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Reviewer: rainbowcolored7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 06:46 pm Title: Wonder

BLARGHKLDFHGDKJGHSFGLF!!! Nom!

I loved this chapter. The adorable shopping, the really sexy, hot, sex. *clings* You have no idea how excited I am for the next part. :3

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, babe!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 03:19 pm Title: Wonder

as far as the honiness, bill had to take some kind of hormonal drug...to go with when he's trying to get pregnant...as far as the blood, it could have been from a number of things...like having rough sex...or from his wound...that's all i can think of right now...loved the update and will be patiently waiting for another...



Author's Response: There's something else that could make Bill bleed, babycakes ;] glad you like it!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 02:49 pm Title: Wonder

Oh shiiiiiii-- Bill took the estrogen.

Sorry if you weren't ready, Tom! Wow, everything really has been leading up to this point. Great foreshadowing.

Author's Response: Tehehe :3 thanks love.

Reviewer: LittleMissSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 01:30 pm Title: Wonder

I'm betting it was either the vial that he didn't look at, or his implant thing. But probably the vial.

Anyways, I love this story. So, so much. Will Bill get pregnant from this heated round of lovemaking? Is that why this has been (so far) the only one you've described in detail?

Author's Response: Perceptive little devil. We'll see :3

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 01:20 pm Title: Wonder

Aww, Bill got his period and he didn't even realize!

Author's Response: Poor Bill! D:

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 12:28 pm Title: Wonder

Well...I figured Bill's horniness is from taking the wrong medication that morning. He probably injected the hormones instead of his blood meds. The blood was probably his period, or something to do with the chalice. No idea about the flautas...

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe, and Ari just likes flautas like I like burritos. No reason XD

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 12:06 pm Title: Wonder

Hmm hmm, our Bill is now having his period :D

Author's Response: his first period! My little girl is growing up!! XD

Reviewer: DAni_DISAster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 11:46 am Title: Wonder

update soon times i love this storie :)

Author's Response: Glad you do!

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 11:42 am Title: Wonder

Oh my god! I almost died when I saw this was updated! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!?!?! Damn, I missed this so much! Totally what I needed! You better update soon, or i'll go crazy... Crazier...
Oh oh oh! Guessing time! :P
That blood, was from... Bill's first period? Awww! :')
Hmm.... That's the uterus (whatever it's called) or the food that made him horny...
Ariana likes them so much cause she's... an ALIEN!
Okay, we got a deal? You update so very soon and I'll be happy and hugglesqueeze you when you do? Good! ^^

Author's Response: To your guesses: maybe, no, no :P hey, I expect hugglesqueezes no matter when I update!!!

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 10:28 am Title: Wonder

Loved this chapter!
hmmm i'm under the impression that a certain vial of supposed blood medicine has something to do with this?!?!
well...just guessing! Update soon

Author's Response: That could be the wrong impression. You never know!

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 08:47 am Title: Wonder

you and your mexican stuff xDD, you should come to Guadalajara sometime :D, i haven't talked (?) to you in ages...! what have you done with your life??

btw i have eaten könisberger klopse and it doesn't taste good :/

Author's Response: I think one of my friend's moms came from there. She makes delicious noms. I've been doing a little of this, a little of that :3 and Bill likes the meatballs, so eh. He has weird taste.

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 08:05 am Title: Wonder

I am loving the hell out of their shopping trip xD that was hilarious. And Bill was horny becaaaaaaause HE IS READY FOR BABIES? :DDD And mohahah, they didn't use a condom, did they? NO THEY DID NOT. *rubs hands together with a gleeful expression*

This is so damn good xD I always fangirl like a nut when this is updated.

Author's Response: Ariana and Bill just bounce off of each other, I love their dynamics. And jeez, you're all so baby obsessed! I'm glad you like it =]

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 07:52 am Title: Wonder

FINALLY UPDATED!!!! And I'm guessing that was Billie boy's first period that caused the blood.

Author's Response: I didn't think that was so much of a wait! It's taken me longer before. Maybe it was his period, maybe it wasn't.

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 06:46 am Title: Wonder

I also think that Bill is pregnant now. Otherwise why should you name the cap wonder?
And Tom was really cute! So sweet how much he cares about Bill!

Author's Response: I don't know, the thought didn't occur to me. And I know, Tom's so sweet!!

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 05:29 am Title: Wonder

Blood was from Bills body....of course. Maybe from his bottom. Yeah from his bottom. Bill was horny because of his procedure. I HIGHLY sure that Bill is pregnant now. That sex scene was just great. The rough play was nice. Can't wait for the next update. :)

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. Only time will tell. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LadyReivin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 11:18 pm Title: Battle Wound

First, got to say I absolutely love this story and I hope you update soon. ^-^

Second, I love the fact that I can envision all of this. My Aunt lives in Brookings, just over the border in Oregon. And in May I was up in Crescent City on a two week long camp trip with my family and best friend. Went out to the Battery Point Lighthouse, went to the aquarium on a rainy day (seriously don't see where you say it's great though...), and all sorts of other awesome things. Even went by Del Norte High School a bunch of times when we managed to get ourselves lost while trying to get to Wal Mart. ^-^ So, thank you very much for the wonderful visualizations and writing.

Author's Response: I'm actually almost done with an update, so be on the lookout ;] and aw, I love Brookings! I'm so glad you know the place I'm writing about, it makes me so giddy. I'm just the special kind of weirdo who spazzes over being able to pet sharks and see sea lions and stuff so the aquarium is super fun to me. The lighthouse is super amazing :3 ever been to Trees of Mystery? Unf amazing :D anyway. Glad you like this, even if it's only because you can envision it, haha. Thanks for the lovely comment!

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 05:30 pm Title: Battle Wound

Can't wait to find out of Bill and Tom make a baby.

Author's Response: You and everyone else, babe ;D

Reviewer: viina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/10 05:17 pm Title: Worry

Wow, this story is so unique! I like how open everyone is and for ONCE, the focus is NOT on Bill's abnormality, because being able to get mpreggers is normal! Yet at the same time, its a modern setting and not fantasy like....


really awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/25/10 09:55 am Title: Battle Wound

omg, the pic is so cute!!!!
this entire story is so cute!!!!
i love the little world you created here, and the humor is amazing!!!!! keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update!!! i am SO adding you as a favorite!!! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so flattered :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:09 am Title: Battle Wound

I loved the car washing scene, they are just too cute together!

Author's Response: Ha, it was fun to write! Thank you for the comment =]

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