Date: 08/09/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
fuck i love it i always like reading this kind of Bill the character seems really interesting
Date: 02/27/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
i feel sorry for tom-bill is being quite an ass...i really like it
Date: 02/17/10 08:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
YesYES please write moree :]
Date: 02/12/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
:O
:D
Bill is psychotic xD
ahhh lovely :L
Author's Response: Wow, didn't think anyone actually still read that. Guess that means I should update this soon, eh?
Date: 09/25/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
heheheh
what an actor....
i like where this is going!
keep it up!
Author's Response: lol. hahah yea. Evil!Bill is a sneaky little shit. xd i promise i'll update this soon. i've gotta start writing again lol.
Date: 08/31/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
ugh!!
spit out bill!!
he shud be more brutal, ain't he??
lol..update pliss..
i want to know more!! tq~~
Author's Response: lol. hahahaha. i'm glad to see you all fired up about this. it'll get more brutal in time i think. as soon as i can sit down long enough to write for this xD
Date: 07/18/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
lmao. Wow. Bill is a conniving crazy bitch *grins* And he's playing Tom like a fiddle. This is insane, but I love it!
Author's Response: hahaha yea, he's crazy, but don't assume things about either him or Tom when I'm the author ^^
Date: 07/18/09 03:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
Wow. I'm confused, but in a good way, I think. (Can one be confused in a good way?)
Doesn't matter, though. I can already tell that I'm going to love this. =)
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm sure you can be confused in a good way, i ALWAYS am xD and yay *squees* I'm soooo happy that you can already tell that you're going to love my baby ^_^
Date: 07/16/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
Haha bill's a psychotic freak. :)
Author's Response: hahahaha. yea. he totes is xD
Date: 07/14/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
That's a really interesting twist. *nods* I liked it, hope the new chappie is up soon! :D
Author's Response: *grins* danke. i'm glad that you likes the twist and thought it was interesting ^_^
Date: 07/13/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
Wow, okay... Second chapter surpriced me totally since I wasn't actually expecting Bill to fake everything. I don't know, if I just ignored unintentionally all chapter- and story notes, I just desided to starrt this from the clean table. So yeah, It was interesting twist there.
Bill manipulating is so cruel image, but he MUST know the power of his natural charm. I don't mean that he is manipulative in real life, but I'm sure he knows how easily he can make people do whatever he wants. Interesting starting point, so we'll see what's going to happen next here... I assume that it's not going to be that simple?
I noticed that you use a lot of dialogue here and it's kind of a basic element for the whole (?) fic, so my hint is to pay attention to it (as I know you are doing). I've seen many fics where the story is great, but there is something unnatural in the dialogue. But you're doing fine there :).
So, waiting for Bill's plans about the payment :P
Author's Response: *grins* well, yay for surprises, because even though I had hidden clues to Bill's insanity in the first chapter, I was hoping that the second chapter would come across as a complete surprise ^^ I'm glad that you found the twist interesting though.
and, I don't find Bill manipulating to be cruel, because I feel like everyone manipulates people, whether it be by using their beauty, strength, intelligence etc, etc, it just happens that Bill's manipulation is brought towards the front so that everyone can see it, well at least the readers and Jost can see it.
And thank you for noticing my dialogue hun. Even though their actions are truly what's important to me, since they give off clues towards everyone's thoughts, motives and such, the dialogue is important because it's such a stark contrast to what's going inside of everyone's heads.
Date: 07/12/09 12:28 am Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
LOL, I love EvilBill. He warms my heart. XD This is so fuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!!!
Author's Response: hahaha. i know, i know. EvilBill is amazing. I LOVE the way I write him, btw xD and yep it is soooo much fun ^^
Date: 07/11/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
Woah, i like this story.
Tom cares for Bill so much i'm literally going "aw" in my head. lol.
Author's Response: awwww. i'm glad that you like this story ^^ and yea...Tom cares for Bill like A LOT lol.
Date: 07/11/09 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to Insanity.
Story Notes:
So, as Misa Sugar stated in her fic Victim, we saw this really cool video that made us want to start fics about them. ^^
We're writing to see how two videos can spawn two different stories even if the inspiration is the same. ^ that (btw, i am tascha, i just changed my username >:D )
Author's Response: ahhhh, okay ^^ and er, like Misa said in her story notes for Victim, we're not gonna show the videos for the story until the end of the story, because then there'd be no purpose in us writing the stories since you'd already get the plot line.
Date: 07/11/09 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
video? what?
Author's Response: hm? I'm confused by your review love. lol. what video, now?
Date: 07/11/09 02:39 am Title: Chapter 2: Such a pretty toy to play with...
bill is fucked up
Author's Response: haha. ja, he is. and he's only gonna get worse *nod nod*
Date: 07/05/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to Insanity.
more more more more...please? *does Bill Pout*
Author's Response: i'll give you more soon. i promise ^^
Date: 07/04/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to Insanity.
YAYness!!^^
Author's Response: mhm ^^
Date: 07/04/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to Insanity.
This is goin to be a very good story...
i REALLY, can wait for the next chapter!!
Update soon?
Author's Response: awwww. i'm glad that you think that this is going to be a very good story ^^ and i promise, i'll udpate soon love ^^
Date: 07/04/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to Insanity.
awww poor bill seriously, i dont think i spelled that right but oh well, who would want to hurt him he looks so fragile and well fragile and cute and well i cant describe him but still... stupid David i hope tom ends up murdering, did i spell that right, him for all the bad things he did to bill
Author's Response: eh. don't assume anything yet. that was just the beginning, and the story's going to get WAY more fucked up than it already is now xD and yea Bill looks all fragile and cute. heh. but thank you for reviewing love ^^