Date: 03/21/13 11:37 pm Title: Cessation
am I a weirdo for crying? just....SO BEAUTIFUL
Date: 08/07/11 09:57 am Title: Cessation
:'(
Beautifully written, haunting with the repetition of the cycle and of course extremely depressing. But also very realistic I think.
Date: 07/10/09 02:20 pm Title: Cessation
wow...
Author's Response: thanks?
Date: 07/05/09 01:26 pm Title: Cessation
Aww.. :(. So very sad and painful fic to read, but I liked it. You wrote it well and the idea was interesting, but - of course - very depressing and creepy. I hoped it to end somehow, because it felt really torturing. Well, it ended on a very sad way, but still.. comforting and relieving. Like there was sais already: at least they are together.
Very touching and sad fic, well-written... Made me want to hug someone :).
Author's Response: Thank you! I had more to the idea but I wasn't sure how to work it in without it dragging or sounding odd. I may write another part to this but it depends on if it inspires me or not. I'm glad I affected you, that's a really cool compliment.
Date: 07/04/09 11:36 pm Title: Cessation
I feel so special now XD. I love everything you write because they are soooooo good.
Author's Response: You should feel special now! I love that you basically favorite everything XD makes ME feel special!
Date: 07/04/09 02:21 pm Title: Cessation
ISA! What the hell? Way to depress me!
At least their together...
Author's Response: awh sorry. But the death warning and the synopsis should have been a warning! lol Sorry I was trying to get the juices flowing...didn't work!
Date: 07/04/09 12:53 pm Title: Cessation
oh wow, that was so beautiful :) it was kind of creepy, with everything just playing out over and over and over again, but I love how you had it come together in the end.
“And if all that can't hold you back; then I'll jump for you,” I whisper as he stands on the ledge.
I climb up next to him and lock my fingers with his. It’s the first time we’ve touched. I am solid.
That was amazing hun, it just made me start tearing up :) it was a very cool idea :) and wow, just great :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The repetition was meant to be crazy and frustrating. It goes on without his ability to control or stop it. They are each in their own hell’s unable to break free. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/04/09 12:38 pm Title: Cessation
So sad!!! But so beautiful!! I'm glad you added the extra line, at least that way we know that he feels him and sees him at last :D
Author's Response: *grins* Yes and only cause you said something! *nods* Miss. Beta!