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Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/09 02:05 am Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom

Omg... Wow... The way you wrote the sex scene. DUDE! I'm so impressed man. Its really good, wait better then good ITS AWESOME!!!!!! I seriously love. It makes me feel like one of the characters, like totally in their position. I love it. I wonder why this story hasn't been featured yet??

Author's Response: Thanks, what incredible compliments! I am blushing. =) Very happy you enjoyed. Well, I'm still very new to the site and it's a new story. I would be very flattered and pleased if someone finds it good enough to feature but we'll see how it goes.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 09:26 pm Title: Voodoo Child

NIIIIIIIIICEE! Love how dominant Bill is.

Author's Response: Awesome, very glad you're enjoying Bill's characterization.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 09:14 pm Title: World Apart

This is a really awesome story. I just read the first chapter and I'm already addicted to the story!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're addicted, that was part of my plan. ;)

Reviewer: putanyrandomnamehere Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 03:09 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

is there going to be a sequel, this is a really good story!

Author's Response: I have two sequels already outlined! Thanks so much for your review. There is more to come!

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/09 05:48 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

Guh. The hotel bed just...I think I'm speechless. Lmao. And I smell a sequel! I quiver in anticipation. :D

Author's Response: Hey, Tom promised, after all! He is a man of his word. Oh yes, the sequel's already started and completely outlined. It's competing with my other WIPs, though. I'll wait until it's finished to post it like I did with this.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 01:12 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

OMG!! Loved this, you totally should have kept going though, Jorg should b looking for his heir and not be too happy that the twins are together.

Write a sequel soon!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it so much! Ah, I had to stop somewhere and it was already 47,000 words. I've started work on the sequel and we're definitely going to see more of this Tom and Bill! Thanks so much for your reviews.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:53 am Title: every you, every me

I think I'd move in w/ Simone and never leave if she'd be my mother! Where can I find one like her lol. She's pretty cool.

Author's Response: I know, I want one too. An open-minded pagan liberal witch.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:26 am Title: we belong

Poor Andi, he's probably not too happy right now. Oh well, you seriously write the most mind blowing sex ever, and Bill took the who truth thing fairly well, I thought he might knock down a wall or something.

Author's Response: And he has every right to be unhappy! Bill will make it up to him later, though. Thanks - yep, Tom definitely continued to enjoy himself through the night. ;) As for Bill, that's the way he decided to go - it kind of surprised me too!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:06 am Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom

I don't think I've ever read such an amazing montage of porn. You have no idea how many gold stars you deserve.

Author's Response: *grins* And that is a fantastic compliment. Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! I blame, I mean credit, the boys.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:53 pm Title: Voodoo Child

You're amazing, this is so being favorited when I'm done. The way Bill's grown up, Tom as well, it makes total sense, I'm sorry I'd write more coherant reviews but all I want to do is read more!

Author's Response: Woohoo, thank you! Hey, any review is a good review, and I'm pleased to hear what you think. The fact that you're in a rush to read more is a very good sign. ;)

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:32 pm Title: World Apart

Ok, I waited until you were finished to start this but wow, your story's fantastic, the writing's amazing, the bond you've set up... just everything's perfect.

Author's Response: Glad you read it! Thanks so much, I'm very happy you think so. I really enjoyed working on this story and was thrilled to share it. =)

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 09:47 pm Title: World Apart

Mm, I can't wait for moorreee

Author's Response: More, meaning the sequel? I'm working on it! It's gotten off to a great start, I think. =)

Reviewer: toms muso girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 07:22 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

that was one of the hottest stories i have ever read i really wish i was bill :)

Author's Response: *grins* I only wish I could WATCH Tom and Bill, that would be enough. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: shelyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 09:47 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

Some of the best twin I've read ever. Unique story line, powerfully HOT. Loose ends ? wrap em up PLEASE.

Author's Response: Thank you, what an incredible compliment! Yes, there's definitely more to come of this storyline. ;)

Reviewer: dantereznor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 06:57 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

So them + hotel = hydrogen bomb exploding in the room?

Author's Response: Oh, my, yes. And how! Thanks for your review. ♥

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 05:11 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

*is an incoherent mess*

Amazingly perfect, as usual!



Author's Response: Woohoo, thank you! Very pleased you enjoyed to the end, and thanks for your reviews! ♥

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 12:50 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

"Come on," Bill urged, pushing Tom gently against the rail that bordered the steps of the Trumper brownstone. It creaked a warning under their combined weight.
"Not on the street, Bill, I know that much," Tom said, casting a glance around the block. "We'd get picked up by the city police for whatever it is, undecency--"
"Indecent exposure," Bill supplied, riding his t-shirt up his midriff with one hand and sending a challenging look through his eyelashes at Tom.
"Fuck," Tom swore, low and heartfelt. - *giggles*

"Bill, no," Tom said, utterly insincere.
Bill craned his head toward the front of the car, toward the beleaguered driver, and found the man's eyes on him in the rearview mirror. He wasn't surprised. "Can you hurry it up?" Bill called. "If you can't get to the hotel in ten minutes, I'm giving him incentive to fuck me right through the seat into the trunk."
The driver's eyes widened and the car accelerated. - *giggles*

"Ahh, hells, gonna fuck you so hard," Tom promised.
"Do it, I want you to," Bill moaned, releasing his hold on Tom's ear and pulling back until they were face to face. "Tomi, want you to fuck me right through the mattress."
"It'll be in shreds," Tom said. He grabbed Bill's shoulders and hauled him close for a kiss. – ha ha probably will happen like that! Lol!!!!

Bill groped at Tom's belt again, pawing through folds of voluminous t-shirt. The drive was taking entirely too long - where was Tom's hotel, anyhow; another ring of the city? "Wanna suck you," he crooned, swaying onto his knees on the floor of the car and draping himself over Tom's thighs. He looked up into his twin's face from where he knelt and Tom's eyes gazed back, eager.
Tom bit down on his lip ring and nodded.
The car stopped, and Bill could sense the shift of gears from drive to park through his shins.
"We've arrived at the hotel," the driver called helpfully. - *chuckles!!*

The brunette was hot, the hindbrain portion of Bill noted, in a way that Bill would have probably acted on before all his desire and longing found one single intense focus. Maybe he'd think other people were hot again, some day, but all of a sudden the only pair of pants Bill wanted to get into were Tom's stupid baggy jeans. And right fucking now wouldn't be soon enough to suit him. – lol!!!

Bill, who had been about to ask the girl whether he was supposed to know her, snapped his mouth shut. This was one of his one-night stands. Oh, crap timing. There were two ways to deal with this; bad and worse.
"I didn't get your number--" she began, and Bill cut that one off at the pass.
"I'm sorry, did you want an autograph? I don't have a pen," Bill said, giving her his most brilliant smile.
She faltered and gaped, then tried to smile again but it was wounded. "You don't remember me."
Now Bill turned on the sympathy as well as the charm. "I'm sorry, but no. You are gorgeous, though. It's nothing personal."
Color flooded into her cheeks - *shudders* oh god how embarrassing!!!

"The guy who's fucking him now," Tom snapped at the girl, tugging Bill's hand to indicate he was more than ready to move on. Tom muttered under his breath, "And from now on."
Bill bounced onto the balls of his feet, unable to hide his sheer joy. "Tomi," he purred, trying to fit all his pleasure into the affectionate nickname. The one person who had right to be possessive of him had spoken.
The girl's eyes went wide. "You, no way!" she exclaimed. "But, Bill, I heard you didn't sleep with anyone more than one night!"
"Then why were you trying to get his number?" Tom asked, pulling on Bill's hand and starting for the front of the hotel.
The girl gaped and Bill gave her an apologetic grimace as Tom towed him for the doors. - *gapes, gasps and sputters* NICE!!!

Bill's brows rose. He was bottoming for Tom, but he wasn't his bitch. "There's no need to be so high-handed. Do you want to get laid when we get to that hotel room?"
Tom's expression shifted instantly to horror. "You'd withhold sex?" he exclaimed in shock. – that is the desired response!!! LOL

"Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me," Bill demanded in between kisses, one arm hooked around his brother's neck, the other stroking at his dreadlocks. The drawn-out tease of hot kisses wasn't enough. Bill needed bare skin against his and he wanted it now.
"Here?" Tom gasped, before latching onto Bill's bottom lip.
Bill thought about it, eyeing the emergency stop over Tom's shoulder. "Augh, no lube," he recalled – lol they seriously need to start carrying some around with them!!!

They were going to have to start keeping something on them when they went out. – lol

Bill kneed Tom's waist in protest. "I liked that shirt, ass," he said.
"I like it off of you," Tom replied, running the pads of his fingertips up over Bill's stomach and rubbing them over Bill's nipples.- *grins* awesome!

"Take your shirt off," Bill countered, but his hand was already descending to his belt buckle, a big silver-plated square that read 'Full Service.' He didn't have any bargaining chips; he was going to strip for Tom anyhow. – the desperation that never ends is amazing!!!

Suddenly Tom was there, pressing his bare chest against the length of Bill's naked back. They both shuddered; Bill moaned from the sheer tactile pleasure. Tom's nipples were hard against Bill's shoulder blades. – I love love love love love the tactile element of this story!!! It’s about touch with them *shudders* so fucking hot!

“Please, please,” Bill said, tipping his head to the side to try and get a good look at Tom's face, to fathom his intent. He'd beg shamelessly for Tom if it meant he got what he wanted that crucial bit sooner. He'd do things for Tom he had never, would never do for anyone else. – very nice!!!!

“Want you,” Tom breathed against his mouth, stroking over Bill's hip, taking hold of his cock and giving him a few slow pulls. The roughness of denim pressed and chafed against Bill's bare ass.
“Have me,” Bill invited. He spread his legs a little more, pressing back against Tom's jeans, somewhat irked Tom was still wearing them. “Here, the bed, the bathroom counter, just don't make me wait for it.” – wow now that’s desperate!

“Gonna get laid,” he sang softly to himself, kicking his boots and jeans and boyshorts off to the side near the pitiful ruined heap of his t-shirt. It had died an honorable death for the cause of getting Bill naked faster, and now he'd have to find a new one that he liked as much, so Tom had done him two favors there. - *giggles*

“Tomi, if you don't hurry I'm going to get started without you!” He wrapped a hand around his shaft and sent his other hand questing back behind himself, crooking his leg up a little higher to give himself access. Tom's spit had already dried on his entrance so Bill brought his fingers back to his mouth and licked them, then pushed one finger in.
“Huh?” Tom grunted, coming around from the corner of the bathroom naked, a towel slung around his neck, bottle of lotion in one hand. “What do you mean, get started—ohhh.” He stood at the foot of the bed for a moment and watched Bill finger himself. – ooooooohhhh very sexy!!!!

“What do you want? I'll do anything.”
Bill's eyes fluttered and he nuzzled across Tom's dreads, his belly tight with pleasure. It was his own promise of the night before, delivered back to him. – very nice!

Bill loosed a breathy sigh as Tom sank two fingers into him with no further delay. It was good and Tom dragged them over his spot at once, making Bill arch back against the bed and cry out. Even that consumed by pleasure, Bill tossed his head restlessly, grasping at his own thighs and hauling them wide when he couldn't get a grip on Tom to urge him on.
Tom groaned and rested his head against Bill's shin. “You're going to ruin me,” he accused. - *grins* yes please do!

That poor head board and wall!!! Lol

“Ahh, Tomi!” Bill cried out when Tom released his mouth. The mattress was shredding under his desperately clawing hands. “Ahh, keep...doing...that...”
Tom bit down on his shoulder and muttered, “Not gonna stop, not ever gonna stop.” He sped up and mouthed over Bill's pulse point. – awh so sweet!!!

Bill surged toward the wall with each of Tom's thrusts and frowned. The wall was getting closer, a lot closer. He blinked even as he arched back into the delicious penetration of Tom's cock. He didn't want to stop, but... “Tomi, I think we're fucking the headboard into the wall.”
Tom slowed his pace, flattening both hands over Bill's belly. His cheek pressed against Bill's as he looked over Bill's shoulder again. Dreads tickled Bill's shoulders and chest. “Huh. I think you're right.” – lol they’re going to have to pay so much in damages lol!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Wow,” Tom said, hugging Bill to his side. “I really thought it would take more to break it. I mean, I probably could have fucked you harder if I'd tried.”
“My bed is much sturdier, we'll have more fun with that,” Bill said, then his eyes widened. “Tomi! You mean you were holding back?”
Tom grinned and nosed at his ear, his cheekbone, kissed the corner of Bill's mouth. “I don't think you heard it, but someone was hammering on the wall yelling for us to shut up,” he said, and gave Bill an open-mouthed kiss when Bill turned into him, fitting his hands over the curve where Tom's waist ended and his ass began. “So I figured it might be a bad idea to, you know, actually fuck you into the next room.” - *cracks up*

“So what next?” Bill asked, when he'd raised his head from Tom's neck and their eyes met again.
Tom nuzzled up Bill's throat and rubbed one hand suggestively up the crease of Bill's ass. “Well, there's still a dresser, and an armchair, and a perfectly good bathroom counter... I wouldn't trust you on that rickety desk over there.”
Bill smacked at his brother's chest. “Not what I meant, pervert,” he exclaimed, but he was grinning.
Tom grinned back, his eyes crinkling up. “You have to be more specific, you know. We're in the middle of a hotel room and we just broke a bed together; you ask me 'what next,' and of course I'm gonna think you mean sex,” he said seriously, leaning in to drop a kiss beside Bill's mouth. – I love this bit!!!!

came to find my twin brother, and bring you back to House Kaulitz with me.”
Bill wrinkled his nose "Like I'd go live with the father who abandoned me." The only reason he'd be changing his last name was because it was Tom's name too.
Tom's arms tightened around him, hugging Bill by the waist. "You'd live with me," Tom countered. "I'm thinking of killing Jorg anyhow."
Bill's eyes lit up. "Tomi, you say the sweetest things." – awh *giggles* I though Tom might consider killing Jorg does make sense!

“It's still unforgivable,” Tom said darkly. “He thought it was a catastrophic idea to keep us together? Fuck him; the reunited Sparda twin spree will look like nothing when we're through with him.” - *grins* I hope so!!!

“We should keep your hotel room until we wreck everything in it,” he said with a snicker. “Being mated means a lot of non-stop fucking at first, right? At least here they'll bring us food when we need it.”
Tom's snicker answered his. “If we don't wreck the place so bad they try to kick us out, first.”
“Ooh, let's see how long that takes!” - *giggles and cracks up!*

Tom looked up just in time to see a figure launching itself from the top of the block of concrete that framed the stairs. He opened his arms in reaction and fielded an armful of twin brother. Weight that might have caused someone else to grunt and struggle to keep their balance was cradled in Tom's arms with ease and now he was face to face with his most important person again; his favorite part of the afternoon. – awh!!! All fluffy!

Tom continued, “A few more good bounties and I'll have that goddamned hotel bill paid off.” - *cracks up* I surprised they let him owe them lol

To be fair, Bill had said, they really had perpetrated all of that damage, so it was only right they pay for it. Bill had gone down the charges line by line, so he'd know. Tom had been kind of proud of the total figure, when explained that way. – they should get it framed lol

And the one maid who'd walked in on them the second day before Bill found the “Do Not Disturb” sign had probably quit on the spot. – awh she didn’t stop to watch? I would have *cracks up*

and someone brought food up to their room at any hour of the day or night. They'd put off their fair share of bellhops that way, too, as neither Bill nor Tom had any particular issue with answering the door naked. Sometimes together. - *cracks up*

In the end, Tom had concluded that Bill's tongue was really to blame. He couldn't sit near his twin and watch Bill flash that tempting metal tongue stud without it giving him a jolt as to other, more vital applications.
Strangely enough, Bill had blamed Tom's tongue. More specifically, the way he played with his lip ring when he was looking even remotely in Bill's direction. – lol

Bill huffed. “Am I really that scary?” he inquired, eyes wide.
Tom knew this look now – Bill was playing at innocence.
“All I did was get in his face, flick his nose with one of my nails, and tell him I never liked him,” Bill continued. “Apparently that was all it took?” – lol

“Uh, have you guys thought about...well, how are you going to get through a whole gig with the two of you, well, so attached still?”
Tom snorted. 'Attached.' He was still endlessly amused by all of the human euphemisms.
“We're going to do it right before the show,” Bill said, taking the question seriously. “Probably oral. Then after the show we'll do it again right away, full penetration, and that way if there's an encore we'll get it out of our systems long enough to do a few more songs.”
“Oh gods,” Andreas said, palming his forehead. “Shoot me for asking. You know, I didn't need that kind of detail, thanks.” - *cracks up* OMG!!!! Lol ha ha aha

Because Bill wanted it, the two of them had agreed to spend a human lifetime in the humans' world. They had time, Bill had reasoned, and Tom didn't mind. A Nephilim lifespan was a long interval indeed, and half-Nephilim like Tom and Bill shared the natural longevity of their full-blooded kin.
The way Tom figured it, when Bill got bored with life in town, the twins would return to House Kaulitz – with a vengeance. – nice!

I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad to see the end of this story. It is absolutely one of my favorites! The underlying humor was spectacular. The writing is so flawlessly written it makes me embarrassed to write emails. The story while not super unique (twins separated, twins find each other, twins have sex don’t care that they are twins) has enough twist and logic that it is more then forgivable that it is not unique. This journey has been so much fun and I have looked forward to my morning emails which told me that Born to Each Other had been updated. I can’t wait to get my act together and read more of what you have up.

Author's Response: I'm so, so happy that you like it so much! It's definitely got sequel written all over it. ;) Plenty of unresolved plot threads not to mention, these twins DEMAND more screen time for themselves and their sexy adventures. I'm so pleased that this story has been so much fun for you. And it will DEFINITELY be continued. I look forward to the day I add it to its own series.

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 12:36 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel

I can't believe this story is over! =*(
And I really hope they really do kick Jory's ass!

Author's Response: Well, it's over, but it's not done! ;) I'm working on the sequel, and trying to decide if I should post as I write, or wait until that's finished as well. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 12:27 pm Title: World Apart

There should be a sequel!!!! About their revenge!!! That'd be so cool!!! Just please don't kill this world yet!!! It's sooo perfect!!!!!

Author's Response: Ahh, I'm glad you think so! I'm 7,757 words into the sequel. *grins* I'm going to be with this world for at LEAST two more stories, depending on how/where it decides to take itself. Thanks for getting so into it, that's the best compliment!

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 06:54 pm Title: every you, every me

*faints*

Love this. Love you. Love EVERYTHING, lol



Author's Response: Whee, thank you! I'm really happy you enjoy it so much.

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