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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 10:43 pm Title: Motion

They are perfect for each other, yes, but they are still human, with many faults and bound to make some mistakes. As Bill will start to prove shortly.

Author's Response: Excellent observation, m'dear =]

Reviewer: rainbowcolored7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 09:35 pm Title: Role Play

Oh yes, Andi should definitely be Bill's brother. ;) And you're welcome for the banner, again, sweetie. It was my pleasure. :)

Author's Response: Haha, a fellow Andi and Bill person! High five, muh brutha. ^_______^

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 04:55 pm Title: Role Play

Tom's brother:D

Great story, really funny to read^^

Author's Response: Any reason behind wanting Andrea related to Tom? Or just because? And thank you =]

Reviewer: tokiobillhotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 01:52 pm Title: Role Play

I think Bill and Andreas being brother's would make sense because they're so much alike in looks. xDD How they dress etc.

Anyways, I really love this story. I squeaked when I saw it was updated. ^__^ And it's SO realistic, even if it takes place so far in the future.

Wonderful job, really. ;) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: That is a convincing argument for Andreas. Hum *thinks* I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for the kind words =]

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 11:11 am Title: Role Play

This was amazing! I actually learned some history just by reading this! I knew about a few of the things already, but it was cool to learn and read Fanfictions at the same time.

I really like that Bill just makes an appointment to get the Chalice procedure without telling Tom. I hope for Bill, that he has a very good argument;D

As i told you before, I don't like to read about stories, set in the future, but this is so amazing, so cute and everything, so I just can't keep my fingers away from it, already by the second chapter. When I finish reading, I want more to read. I like the way you describe things, the way you make the present to history, is just amazing. And I love it! I'm not a fan of history at all, but you kind of makes it interesting. I love the way Tom and Bill are acing towards each other, how much love they still have within themselves.

I simply just love everything about this story... and it just got started;D

Author's Response: I'm glad I can educate =] I think everyone hopes that for Bill. And I'm really, really glad you like it. Thank you for your review xoxo

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 08:54 am Title: Role Play

How did I miss this story before?! I really love the whole premise behind this and I'm really excited to see where this will go from here. I also like how you were able to create this complex world in only two chapter. Very impressive!

Author's Response: I don't know. If something can be overlooked for five minutes, it can be overlooked for eternity. I'm glad you like this, and thank you so much for the kind words :D

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 08:43 am Title: Role Play

Haha. Loving Bill as Henry VIII. So totally Bill. xD

I could see him as Tom's older brother... But he always sides with Bill. And it really annoys Tom. XD

Anyway! Can't wait for more! =D

Author's Response: I know right XD That's a good reason to make Andreas related to Tom. Eeeeeel now my decision's hard DX Thank you for your review

Reviewer: hanne_bolan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 07:57 am Title: Role Play

Oh god! I think I know where this is heading and I don't know if I like it >.< Bit this is an awesome story, you're an awesome writer!
I made a documetary a year ago about Henry VIII, it's so fun to recognize all the facts and almost know it x)

And please, make Andreas Tom's brother, if he's Bill's brother then Bill will probably tell him about the surgery and Tom will be sooo pissed at both of them for keeping a secret. Well, I dunno, it might be so, or maybe you're smarter than that, so maybe you should decide yourself. God I'm rambling. Sorry.
Amazing story! You've made it very realistic and I love it :)

Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm a completely obvious writer XD I try not to be, but I am :P I like the reason behind making Andreas Tom's brother, it's not just because 'I dunno, make him Tom's bro' and I appreciate that =] Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 05:24 am Title: Role Play

I definitely like the direction this is going and the relationship with both men is so sweet, I can truly believe they are real. Well, they're real, just not, you know! :P

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I did make them kind of, well, perfect, didn't I? XD I didn't mean to. I'm glad you like the story so far :P

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 04:47 am Title: Role Play

*smiles* this story is really really really good. i love where it's going, and i especially love the couples ^^ good job!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it, it makes me happy! ^____^

Reviewer: BillsMK Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 05:02 pm Title: Motion

=D I'm sooooooo Loving this! :P

Geeky Bill's just awesome! xP And I love the details and the explanation of the whole pregnancy thing...!

You really planned things up, huh?

I wanna kill Tom just for not wanting children... ^^ That's mean! Men are ugly if they don't want babies.. ^^

Can't wait to read the rest :)

xx 



Author's Response: Geeky Bill is like amazing :P You have no idea how much I planned this. Like so much. Thank you for your kind words, I plan on updating soon xoxo

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 11:07 am Title: Motion

OMK, go on!!!

My gut tells me that Bill is going to have the surgery anyway and Tom's going to be really really really angry... can I have a rant at Tom about that? ^^

I love this already. And I'd love the world to be like this.

Author's Response: Everyone thinks that!!! Jeez, people are either overly perceptive or I'm a huge cliche-writer XDDDD Yes, you can rant. Feel free. I'm so glad you like it xoxo

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/09 06:11 am Title: Motion

Love the story! Love the idea! Tom is such a meanie for not wanting kids with Bill and Bill should totally get the operation done! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Tom's not a meanie, he's just really stupid ^____^ everyone seems to either think Bill's going to do that or should do that :P thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: BabyBird89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 01:24 pm Title: Motion

Good start, I like it hope you update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, I'll try to update soon ^_____^

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 01:01 pm Title: Motion

I don't really like those stories hat's set in the future, but i saw it was a Mpreg and i just couldn't help myself. I loved it!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you got over the future part XD I'm really, really glad you liked it!!! xoxo

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 12:32 pm Title: Motion

Me likes this A LOT!! I want more!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this, and you'll get more soon. Patience is a virtue, m'dear =]

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 09:36 am Title: Motion

This just fascinated me right the moment I saw it O.o It's like...like you created the world we should live in. All of us. No horrible, uncurable illnesses, equality, general acceptance of all kinds of people and beliefs and...hum. Hell yeah I will read all of this!

Oh and I can so see that Bill will go through the surgery without discussing it with Tom and Tom will so not be happy... ;__;

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I just figured I'd create a world where something like this would be accepted, and it just kind of... clicked. I'm glad you like it. And you are the second person so far to suggest this. And you're both annoyingly perceptive >.<

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 09:30 am Title: Motion

I'm really enjoying this so far :D The whole concept is just...intriguing.

I will definitely be watching out for more of this =] And btw, I think your banner is lovely, ha.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like the story! And nooo, the banner is icky XD How can you think it's lovely? :B

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 03:42 am Title: Motion

I'm not a big fan of mpreg of futuristic plot fics so I was apprehensive to read this. But honestly, it's really really good. Your writing style is something different and it's refreshing to read when trying to wade through all the other fics. I love the certainty of your backround info and explanations- it helps the story seem really plausible and the characters are well done. I look forward to reading the rest of this fic. Great work !

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! Your review makes me happy ^__________^ I'm glad you enjoy the story!!

Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/09 03:40 am Title: Motion

aww.. this seems like such a cute idea.. but i do feel bad for Bill cause he wants a kid but Tom doesn't. :/ May i suggest he secretly get the operation.. LOL~ jk.. that would be horrible. D: can't wait for more~ :DD

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And I must say, you are incredibly perceptive :P Thank you for your comment!

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