Date: 09/13/09 01:34 pm Title: we belong
:D I really like that they're not gonna hide it from their friends. When they sneak around it tires me out. XD
Author's Response: Nope, this version of the twins can be open with their friends and family! It's so nice. Also, not illegal in this future alternate universe. ♥ Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/13/09 12:30 pm Title: Voodoo Child
I love this story! It's really good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy it.
Date: 09/12/09 09:03 pm Title: Voodoo Child
Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 09/10/09 09:03 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
I really enjoyed reading this story. Funny, hot and enough plot to balance the awesome smut. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a really good time writing it. ;) I appreciate your review.
Date: 09/06/09 12:17 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
Loved this story. Just enough plot tying all the porn together. And, of course, I love the when the twins are irresistibly drawn to each other.
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! ...I intended for there to be more plot, honestly. *hangs head* Glad to hear there's just enough to anchor the porn, though. (There will be is more plot, and more porn, in the sequel.) Like magnets, they are, as far as I'm concerned. I appreciate your review!
Date: 08/30/09 01:51 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
Holy freaking Kaulitz, woman! How did I miss this being posted before?!
Give me a moment to adjust some things.
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Okay, well. Yeah. Pretty much one of the sexiest, dirtiest things I've read, and on top of it all, of course, amazing writing. And there's a sequel? HURRAH!
:F
Author's Response: The most recent fics page moves fast? =D
WOOHOO! Sexy + dirty = awesome. Soooo very glad you think so. You have no idea how much fun I had writing this. It's nice to have a pair of twins so uninhibited sometimes. =D And there will be more, oh yes!
Date: 08/14/09 04:10 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
If there is a sequal I promise to scream out "Yes! More Bill and Tom fucking!!" at the top of my lungs[:
This was simply amazing, I think that's the only way I can put it!
Author's Response: There will definitely be a sequel, and oh my god is there a lot of sex. I think this series is basically my "Tom and Bill have lots of sex" series. ...There will be some plot, too, I promise. Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: 07/25/09 07:54 pm Title: World Apart
You're smarter than me. I should just Hiatus all of my stuff until I have it all written. Ack, no brain, no brain...
Author's Response: *grins* It made it easier, I swear. And people didn't have to wait. ;)
Date: 07/23/09 03:33 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
this was awesome. I just found it and read it all in one go.
**The way Tom figured it, when Bill got bored with life in town, the twins would return to House Kaulitz – with a vengeance.**
oh yes please. Id love the *see* the look on Jorg's face when BOTH boys show up.
was soo glad to see that Tom was ok with Simone and found that there was no need for forgiving. he understood/and agreed to what and why she did.
man, the sex was HOT, especially their first time. the way they teased at eachother in the club before making it back to Bills place.
Author's Response: Woohoo! Oh yes, no worries, there is a sequel story - I'm two parts in already. It's gonna be fun! Tom and Simone really worked out, thankfully; that scene could have gone much worse.
Glad you liked it! I had a ton of fun writing it and I'm pleased you thought it was hot. =)
Date: 07/22/09 06:15 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
...The driver's eyes widened and the car accelerated... - poor driver just trying to make a living here
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...Bill groused, wiggling in his current position and watching with fascination as plaster and paint flakes sifted from the wall where the broken headboard dug into it... - seriously dont know their own strenghts =P
...Tomi! You mean you were holding back?... - that was holding back???? *faints*
...Tomi, you say the sweetest things... - if i say that was cute AND creepy, would you think i'm crazy???
...Shoot me for asking. You know, I didn't need that kind of detail, thanks... - here, here!!! its kinda awesome that andreas is cool with everything
...The way Tom figured it, when Bill got bored with life in town, the twins would return to House Kaulitz – with a vengeance... - yay!!! when's the sequel???
* p/s - still had no idea how i managed to get tru all the shmut ALIVE
Author's Response: Yeah, that is one long-suffering driver. And it's not that they don't know their own strength, it's that sometimes stuff is more fragile than they expect. (It was holding back.) Cute and creepy for sure - unless you're a Nephilim! Glad you enjoyed it, and the smut! I'm working on the sequel now.
Date: 07/22/09 05:12 pm Title: every you, every me
...Tom wanted to lean over and find out how it tasted... - don't we all?? ehem, so what the hell are you waiting for?
...I was so happy that Jorg left you alive, Bill... - *nods frantically* coz if he did killed bill theres gonna be hell to pay!
...had he been good enough, restrained enough, to be a bit bad now?... - o0o000o0o, i totally love this line! good boy gone bad..erm, ur still at simone's place though
...Getting in a bit of mothering while I can, I guess... - poor simone must be missing tom badly too
...I love you both, and your mother doesn't need to hear those kinds of details... - totally agree.. *sighs* the things fyredancer makes us read =P
* owh i cant help but remember a song from Placebo, Every Me and Every You... i really like that song, it's very...intriguing, i guess... did u had that song in mind while writing this??
Author's Response: Heh, 'cause he knew Bill wanted to take him someplace. And yes, there would have been hell to pay! The Placebo song was definitely an inspiration.
Date: 07/22/09 04:19 pm Title: we belong
...Bill blinked his gorgeous faintly-slanted eyes at him and Tom was amazed all over again that Bill hadn't seen the resemblance between Tom's face and his own... - hmm, he's probably thinking that tomi's too good to be true, let alone related??? just a guess =P
...Tom could only agree and hope that Bill wouldn't hate him in the morning... - he thinks too much, no?
...Our parents... - are things gonna get messy? *shudders*
...He pressed his tongue stud against Tom's upper lip, then wedged it against the bottom lip with the lower portion of the barbell and wiggled it suggestively... - wow, thats some kissing technique =P
...And we were about to again when you interrupted... - amazingly thy could still get up in the morning. oh well, probably the Nephilim blood
Author's Response: Definitely thinking Tom is too good to be true! And Tom was definitely a bit worried about what Bill would think in the morning.
Bill, he is good with that tongue stud. ;) And, definitely the Nephilim blood was a factor!
Date: 07/21/09 05:16 pm Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom
...Eventually the repeat offenders in his neighborhood had learned to avoid Bill, and Bill was happy he didn't have to keep replacing blood-spattered shoes or clothing... - good for you! not so for those idiot huhu
...it was so tacky to fall into bed with someone when the bed smelled of someone else's sex... - and with their enhanced senses, that's gonna be way beneath them
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* i lost track of how many pages that was....
Author's Response: Heh heh, it was a lot of pages. A LOT. XD Glad you liked it?
Date: 07/21/09 04:36 pm Title: Voodoo Child
...kilting his hips until his red "Idol" t-shirt rode up and gave a peek of the black triple-star tattoo low on the right side of his belly... - one word : sexy-hexy (or is that two words???)
...Mated, he realized in the next second, and breathed in relief... - wonder what would happen if River wasnt mated?
...Tom folded his arms over his chest again and settled in for an afternoon of serious twin-watching... - aye, the life of a stalker/overprotective bruther. but hey, i'm not complaining =P
...He also couldn't shake the sense that the guy was incredibly familiar... - amaizingly he didnt recognize tom yet? em, well they do have distinctive styles
...Bill was in the throes of goodwill-drunk, sure, but shouldn't Tom have come to him?... - tom's kinda like luring bill in with his hotness, me like
...More dancing? More drinks? More... - urgh! naughty, teasing tomi
...We should get back to your place as fast as possible, Bill, so that I can fuck you... - woah! that line - crazy!! *frantically searches for the 'Next' button* found it! *click*
Author's Response: Sexy-hexy INDEED. I'd say two words. As for River, bad things would happen. Okay, okay, sexual things. And then Tom would have to step in! I'm glad you liked that line. XD Thanks, it's great to hear your thoughts!
Date: 07/21/09 03:42 pm Title: World Apart
...Nephilim-human hybrids often created powerful offspring with capabilities not seen in the pureblood strain of either race... - usually people would want to stick with their own kind only, so this really caught my interest
...Jorg watched the twins cuddle against Simone's breasts together, eyes already fixed on one another, and he was torn... - see, all jorg have to do is keep them together, right???? *gulps*
...When Tom woke, he cried for a year... - didn't have that one coming T___T
...He only knew that he was happiest when he slept and heartbroken when he woke... - poor babies! evil, evil Jorg grrrrr
...That would require Bill having had a whole heart to begin with... - now i really know what they meant by "your other half"
...although Tom himself had killed him when he'd surpassed him at thirteen, but the hair reminded him of the three years-gone former teacher... - *cringes*
...Normally I wouldn't stoop to poison, you know; it's such a woman's method... - yeah, kinda got me thinking bout witches
...But as you say, there's very few people who know this particular secret, right?... - oh no! jost u better run too. he's such a handsome fellow, it would be a shame for him to get wasted
Author's Response: It's nice to see what stuck out for you in this particular chapter. Poor twins, right?? But Tom will find him! And let's hope Jost survives. ;)
Date: 07/19/09 01:19 pm Title: World Apart
That's great news!
Author's Response: *grins* Now, if only it would write itself faster. I want to wait until the whole thing is done to post it.
Date: 07/18/09 04:04 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
I loved your story. I couldn't decide in the beginning if I would like it, but by the end I absolutely loved. One of the best fanfics I've read. Thank you for your lovely story
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your review! I'm glad the story was able to win you over, that's a really great thing to hear as a writer. Pleased you enjoyed, and there will be a sequel!
Date: 07/16/09 03:36 am Title: World Apart
awesome job!! I love this fic! you totally have to do a sequel tho. I wanna see what happens when the twins go back 'with a vengeance'=D
Author's Response: Hooray, I'm glad you love it! I am definitely planning on sequel stories. It's going to be a trilogy at minimum. =) Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/16/09 03:08 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
Niiice man! Maaan. This the "scene" in this chapter is my favorite! I love how Tom drilled Bill though the mattress!!! Its so well detailed in my head yo! I love it! You should totally write a sequel yeah? Please! BIG FAN!
Author's Response: It was a heck of a lot of fun to write! Thank you, I'm really happy you enjoyed it. There will definitely be sequel stories, two at minimum. I've started the next one and it starts out with a bang, believe me.
Date: 07/16/09 02:30 am Title: we belong
Niice the ending made me laugh. Their like rabbits dude.
Author's Response: Thanks! ...Yeah, they're definitely like rabbits. I made that comparison more than once while writing this and complaining IRL that they just kept going, adding more and more sex scenes...