Date: 09/20/11 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
this was good!
u should make a sequel to this!
Date: 07/25/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
OHMYGOD.This needs chapter 2!!ahahah:)I need to know what Georg and Gustav will say.ahaha:)Nice!!
Date: 02/28/11 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohwell, XD that was hot, haha :3 and you should make another chapter! it would be interesting to read! :D btw awesome story:3
Date: 07/04/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1
AHAHAHHh! omg. the ending!xD that was hilarious
Date: 06/10/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg lol. The G's saw them XD
Talk about weird rofl. I would like t see more of this if you decide to write.
Date: 05/24/10 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1
please continue!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/23/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well damn! I wanted to know what the G' s had to say !!
Date: 01/10/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
omg u must continue this XD!
Date: 07/08/09 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
haha i fucking love this
Date: 07/05/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
That does make a good one shot, but you've definitely left many possibilities for more chapters. I would read on if you decided to do that. It was funny and I could only imagine the hilarity of the next scene should there be one.
Date: 07/05/09 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!!!! Totally need another chapter :D
Date: 07/05/09 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot!~
and I'm currently loling at how Tom looks exactly like Jeremy Sumpter on the banner, LOL.
Date: 07/05/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1
wow i liked it short and straight to the point
Date: 07/05/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO - Busted!! I would like to read the G's reaction to the twins .. LMAO
Date: 07/04/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
i really think you should make another chapter. its a good story! poor bill and tom got caught
Author's Response: yeah hahahah XD hmmm yeah I guess maybe I should write one from the G's point of view!!
Date: 07/04/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
It... Confused me.
Date: 07/04/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
As a critical reader, I'd have to say that the beginning of this story is a bit (please don't hate me) unrealistic. You say they poured whiskey into Bill's Red Bull, but then the G's say it's vodka. So which is it? Also, whiskey and vodka are by no means weak drinks... if the drink was spiked, Bill would be able to taste it. :/
Author's Response: hahahaha thank you. someone is honest well haha i i think i must've meant whiskey if i said it first i tend to do that XD i don't hate you at all. Thank you but i mean hey its fan fiction anything can happen doesn't need to be realistic. but thank you for your review =D
Date: 07/04/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
fucking hilarious I loved it XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thanks!! lol
Date: 07/04/09 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh fuck xD
ahah
someone got fucked and is fucked now too lol
love it
Author's Response: lol ^_^
Date: 07/04/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
I love the ending. XD
Author's Response: =D Thank you!!! yeah hahah made myself laugh