Date: 04/22/11 09:18 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
WOW! Sexii Hexii!
Date: 08/27/10 02:10 am Title: Ablutophilia
You are great.
plain and simple.
Date: 12/21/09 10:38 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
this was so great...my fav is the last one ;) i love submissive Tomi
Date: 10/25/09 11:14 am Title: Ablutophilia
The beginning had me gagging. Bill is totes insane but this is still really interesting. I can't wait to continue reading. :D
Date: 08/19/09 12:00 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
The rope is rough in all the right ways. Silky to the touch but if it pinches between the edges and creases of his skin it turns into something far more course and cutting. – how could the rope be rough and silky?
Taking the wrench in one hand and the loop in the other Tom, the ever willing victim in the nights game, strung the wrench through the loop around his neck. - *grins* I love it when Tom is the willing victim or sometimes the unwilling victim!
Tom needs a lot to get off when he is in charge of the act himself. During sex, no, all it took is a hot dick and five minutes of pounding before it is all over. – lol slutty Tomi!
But still, the task became a chore rather then a treat and soon the reason became clear. It isn’t that it didn’t feel devilishly wonderful; it is the lack of human feel. – ah! *nods* I understand
As the first waves of pleasure lap away at Tom he pulls ever tighter and begins to hump into his hands, tingles rushing up his nerve endings and assaulting his brain. Air is still breathable but a definite effort has to be made in taking a single breath. The rope is doing exactly what Tom loves best. – I can never get into this I like air too much! I’m greed that way.
Tom immediately does as told, throwing the wrench from his hand and over the edge of the bed, bending forward as the weight pulls him and still humping at his hand. - *grins*
“Now bring it here, bitch,” Georg teases, and Tom looks up unsure of the command. Georg rolls his eyes towards his slave, unsure how he ended up with such a dense model, and elaborates, “Crawl here. Now.” – lol cleary Tom is new!
“And are you going to ask permission?” - *grins*
“Four, you shove in four and no less.” Tom sucks down once more and quickly maneuvers his hand around before jerking them in. – wow…uuuhhh hot!
Tom nods his head the best he can and soon Georg begins to feel the strange pleasure of a sloppy blow job. – lol *grins*
“You’ve been listening,” Georg praises, only slightly, “Still not over a seven but better then a fail.” – lol barely a complement ha ha
Tom smiles around the head at this, teeth scraping lightly and receives as sharp tug on the leash – yeah dude!
he likes to watch his whore shake and shudder with his orgasm first. Not only does it leave him with a swelling sense of accomplishment and pride but it’s also fucking hot. – yeah huh!
“Just please sir please give me the wrench!” Georg thinks on it before deciding the site of Tom strangling himself will be a delicious one indeed. - *grins*
In his eyes Tom is most beautiful right now, calm, submissive, waiting on him to cum while he is perched pleasantly on his knees. Orgasms calm him, unwind the tight little ball of nerves, Georg just has to get it so he is like this pre-orgasm as well but that’s what their training is for. - *grins* oh that is lovely! *sigh* I like the image of a perfectly submissive Tom!
Georg knows he’s getting better and will one day make a good slave. He can’t help it though; he’s a whore for it. For pain, for pleasure, for degradation and for submission. But most of all Tom’s a whore for the biting pain of burning lungs and desperate need for air. - *grins*
Date: 08/19/09 11:29 am Title: Zelophilia
He loved the thrill that came with seducing someone before letting them drop, giving a goodbye wave and leaving them to their hand for that night. – OMG I know it’s so much fun!
He loved seeing Tom’s face turn red with anger and jealousy. It was simply delicious, the best treat. – lol
Making Tom squirm simply by kissing or letting another man grab his ass was the highlight of every night. Bill fed off of his brother’s reactions. Maybe that was why Tom had stopped going out with the group. Without Tom to play with, Bill was a bored little boy. – lol serves him a little bit right!
Bill would never discriminate against any man especially if the man treated him like the little princess he was. - *snorts*
The bar always felt empty and strange after Tom left and that was certainly not an environment that Bill could work his best in. – hum?
Bill was a virgin. Though it might shock some that had ever come in counter with his seducing charms, it was the complete truth. – lol
There was something that still didn’t feel right and Bill definitely didn’t want to mess up giving his virginity to the wrong person. - *sigh* I hate it when people think that virginity is something precious. *eye roll*
He was always waiting for the one, of course. That one was too fucking slow. - lol
There was no need for the older twin to put effort into being ‘pretty’. That was Bill’s job, after all. – lol
Tom groaned and nodded, his eyes glazing over as he rocked his hips underneath Bill’s. He could never help himself when Bill sat atop his lap like this and started to tease him. – and he still hasn’t caught on that Bill wants him?
Tom always left before he too became too excited over the fact. – what is it that he thinks he will do?
As Bill’s lips carefully landed against his, Tom knew that the night was just beginning, and it was time for a few hours of flirting, teasing and jealousy. This time, he wouldn’t leave barely half way through. This time, he wanted to see the whole show rather than just the beginning act. This time, he would make his brother hard. – oh!
Bushido. - *grins*
Bushido and Bill had had plenty a rendezvous before this night, but none of them had ever been acknowledged outside of the bedroom. They hadn’t gone far, Bill still keeping his virginity from the desperate rapper. – lol I’d love to see that story Bushido gagging for it!
Tom was standing in the same place, his arms folded and his face red with anger and envy. Bill could squee if it wouldn’t totally ruin the mood he had already helped set with tonight’s catch. - lol
He let Bushido play with him a little bit more before his erection was just too much, his mind going woozy as the dark skinned man reached between them to teasingly grab him. - *grins*
Not only could Bill himself see the prominent tent created in his jeans coupled with the all knowing wet spot of his precum, but he could feel his arousal as well. All he wanted to do now was go home and be fucked as thoroughly as possible. Hopefully, Tom would be the man to finally take his virginity. - *grins*
They both sat in the car together, Bill in the passenger seat with one hand down his pants, gently teasing his poor tortured cock. – nice!
“Jealous, Tomi?” He questioned, and Tom nodded.
“You have no fucking idea.”
Bill felt the throes of orgasm taking over his body and he shook, a pleased sigh leaving his lips as he quite literally came in his jeans. – wow just by saying it? lol
Date: 08/19/09 11:03 am Title: Ablutophilia
Of course, keeping a straight face and performing had been hard, but what had been hardest was knowing that he wouldn’t be able to deal with this properly once the show had finished. – why is he having trouble keeping a straight face? And how is he going to deal with it?
No matter how much he needed him near, tonight he just had to be alone. – well that’s a contradiction.
He had been tortured enough earlier, and he thought he at least deserved a break. Well, his pants sure did. Poor skinny jeans. - lol
Stepping into the hotel bathroom, Bill turned and looked into the mirror before cringing. He looked disgusting. Nothing like his twin, his beautiful twin. He wasn’t Tom. He never would be. He was disgusting. – awh!
He angrily ripped his shirt off, throwing it to the floor before doing the same to his tight jeans. He hated them. But he knew Tom loved them. – wait what Tom like Bill’s skinny jeans but wears a pair large enough to house a small Rwandan family?
Tom had forgotten to empty it in his rush to get out. Jackpot. – what?
Tom had no clue what his mess up had done to Bill. He would be anxious all day. – what?
Now naked, he was letting one foot test the still semi-warm water – he took the shower this morning and it’s still warm even after the concert? Or am I just confused?
Every nook and cranny of his body was subjected to the stained water. Not that he minded, of course. This was the same water that had enveloped Tom in his unattainable beauty. The same water that had cleansed his brother was now cleansing him, in a completely different way. – oh?…o~o~oh!!!!
The essence of Tom was present in every single molecule of the water, the filthiness only seeming more attractive in Bill’s eyes. – oh
This way, Tom could always be with him, even if he wasn’t. – well sort of
It was so erotic. – um maybe for Bill but ewww!
He imagined that he could smell it inside his nose, and it smelled heavenly. Just like him. In truth, it smelt quite strange. Musky but sweet at the same time. – ok a little gross.
he let his tongue run against the insides of his cheek’s. He could still taste Tom all over him. He needed more. – oy!
Pulling himself up to rest his elbows on the side of the tub, He cupped the water between his palms before slowly bringing it up to his mouth. – eewwww!
Tom was all over him. Tom was cleaning him, dirtying him at the same time. - *grins*
He hardened more, imagining what Tom would do if he was found in this position. – be shocked I’m sure!
He would most likely sleep on the couch again, unnoticed as a drunk Tom and some girl fucked, the moans and screams making him secretly pant. – ok hot!
fantasizing his own death, having Tom find him. Tom finding his little brother, drowning in his own bathwater and blood. – I don’t think that would make Tom feel warm and fuzzy.
He was dying. For real, this time.
As he felt the last of his life slip past his now pruned fingers, he heard a scream and a crash – why did Tom come in? what gave him a clue that he needed to be in the bathroom?
It was a murky brown color, stray hair’s floating around mixing with an unknown white substance that looked mysteriously like… - *giggles*
Bill’s eyes snapped open as he felt Tom’s lips covering his, and he instinctively shoved his tongue into the mouth above him. - *gasp* oops
Had Bill thought that he was kissing him? Was what everyone said true about his brother? His flirting, his teasing...did his brother feel that way towards him? – oh my Tom how could YOU have not noticed?
He knew on some level that whatever Bill had been doing in that water wasn't washing himself, no matter how much he wished it was so he could brush his twin off as being at least semi-normal. – well Bill could have been filthy!
His head was still fuzzy from before and he didn't know what to think as Tom slipped out of his shoes and pants, left only in his boxers and socks. – Tom?
"Tomi...Tomi, please don't cry." Bill pleaded, brushing away some of the tears. "I won't...I won't do it again, I promise I won't." – awh Tom
"I don't know what the fuck you want from me anymore, Bill." He admitted, moving back only to lean right back in and kiss his twin again. "I don't know what you want from me."
"I want you, Tomi." Bill breathed, moving his head to the side and giving Tom access to the wet skin of his neck which Tom took almost immediately. "God, I want you." – oh?!
Tom was just as fucked up as Bill, having been watching his baby brother for months and secretly wanting to do so much more than just watch. – oh that’s why he didn’t notice before. *nods*
“Don’t think.” Bill whispered, reaching down to gently tease Tom’s ear. “Please. Don’t think. It’s so much easier that way. I promise.” – awh I love that Bill knew that Tom was thinking too hard lol
The moment Tom’s tongue was against him Bill fell back, his eyes rolling up in his head as he reached down and clutched the sheets underneath him. – ok that’s hot!!!
He had never expected his brother to take this next step, he was sure, sure that he was the only fucked up twin that thought of his brother that way to such an extent that he got his rocks off by bathing in Tom’s dirty water. - lol
The thought that Tom was licking the most dirty place on him was what was making him so crazy. – hot!
Tom was fixing him, joining him. – awh *giggles* so sweet
His brother was climbing up his body now, his tongue removing every trace of his sinful release – ok really hot!
“There. All clean now.” Tom whispered, kissing Bill’s ear. – uuuhhh hot!
I love that they both have a fetish for the other one’s dirtiness…that was awkwardly put but I think you get the gist.
Date: 08/18/09 08:43 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
God, that was hot... 0_0
Date: 08/18/09 08:32 pm Title: Ablutophilia
Gives a whole new meaning to the phrase, "I'd drink his bathwater." LOLOL
Date: 07/30/09 02:09 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
Haha i like this chapter :)
Thanks for updating.
xx
Date: 07/30/09 12:49 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
One great updatre again :). Tom as being such a submissive, kinky,sick, twisted little bitch is always extremely hot and I guess that the more kinkier it's getting, the more I love it. Nice one, thank you :)
Date: 07/30/09 12:45 pm Title: Asphyxiophilia
I hate to bitch about this... but the errors in verb tense and otherwise are getting to me. You're both accomplished writers, so it's disappointing when I see things like "in deed" or a change from past to present tense... And maybe I'm just being really anal about it, but as a reviewer giving constructive criticism, I'm suggesting a beta reader, or even giving your story a once-over just to make sure spell and grammar check hasn't missed anything. It would improve the quality of the story by so much, honest. Both of your stories are awesome, so please consider it :)
Date: 07/13/09 11:06 am Title: Zelophilia
oh he is such a meanie. Just to make Tomi jealous. Tsk tsk.
... BUT I LOVE IT!!
Date: 07/13/09 11:06 am Title: Zelophilia
oh he is such a meanie. Just to make Tomi jealous. Tsk tsk.
... BUT I LOVE IT!!
Date: 07/12/09 11:42 pm Title: Ablutophilia
Woahhh. All I gotta say is WOOOOOOOOT!! :P
Date: 07/11/09 06:21 am Title: Zelophilia
Wow, where do you find your fetishes? This was awesome. I didn't know it existed. Yay, you're educating me. ^_^
Date: 07/11/09 05:31 am Title: Zelophilia
So now we know, why Bill is such a teaser all the time :P. I kinda like the idea though...
Thanks for the posting! It was interesting again and I could imagine Bill to be just like that. Bushido wasn't as annoying as usual and his character fitted here perfectly. I was like I KNEW IT! when he arrived to the club :D. And I don't know why I found it so hot, when Bill came in their car... Hmm...
Ok, waiting for the next one :)
Date: 07/08/09 08:17 pm Title: Ablutophilia
*{{gasp}}*
Damn that was hawt....
like really hawt!!!
Date: 07/07/09 11:08 pm Title: Ablutophilia
Uh, very interesting kink -- for some reason, golden showers seem less disturbing, but still, the emotion in Bill while he took his "bath" was amazingly done. And there was a happy ending ^^ yay!