15/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1: What Happens in L.A. Doesn't Always Stay There
OMI I don't know what is that girl up to yet but she creeps me out.
Date: 08/14/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 9: Running Out of Time
someone needs to expose her for the lying coniving little skank she is...and soon...
Date: 08/13/09 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
hmmm...i hate storms...they start playing tricks on your mind to begin with...to have some psycho other than the ones your used to, in the house too can't make him feel any better...at least saki's looking out for the boy's...
Date: 08/13/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 9: Running Out of Time
Is she killing everyone off? Gah, what a bitch! You would think that since Bill and the boys are David's meal ticket, he'd believe them or at least investigets a bit before just blowing them off. What a jerk.
She's a liar and a horrible actress. I didn't have any visuals for that scene, but what I saw in my head made me think she sucks.
Date: 08/13/09 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 9: Running Out of Time
she is EVIL, I tell ya, EEEVVVIIILLL!! (I swear I've heard that before .. somewhere) Meh - its works here :) I want to punch that b*tch so HARD for fucking with Billa && Tomi. They are meant for eachother - not her skanky ass!! HEHE
Date: 08/13/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 9: Running Out of Time
Nathalie, Dunja AND TOBI!? My god. . . .
I had a dream (or rather, nightmare) about her the other night. It were scary
Date: 08/13/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
Go Saki, for being all supe-sneaky-ninja while researching Elizabeth! I lubbers him!
God, I really have to get cracking on that one shot where I step on her neck...
Date: 08/12/09 09:26 am Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
dun dun dun - cliffhanger :) hehe - See Bill isn't the only one :) (finally) can't wait for the update :)
Date: 08/12/09 07:54 am Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
It can't be just my own hairs rising from the back of my neck at this point. Seriously, this girl and her creepiness is making my skin crawl. I think the twins should pretend to show interest in the 'pregnancy' and insist to go with her to appointments, etc. just to keep trying to dig deeper rather than snoop, because in that department, she seems to be right ahead of them all.
Just, something, because sitting here saying you don't trust her won't get rid of her. Something has to be done and if she wants attention, let's pretend to give it to her.
Date: 08/12/09 03:52 am Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
daaaammmn!!!!!!!!!!! I'm addicted! this story is awesome, i cant wait for the next one. I officially hate elizabeth(if that is her real name*chuckle*). Ithink she is a psycho who's in love with tom, and wants bil to die so that she can have him al to herself. bt, i think there is something supernatural about her, too. how else would she be there and gone in a second, and have david think that the doctor says she's pregnant when she isnt?? I love your portrayal of the characters, they seem true to real life, at least what we know of them. and i like that idea that the band and crew know about bill and tom. in real life, if its love, i highly doubt the people you trust wouldnt accept it. the press, no, but the people you are closest to? yes. plus, i can inly go through so many of the "trying to hide the incestuous relationship" stories before it gets REALLY boring. i love it!!! continue and update fast please!
luv - ur new fan
Date: 08/12/09 03:44 am Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
NOOOOOOO TOM! DON'T LEAVE BILL ON HIS OWN!!! ARE YOU STUPID?!
OMG, now I'm terrified for the next chapter :(
Gosh, can you kill that girl already. The twins have such a happy relationship. I hate that she's trying to destroy it. But at least Saki is on Bill's side now.
Oh, and did I mention ....
NO TOM, DON'T LEAVE BILL ON HIS OWN!!!
Date: 08/11/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
can i PLEASE kill her? *plans to start working on the me version of this fic* xD imma kill that bitch xD and CUTE pic
Date: 08/11/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Loud Noise
Oh thank god Saki's on board too *huggles him lots and lots*
What has that freak of a chick done now?
Date: 08/10/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 7: Snooping
she's conna get it all right...everything she deserves...and how can you stop there??
Date: 08/10/09 11:16 am Title: Chapter 6: Watching
stalker much? she needs to be gotten rid of...and soon...
Date: 08/10/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 5: On Fire
bill shouldn't have gone alone...but if he didin't, this chapter wouldn't have happenend...
Date: 08/10/09 10:58 am Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
she's sneaky...i'll give her that...
Date: 08/10/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter 3: Dream-Like State
poor bill...someone needs to watch this girl at all times...
Date: 08/10/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Locked in?
i don't like her...she's sneaky...at least bill is willing to talk to tom...