Date: 06/19/12 12:57 am Title: World Apart
Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/17/12 11:47 pm Title: World Apart
Ok, this version of the story I haven't read yet. I am very intrigued by how it will compare to "Everything Falls Apart". Thanks for always keeping me busy. :)
Author's Response: Excellent! *fingertips together! And it has two sequels, too! :3
Date: 04/23/12 11:59 am Title: we belong
they are so freaking cute ! JUst love it
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad! Thank you. ♥
Date: 01/12/12 12:35 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
I re-read this story last night and tonight for the umpteenth time, but I don't think I've ever reviewed it? Sorry?
This series is one of my go-to pick-me-ups (along with The Blue of Desire) when I need a great escape. I love this world, I love these guys, I love the SMUT oh yes, I love it all.
I love how you made the bond between the twins so very strong and demonstrated it over and over. You worked in so many interesting details of this world and each character has a real and fascinating personality with quirks. I always laugh over Bill's oh-so-convincing "struggles" with the dirty Nephilim throughout this series and how he cries out while Tom despoils him over and over. :3
Thanks for creating this universe and sharing it with us!
Author's Response: *~* Thank you, that's always so lovely to hear. And I know where you're coming from; I lurked big time before I dared comment on anyone's stories.
That makes me even more starry eyed! Oh yes, this is the place to come for carefree AU smut-obsessed twins. ♥ You're making ME want to re-read it.
The twins fit together so easily and naturally! They were definitely meant to be.
Thank you so much for loving it! I really appreciate your lovely words.
Date: 11/18/11 02:57 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
ahhh, i can't believe that reading this a third time still has me ignoring my homework and staying up way past bedtime...at least i finished this part, now, so hopefully i can actually get some report done before i get sucked back in to part two!
Author's Response: OMG no way! You even know what's going to happen! ;) Well, I'm really flattered that it still has you hooked so strongly, thank you! As always. ♥
Date: 08/08/11 11:38 pm Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom
OMG.... I think I´m sweating!.. god!..
I dont know how you do it.. but you make hot scenes incredibly amazing!... I thought that their meeting was going to be like really sentimental etc.. but NO.. it was waaaaay better!... I want to know how Tom going to tell Bill the truth and how he will take it!..
This a super fic.. like all your fics *jumping, clapping and smiling at you*
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was so hot! Thank you! Oh yeah, some sexy things ahead for them. :D Thanks for your review! ♥
Date: 04/28/11 02:48 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
=) grettings from Sonora, Mexico. tahnkiu for write this impact history! ... a lot of sex.. genia!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoy it!
Date: 03/29/11 02:53 pm Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
Lol.. Didn't quite manage to continue past the last chapter iykwim ;-) Thoroughly enjoying this universe! The whole half Nephilim thing is hot ;-)
Author's Response: Haha, got it. ;D I'm so glad you enjoy this universe, it's one of my faves! And I'm sure you can tell I have a lot of fun with the half Nephilim concept. ;D
Date: 03/29/11 08:55 am Title: every you, every me
Simone is cool ;-)
Author's Response: I did try to make her cool. Whenever I can! :D
Date: 03/29/11 08:38 am Title: we belong
Giggling at 1.40am while the husband sleeps like a log. Poor boy I wore him out haha. I needed your fic like I need air. Had a 12 hour day at work and didn't even have time to breathe let alone have lunch!!!
Author's Response: Lucky husband! But I'm so happy you needed my fic like air, and that it helped after such a long day!
Date: 03/29/11 08:17 am Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom
Good lord...
Author's Response: That's just how they roll. ;)
Date: 03/29/11 07:47 am Title: Voodoo Child
My OH gets so much out of your fics LOL!!! He already got some before I started your fic and then well.. All that grinding got me hot and bothered again ;-)
Author's Response: Lucky him, hee! So pleased even the GRINDING was that enjoyable.
Date: 03/29/11 06:29 am Title: World Apart
Sucked in. Your stories just suck me in. I teared up at the image of Tom crying for a year and Bill's drawing :-(
Author's Response: I'm so glad, though. ;) I was hoping to leave you with some striking images! Thank you.
Date: 02/14/11 06:32 pm Title: Voodoo Child
He went into an automatic freeze, spotting a teen even from across campus that had his eyes locked on Bill, arms crossed over his chest in a waiting posture. Bill frowned – he'd never seen the boy, who had a dark cap pulled low over his eyes. He had a wealth of blond hair done up in dreadlocks; the hair alone was a distinctive feature that Bill would have recognized. And he was wearing baggy, oversized clothes, both shirt and jeans, the likes of which had gone seriously out of style about a decade ago.
Despite his certainty that he'd never seen the boy before, something twanged at the back of Bill's mind like a song he'd mostly forgotten, a word he couldn't quite remember, an answer weighing down but unsaid on his tongue.
There he is, Bill! That's your dream boy, the one that you think should have been you but yet is just the other part of you! I get tingles reading this section, because it's that instant recognition.
Stop--> Stare --> Recognize --> Connect --> Breathe again.
Tom found a tolerable leaning position against the brick facade of the building that had a clear view of the library café and he aimed a searing stare across the length of the university campus. From his vantage point he could pick out the distinctive black crest of Bill's hair. Finally, Tom's mind crowed triumphantly as it had whenever he had Bill in his sights again. Finally, finally. That one word summed it up.
SQUEEEE! FINALLY INDEED, Tom. This is the boy in your dreams, the one that's always been missing
BillBillBillBillBillBillBillBillBILL! The moment Tom laid eyes on Bill that morning, he'd known he had found his twin. The thrill of recognition had coursed through him in one molten instant, even with a thousand yards between them. The dark hair, the kohl-lined brown eyes, the full mouth, the tall, rangy body – but it was too much, too intense, and Tom had bolted from his vantage point the instant Bill's attention was diverted.
Trembling unexpectedly, Tom had tucked himself into a secluded spot between the colonnades of another building as he examined his reactions. Overwhelmed as he'd been by the mere sight of Bill, he'd decided to take a more cautious, surveillance-type approach. He'd never been hit by such an aggressive, instant response to anyone before. He wasn't sure what it meant. He needed to be in control of himself, to know his own reactions for once they were face to face.
THIS PART - how hard it must have been for Tom, how confusing! This NEED is so unexplainable, it's beyond needing to reconnect with a missing twin.
It's the possession aspect calling out to him- this is my mate. THIS is my mate and the distance between him and I must dissipate. I need him.
A contact shock sparked through Bill, strong and hard enough to curl his fingers tighter around Tom's wrist as it coursed up his arm. Bill's mouth dropped open and he unclenched his fingers from the touch of Tom's skin, holding his hand protectively to his chest as Tom stared back at him, his face unreadable.
Tom knows, he can feel it, but Bill is taken aback because he doesn't know.
Everything, his inner voice corrected, Tom is everything.
*melts* How magical that his thoughts mirror Tom's own in the previous part, in which Tom thought of Bill as EVERYTHING.
It's happening!
The connection is starting to coil itself around them, bringing them back together again!
"Seventeen," Tom replied coolly, and slid his hands from Bill's hips to his waist, reeling him even closer. "Same as you."
The words were like a warning. Bill clutched at Tom's shoulders and struggled with deja vu. I know you, he almost said, but that was crazy.
*bites nails* Oh sweet Bill, you are so close. So close to finding the truth. It's in Tom's eyes, his touch, his words, his entire presence.
"Fuck me," Bill said, shaken. He couldn't remember someone going that far for him before. Offers of dinner, sure, that Bill usually turned down after he'd gotten what he wanted.
"Oh, I'm gonna fuck you," Tom spoke directly into Bill's ear as they tumbled out the front door of the club. He hauled Bill in close to his side with a firm grip on his ass.
Bill groaned, stretching luxuriantly against Tom. "Yes, yes please," he breathed back.
UNFFFFFFFFF! *passes out from just a small preview of the sexy* One short honk broke their feverish kiss and Tom's head lifted, lips parting from Bill's with reluctance, tongue giving one last swipe against the roof of Bill's mouth. "I'm going to kill him," Tom muttered absently, one hand clenching on Bill's buttock.
I hear you, Tom. I WANT you to kill him. Look at what this bastard took from you, look at how even when he tried to hard, just one touch is enough to start the sequence of events that will ultimately bring down that bastard's whole empire.
LOOK AT IT JORG. LOOK AT YOUR FEAR GROWING RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU. THE TWINS YOU TRIED TO SEPARATE ARE ALREADY NO MATCH FOR WHAT YOU'VE UNLEASHED IN THEM. FEAR THEM, YOU SONOFABITCH AND I HOPE YOU QUAKE AND BURN WHERE YOU STAND. Tom's mouth quirked. "We should get back to your place as fast as possible, Bill, so that I can fuck you." Bill shivered and a huge, delighted grin broke across his features.
HA!
This is the dawning of the age of property damage, for the motherfucking WIN!
ONWARDS TO THREEEEEEEE!
Author's Response: That is Bill's dream boy for sure! He's finally LIVING. And Tom knows he's found his missing piece. Tom was definitely confused by the other urges, though! The mating urge. He needs every part of him!
Bill is definitely taken aback because he doesn't know - and yet part of him does. It's instinct! And I definitely wanted their thoughts to mirror, in thinking each other is their everything. ♥
They're not just sexy, they're perfect together. ._.As for Jorg...I think when he realized they were together, he must have known. Thank you so so much for the love you give these boys.
Date: 02/13/11 10:38 pm Title: World Apart
Both babies quieted instantly, their screwed-up eyes relaxing, faces unclenching as they breathed through their mouths in soft exhausted little pants. Their eyes were open and they looked into one another's faces, silent now. A superstitious shudder gripped Jorg.
First look at the baby twins and that simple image is enough to make me attached to them as quickly as Simone.
And yes, fear them, you sonofabitch. They'll be your downfall and I will dance on your grave after they piss on it.
He stood over the cradle a moment longer, looking down at the sleeping boys. Even in slumber they curled around one another. Tom, as they'd taken to calling the elder, had one fist snared on the pajama back of his younger twin, whom they called Bill. The boys were cuddled up face to face and Bill's nose was buried against Tom's neck. In only their first year of development they were already oriented on one another to the exclusion of Simone or Jorg, something that disturbed Jorg as it seemed to delight Simone. When Bill cried, only placing Tom beside him could quiet him. When Tom went crawling around the house, he never went anyplace he couldn't see Bill. They babbled together in a language that was neither human nor demon tongue but even at their very young age seemed to understand one another.
HOW? How can a father do this? His sons are born to be together, and yes, born to each other! Look even there how close they are and he's about to break that bond.
“That's it, then,” Jorg murmured softly, reaching into the cradle and stroking at the soft fine white-blond down that covered Bill's head. He'd made his decision, and hadn't expected to feel this pang of regret. For the good of his House, this had to be done, and sooner was best.
Tom's face scrunched up in distress and Bill began to whimper in the cradle at once. Jorg didn't bother with shushing either child. He tucked Tom into the sling across his chest and made all haste as he departed Simone's house and then New York City for good.
When Tom woke, he cried for a year.
;_________;
I can't even....
Tom, as they'd taken to calling the elder, had one fist snared on the pajama back of his younger twin, whom they called Bill. The boys were cuddled up face to face and Bill's nose was buried against Tom's neck. In only their first year of development they were already oriented on one another to the exclusion of Simone or Jorg, something that disturbed Jorg as it seemed to delight Simone. When Bill cried, only placing Tom beside him could quiet him. When Tom went crawling around the house, he never went anyplace he couldn't see Bill. They babbled together in a language that was neither human nor demon tongue but even at their very young age seemed to understand one another.
This is why I love them. THIS is who they are.
"This is me," Bill said simply, looking up into her eyes.
The teacher felt a cold finger rake down the back of her neck as she looked down into Bill's warm brown crimson-pupiled eyes. "All right," she said, and hastily moved down the line of students, deciding not to press the issue.
Bill looked down at his drawing again. "Me as I should be," he whispered to his tablet, and picked up a blue crayon-stick to apply vibrant color to the sky.
My heart breaks for Bill in this part. He senses Tom already as someone that's a part of him and i want to pick him up and take him to his twin RIGHT NOW!
"What are you doing?" he demanded, more harshly than finding Tom idle would merit. He found himself increasingly unable to contain a temper fueled with frustration. He seized his eight-year old son's arm and shook him.
Tom's head craned and he looked up over his shoulder, his brown eyes glittering and his full mouth pressed to a taut line. "Waiting for him," he said simply, as though Jorg had lost all reason to question him in such a way.
Jorg shook his son by the arm even harder, all but dislodging Tom from his seat on the blocky stone pillar. "Waiting for whom? That's ridiculous!"
Tom's fair brow creased and he bent his head until his golden-blond hair flopped down over his eyes. "I don't know," he replied, sounding angry about it. "But I've been missing him since forever."
Toooooooom, gosh, where to even start with you? You've known he's been taken from you since you were a baby and have never stopped craving/needing him in your life. He's been always meant to be yours and your father so callously took you from him.
Bill dreamed of a boy with his face, sturdy limbs and solemn eyes. “Tomi,” he greeted the boy, raising a hand to reach out for him, a movement that the boy copied exactly.
“Bill,” the boy answered, wrenching sorrow in his voice. “I miss you.”
When Bill woke, there were tears on his face that he scrubbed away with the back of his hand. He hated the dream because it left him hollow and wanting, but every time he saw the boy it was a pained kind of relief.
I SWEAR BILL, IF IT'S WITHIN MY GRASP TO BRING YOU TO TOM, I WOULD IN THAT SECOND TO SPARE YOU THIS LONGING AND THIS WRENCHING PAIN!
;__; I feel it too and I don't have a twin!
"Tell me who he is," Tom said at last, low and insistent. He'd woken from another dream the night before with a name on his lips and the most wrenching sensation. Half his soul had been torn away and he was nothing but a ghost during the daylight hours. In his twelve years, Tom hadn't been able to figure it out for himself – where his missing half was. This was the first time a name had followed him into waking, though.
Rot in the hell you came from, Jorg. YOU BASTARD!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS???
Tom rolled his eyes. Pointless question. “I'm going to find Bill, of course.”
No matter how long it took him, no matter how far.
Before dawn had broken, Tom had departed House Kaulitz.
And so the quest begins and I am ignoring all the facts I already know, just so I can re-discover Tom's journey to find his Bill.
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I can't even... thank you enough! I'm so happy you're loving this so much and so emotionally invested. *glowing*
Date: 01/28/11 04:39 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
as usual, i dont know why i waited so long to read this. everything your write is so superior to most of whats out there. I'm glad I can move right on to the next story. =)
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you're reading it now! :D And there's already two installments done, thanks for reading. ♥
Date: 10/26/10 07:20 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
omg why the hell did I wait so long to read this? Its shameless shameless porn WITH awesome plot, well, kinda pre plot, but its great!!! omg I think I might blow off my english class today just to read the sequel, seriously, theres a tornado warning out until noon where I am today and I dont wanna get on the bus so between the two I think its a good enough reason to skip. anyway loved it, I nearly died at chapter three, I printed it out cause I had sit and wait stuff to do, it didnt reslize it was 18 pages of nothing but sex...so embarassing luckily no one noticed. great work dear
Author's Response: Lol haha it's got a little bit of plot. >_> Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 10/23/10 05:54 am Title: Ka-Boom Ka-Boom
....mmm
Author's Response: Yay. :D
I'm on 12/14 so hopefully more Nephilim twins soon.
Date: 10/23/10 04:09 am Title: Voodoo Child
um, i know i have updated stories to read, and updates to write, but....this is too hot and im so in the mood for some sexy nephilim twin time *gets out sinful chocolate pudding* this is exactly what i need.
Author's Response: Woohoo! :3 I'm really glad to hear it.
Date: 09/06/10 01:08 am Title: Wilkommen im Hotel
on to the sequel! loved this so much :3
Author's Response: So hope you enjoy it! ♥ Thank you. :)