Date: 03/07/11 10:02 am Title: Honestly
awwww yay!
Author's Response: ^-^
Date: 03/07/11 07:23 am Title: Honestly
i knew everything would work out...that's unconditional love...and bill's right, tom has nine months to get used to it...although i'm not sure how used to it he can get...and i loved how tina made him go back...and the reunion was lovely...
Author's Response: You'll see, you'll love it when he finally does accept it. Something soon will make it very, very real and exciting for him :P
Date: 03/07/11 04:22 am Title: Honestly
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Babies! Just little Towis and little Biws littering the house lol that would be so cute!!XD
Pardon my spelling errors!:O And lol of course Bill's not a she..XD
Author's Response: They'd be running around, wreakign havoc all over the place XD You are forgiven, it's no worries!
Date: 03/07/11 04:20 am Title: Honestly
Aaaaaw, so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 03/07/11 03:26 am Title: Honestly
very glad you did not end things here. even though its a great chapter and great that they are back together. i do love tina. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I wouldn't have ended it ended it, I would have gone on with the sequel! :P Thank you for the nice review =]
Date: 03/07/11 02:39 am Title: Honestly
vkdsbvjsjk love this
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/07/11 01:48 am Title: Honestly
I was so excited when I saw this updated! And I love, love, love Tina! Thank God someone was able to knock some sense into Tom. I'm so happy he went back to Bill and that they made up...and dare I say that Tom seems to be actually excited about the baby now? Amazing chapter! I'm officially in love with this story, as well as with you for writing this story XD I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're excited!! And Tom's sort of unsure how to feel. He's both excited and still incredibly terrified and thoughtful. He's a whole plethora of emotions :P
Date: 03/07/11 01:36 am Title: Honestly
Go Tina!! Loved that. So happy about the reunion, looking forward to what happens for these two in the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Date: 03/07/11 01:01 am Title: Honestly
Tina reminds me of me. I've done stuff like that to my friends and they reacted quite similarly. DO NOT END THIS STORY HERE!!!
Author's Response: I'm not ending it here! I should have mentioned that ending it would have meant a sequel XD
Date: 03/07/11 12:33 am Title: Honestly
oh this is a perfect depiction of what a relationship is!!! breakups and makeup sex ;)
i love how real this is. it's just beautiful.....i love all the characters you've created and their personalities are just mind-blowing!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 03/07/11 12:33 am Title: Honestly
love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/07/11 12:26 am Title: Honestly
Tina is the bomb. Lol they havr weird and quirky friends but they make sense at the time of distress:D
I thougjt there was going to br more drama on the reunion process but it was a relief they were able to get passed through it without anymore heartaches. Tom's going to be a great dad he's just got to believe in himself more and trust Bill too:D They can do it together and I'm already seeing the kiddies w/them!! (Lol I used plural - it could be twins!!)
Lol thank the gods for he people in LJ...XD We want moaaaaarrr!! Hahahaha.. Will you go through the pregnancy stuff? Like Bill and her mood swings, weird cravings and hormones spiking up at times... And then Tom preparing to be a dad.. A daddy!Tow is always love love love!!!XD
Author's Response: You're write, it could be twins. Or Bill could just have a litter, like a dog. And, um, sweetheart, Bill is not a Her.
Date: 03/07/11 12:08 am Title: Honestly
I love Tina! She's to geil! And I'm happy those two dorks are back together!
Author's Response: I am too!
Date: 03/06/11 11:50 pm Title: Honestly
I loved the reunion, and I do like Tina a bit better now. She somehow reminds me of a my BF Katie; Tiny but freakishly intimidating when she wants to be. I( have seen Linebackers cower before the wrath that is Katie, and she is only 5'1" and around 120lb. It was incredibly amusing.
This was a really good chapter. I am glad you aren't ending it yet. It has so far ben endlessly amusing. I am glad a wave of inspiration has come for this story. Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: I am so glad. She's perverted but she is the honest voice of reason in times of need. XD your friend Katie sounds fabulous. I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 03/06/11 11:49 pm Title: Honestly
MMM. Flavored condoms and cookies. Best. Combo. Evar. My mouth is salivating as I type this.
Author's Response: XD good for you.
Date: 03/06/11 11:49 pm Title: Role Play
I loved the part where Bill was like, "Give me your fortune." So real! And the stab you with my chopsticks comment, lovely.
Doing something like that, having such a major procedure behind your partner's back, seems way out of whack to me. Wrongo, Bill.
Author's Response: I usually don't say give me yours, but I do ask if someone would like to trade because they like mine better XD I'm giving that way. And don't worry, that decision comes back and bites him in the ass :P
Date: 03/06/11 11:39 pm Title: Motion
I liked the idea of a "Bill knot," and the little things you stuck in to differentiate Bill and Tom's personality quirks were great. It was quite awkward however, how you just dumped all that info about the future right away. The wording wasn't too smooth, and I just feel like you could have revealed most of it in a more subtle way. But it was all very interesting, and I love your medical explanation for men having babies.
Author's Response: Bill knots are the best knots in existence. And yeah, I know it's crappy XD this is badfic days writing, and I can't bring myself to rewrite it. I'd certainly like to rewrite it one day, clean up the problems and make it better, but for right now, until I get the time and motivation, it stays the way it is unfortunately. But thank you, honestly, thank you, for giving me honest constructive criticism. That's hard to come by nowadays, sweetheart!! xoxo
Date: 03/06/11 11:24 pm Title: Honestly
Lucky Tom, Nova Scotia is a beautiful place! Lol Omg I love Tina so much right now, she’s just totally awesome! Their reunion was beautiful... favorite moment when Tom realized that his baby is in Bill's belly... so sweet!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy with Tina right now. And I was hoping I'd get a few little "awww" moments, Tom's realization being one of them :P Thank you for the review!!
Date: 03/04/11 05:32 am Title: Motion
well, i'm italian, i live in rome and my friends speak italian: here, i may be called "tesoro" or "amore"but never "sweetie" XD
Author's Response: Fair point. Alright, babycakes, whenever you comment, you get a new pet name via my American self.
Date: 03/04/11 02:40 am Title: Motion
I'm sorry, I didn't remember. ^-^'
I read that book, but I didn't imagine one single moment that the inspiration of the name came from there. :O
Author's Response: It's no problem! I only sort of mention it, I don't describe it XD I've never read the book, I should though. Shame on me :P