Date: 06/16/10 12:03 pm Title: Worry
OMG!!I LOVE THIS STORY (i just found it today)
you write very well and I love the idea
*faves story* and *offers you cookie*
UPDATE SOON X
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, it's heartwarming to get a new fan :B
Date: 06/16/10 04:33 am Title: Worry
more please :)
Author's Response: Nothing else to say?
Date: 06/16/10 01:55 am Title: Worry
I don't even know why you were worried! I thought it was really good. I liked the scene with Andreas, and how light Bill was and no worries, really, and then how that contrasted with the scene from the night before the surgery. It's hard to see this Bill so scared and unsure as to whether he's doing the right thing, but of course, how could he not be thinking that? And Tom playing guitar in Bill's room at the end was just love. I'm so glad you updated this story. I really do love it. ♥
Author's Response: It just felt like a soap opera to me, but I'm my own worst critic. I'm really glad that you like it, I value your input so much. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment <333
Date: 06/16/10 01:16 am Title: Worry
Thanks so much for updating this story, it is one of my favorites.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, it makes me so happy that you like this <333
Date: 06/16/10 12:31 am Title: Worry
gooosh, tom saying that bill is his soulmate melted m heart *sighs*
im so excited about them, i mean, its the start of something new for both =D
i think bill is half woman even now! XD
Author's Response: XD I thought that was so cheesy, I'm so glad that everyone appreciates it :P YES HE IS SO HALF WOMAN WOOH! Thanks for the review, love.
Date: 06/16/10 12:27 am Title: Worry
I've just read this from the start and I absolutely love it! The way you described everything about the surgery, and the way the Chalice works, was so amazing that if I didn't know any better I really would believe it were real! I really do think Tom should at least TALK to Bill about kids, instead of just saying flat out 'no' everytime it's mentioned. Anyways, brilliant story, and I hope to see more posted soon! (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really so flattered that you like this, it's just fantabulous. I now, Tom's such a poophead about it XD Thank you for the wonderful review! <333
Date: 06/16/10 12:13 am Title: Worry
Amazing! I so glad you updated! Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: CONGRATULATIONS! YOU ARE MY 100TH REVIEW! AS A GIFT, YOU RECEIVE A RESPONSE IN ALL CAPITALS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW, I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT!! :B
Date: 06/16/10 12:06 am Title: Worry
I just wanted to let you know that I really love your story and I love how original your idea is. I still kinda wish Bill wouldn"t have had surgery though because to me its sounds to risky when Tom is not ready to have kids. I also think that Tom is "maning up" by admitting to what he is and isn't ready for. Just my opinion though. can't wait for your nxt update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that you like this story, it makes me feel accomplished. Of course it's risky, that's the point :P And it's not me who thinks Bill isn't a man, it's Ariana XD Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/15/10 11:46 pm Title: Worry
Ohhhhh there comes that other shoe. :x
That fear before surgery is so real, whether you have hemophilia or not. You captured it really well.
Loved Tom commanding the doctor to take care of his soulmate. :) This story makes me happy! I'm really pleased to see more.
Author's Response: Yeah, yeah, here it comes XDD I'm really glad that you liked those parts, those are te parts I absolutely hated, they seem so soap opera to me XDD Thanks for your comment, darling.
Date: 06/15/10 11:42 pm Title: Motion
Where is that gif from? I like it. Nice story! ~ I loved the introduction.
Author's Response: I don't know XD I found it and liked it. Thank you so much!
Date: 06/03/10 09:37 am Title: Motion
I have read through all six chapters of this story, and I have highly enjoyed it.
I find your relationship between Tom and Bill very realistic, they are adorable together. The world you have written is exceedingly idealistic, but it suits the storyline of the Chalice perfectly, allowing an exquisite explanation of how male pregnancy is possible in your future.
I enjoyed the realism of Bill's medical condition. The imagery of his body covered in the horrible bruising. This prompted me to research severe contusions, the images that I saw made me cringe at the thought of Bill's body suffering in that way.
I am happy with your story, and I do hope that you continue.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm totally stunned! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I'm truly touched that you like this story so much. I am truly grateful that you like this story. It's comments like these that keep me going <3333
Date: 05/01/10 11:54 pm Title: Motion
u have a point, tom could definitively be italian
Author's Response: Mhm =]
Date: 05/01/10 04:25 pm Title: Families
i cant imagine tom being half italian but hey if it'd be real life the twins'd be freaking out, i mean, that means more pizza and pasta for 'em xD
omg, i totally love bill and andreas as brothers
Author's Response: I can! Italians are loud, boisterous, happy people who love food. How is that not Tom XDDD I'm glad you like their brotherness!
Date: 05/01/10 02:23 am Title: Camera
omg, drunk bill was hilarious! i'd say the videos in general xDD LOL!
and the photos that tom took, i swear that i imagined bill making a nude, i mean, with that body, hell ill do it if i had the opportunity (and not being a perv but for my photo class =P)
did u got with the idea of the starget?
Author's Response: Dude, Bill should so do tasteful nudes. I swear, I'd buy the prints XDDD you know he and Bill have some nudes somewhere. I did come up with the idea of the starget, thank you very much :P
Date: 05/01/10 01:52 am Title: Bonfire
hahahah i had like a bunch of questions and i swear to god that they were ALL answered in the order that i thought about 'em
Author's Response: I'm good that way :P
Date: 04/30/10 09:36 pm Title: Amazing Cooking Skills
i could definitively imagine bill getting married wearing just what u said
i had a teacher in highschool that was like bill and started telling us about his marriage and all that stuff, it was kinda... weird ._.
btw, cascada rulz xD
Author's Response: I can too, which is why I wrote it XDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: 04/30/10 12:11 pm Title: Role Play
kyaaaaaaa, gotta be kidding me!!!
my final exam for history last year was so similar to bills classes
i dressed as a renaissance lady *w*
Author's Response: OH GOD I ENVY YOU. None of my teachers were cool enough to do that, except my eighth grade teacher. He had us do a few hands on things.
Date: 04/30/10 11:43 am Title: Motion
havent read alot kind of futuristic fics
but when i find one i go crazy
buuu... u made such a perfect world T.T
i want to live in 2127 from chalice fic hahahahaa xD
Author's Response: Hahaha, glad you like it, sweetie
Date: 04/14/10 05:28 am Title: Families
love this ^^
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 04/04/10 04:52 pm Title: Families
Write soon.
Author's Response: No promises, no demands :P